Misunderstanding范文.doc

精修范文1：

Assignment directions:

An Incident of Misunderstanding
Think about an incident of misunderstanding between you and your parents. Write a story about the experience and tell what happened. Give a logical order or sequence to the events. Include interesting details and concrete words. In your conclusion, write about how your experience helped you understand your parents, yourself, or a situation.

A Story of Generation Gap
With the development of the 删除 the
society, generation gap becomes much more obvious especially between parents and children. There is a lack of understanding between parents and children. While删除
parents can not approve of what their children want to say and do, Thus, a big generation gap is formed. I everhave
had an experience about it.
（第一段开门见山，点出了文章的主题“generation gap“，并且指出了原因。最后一句为下文的故事叙述做了铺垫。）
A few years ago, when I was 14 years old, I was fond of beautiful clothes at that time, so I always went to clothes shop to try on all kinds of clothes. OnOne
day in summer, I selected a beautiful skirt which I was very likeliked very much
, but it was very expensive. On my way to删去
home, I thought whether加入no matter
my mother agree or not, I must buy that skirt. When I got home, I directly walked to my mother and immediately told her that I had a strong disire desire
to buy a skirt. My mother asked me: “A skirt? How much is it?" I answered: “It costs 100 yuan." My mother kept silent for a while, then加入and
I beginedbegan
to angrily ask my mother: “Why aredo
not you let me buy that skirt? I like it so much!" At the same time, I am crying loudly as if losing my favorite toys.  I ran to my room and locked the door.Afther that, I am not talk with my mother for a long time.
（第二段故事叙述比较清楚，词汇和句式也较丰富，只是有一些语法错误。）
With growing up, I know that how naive am II am
at that moment, 应为句号
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sorry to my mother. If I were at that time now, I would be删除
peacefully tell my mother what I want to do. What is more, I know that I need to communicate with my mother always and that we should open our hearts and try to understand each other. In addition, I ought to change my mother and learn to talk with others peacefully and gently. I hope that I will be删除
have a better relationship with my parents
Zhang yingyuan
（第三段着重描述自己的感悟和从中吸取的经验，是全文出彩点，也较好的呼应了开头。）

评语：
本文严格按照写作主题和要求展开，内容充实，叙事清晰，词汇和句型丰富，很好！希望今后尽量避免一些不必要的语法错误，因为这会影响读者对你文章的整体印象。

精修范文2：
An Incident of Misunderstanding (薛媛媛小组)
Being a junior student, I was stubborn and rebellious and felt that everything was in my way. Because of my brother's dropping out of school, my father expected so much of me and thus he always told me that I should study hard , which made me angry and aggressive. I could not endure any more and the last straw was when we were all at table, father repeated the same words again. Then, I could not help quarrelling with him and saying many disrespectful words. Finally, I rushed out of the room with a violent slam of the door. Going nowhere, I had nowhere to go. Thus, by the time the dark fell, I went home. Mother told me that Father didn't eat at all and even cried like a little baby when I was left. Today, as a university freshman, recalling what had happened, I feel so sorry. I

精修范文3：
(姜文于小组)
After the College Entrance Examination, I really felt tired and anxious and worried what grade I would face. During that time, I couldn't sleep and eat well day and night. Gradually, I became speechless. Whenever my parents and others asked me something about my examination, I always said few words or nothing. As a result, they have to leave.
One day, my father asked me what grade I would get possibly. I still kept silent as usual. Then he became angry with my response and scolded me for my impoliteness. Suddenly, I burst into tears and spoke out what I feared and how exhausted I felt. After my father learnt of my explanation, he apologized to me for what he had done. Eventually, we restored good relations again.
From then on, no matter what they asked me, I will tell my parents what I am thinking about and what I want to do, because I know they love and care about me all the way. However, now more and more children are unwilling to communicate with their parents and they suppose it is generation gap that prevents them to communicate with one other. If we simply say nothing, they will be anxious about us.

参考范文1：
A Misunderstanding between my Mother and Me
We can see that many children claim that their parents can't understand them. It is difficult to communicate with their parents. In fact, the misunderstanding exists in every family.
One time when I was in junior school, I gave my mother the examination paper which I got a good mark, expecting to hear the praise from her. However, she saw it carefully and then fixed her eyes on the mistakes I made. She pointed at the mistakes and said, "Look at this question; it reflects how careless you are." You can't imagine how depressed I was. Because I felt that I wasn't be acknowledged by my mother. This reminded me of the same incident I have met in the past. Tears filled my eyes; I yelled at my mother, "Shut up, no matter how well I do, you just find the weakness. I can't stand it." I run out of the room, leaving her alone with astonished. After that day, my mother had a long talk with me. She said, "I'm delighted to see what you have achieved. But I just hope that you can do better." Hearing her words, I held my mother tightly.
     From this misunderstanding, I come to realize my mother's deep love for me. She chooses to point out my weakness, sometimes even hurt me. It is not because she doesn't love me, but give me the courage to do better.
Hua Lijia
参考范文1：
Never hurt your parents
It is not uncommon to hear "generation gap" between children and parents. In my opinion, lots of incidents arise from misunderstanding. Of course, I also have some incidents with my parents. Now let me to share you one of the stories.
In the past, I enjoyed watching TV while doing my homework. It's a usual day, I was writing my homework while watching TV. This time my mother came in, she looked very angry. She turned off the TV after shouting at me. In my memory, my mother was a very friendly woman. She by no means talked to me so loudly. I could not accept it.So I cried loudly and locked myself in my room. Maybe my mother was over angry. She didn't care my crying, which made me crazy. I rushed out my room and said that I hated her. At the same time, I saw the tears falling from my mother's eyes. I felt very sorry for my wrong words. I hugged my mother in my arms and said sorry to her. After a few minutes, my mother said that maybe she used a wrong way but she really wanted me to change my bad habit.  I could also felt my mother's sorrow though she tried to smile to me. I promised that I didn't do that later. Mother said that she loved me and believed me. With my mother's help, I changed this bad habit finally. I really thanks my mother.  
From this experience, I learn that some words can't be said to your parents. Because they must be the people who will love you with no self-heart. Sometimes, you say some words unconsciously may hurt your parents deeply. You can never hurt your parents.
Liang Xiaomei