【英语】考前30天：高考英语作文满分必备(2)非常有用.doc

高考英语作文满分必备

策略指导：长句有风险，使用需谨慎。高级句型：如何表达重要性热点作文：光盘行动，减少浪费
　　◎策略指导
　　有些学生喜欢卖弄一些高级词汇和复杂结构，误以为高级词汇和复杂结构越多，作文就会显得越有档次。于是在写作文时，就一门心思地堆砌辞藻，刻意制造复杂句，把简单的问题复杂化，结果弄巧成拙，不是造成行文晦涩难懂，就是有故意炫耀之嫌，给阅卷老师留下班门弄斧的坏印象。在追求高级词汇和复杂结构的过程中，存在的主要问题有：
　　1．吃不透高级词汇的用法。
中文大意
“光盘运动”倡导人们用餐时吃光盘中的所有食物，不要浪费。
不当表达
The campaign advocates people to eat up the food when having meals
简单表达
The campaign calls on people to eat up the food when...
The campaign publicly asks people to eat up the food when...
高级表达
The campaign appeals to people to eat up the food when...
The campaign advocates that people should eat up the food when….
　　Advocate是高级词汇，但是它后接名词、动名词或从句，很少后接动词不定式的复合结构。当表示提倡某人做某事时，我们可以使用以下结构：call on someone to do…或appeal to someone to do…，在考试中，我们宁缺毋滥，宁愿舍弃高级表达，也要确保正确，减少犯错误的几率
　　2．表达高级，但词不达意。
中文大意
令人高兴的是，浪费现象正在变得越来越少。
不当表达
What is rewarding is that waste is terribly reduced.
简单表达
We’re glad to find that the less food is being wasted at the table.
高级表达
People’s awareness has been greatly raised to stop food from being wasted.
　　写作的主要目的是为了表达意思，在于沟通，而不是唬人，没有必要“为了复杂而复杂”，我们要根据表达内容和实际行文的需要，恰当使用英语词汇和结构，准确无误地表达出我们的所思所想。在上面表格中的三种表达中，“不当表达” 不知所云，已经背离了中文意思，变成了：有回报的事情是垃圾废物被大大减少。
　　3．句子越长，越容易失控。
中文大意
针对随意浪费食物的现状，发起了光盘运用，提醒人们珍惜粮食。
不当表达
Faced with the situation that many Chinese people waste food at random, the campaign is launched to raise people’s awareness of treasuring food.
简单表达
Much food is being wasted in China. In order to improve the situation, the government has launched the campaign to raise ...
复杂表达
Faced with the situation that many Chinese people waste food, the government has launched the campaign to raise people’s …
　　长句有风险，使用需谨慎。句子越长，结构越复杂，表达就越容易失控。中学生驾驭长句的能力有限，如果达不到一定的火候，就容易犯错误。在上面的“不当表达”中，faced with与句子的主语没有逻辑主谓关系。我的个人建议是，没有金刚钻别揽瓷器活，如果没有十足驾驭长句的把握，倒不如把长句拆分几个短句，也可以去收到异曲同工之妙。
　　◎高级句型
　　在作文中，我们经常要描述事物的特征，其中，重要性就是一个主要的方面。现在，我们就来总结一下，看一看到底有多少高级结构来表达事物的重要性。
简单表达
高级表达
Education is important.
Education is of much importance.
The work he does is important.
The work he does is absolutely vital.
A good diet is important for us.
A good diet is essential for everyone.
Education is important to our future.
Education is critical to our future.
Money is the only thing that’s important to him.
Money is the only thing that matters to him.
First impressions are very important.
First impressions really do count.
Parents are important in children’s learning
Parents play an important role in children’s learning.
Children’s education is very important for Chinese parents.
Chinese parents attach much importance to children’s education.

　　◎热点话题
　　【213年高考热门话题：光盘行动】
　　为了减少舌尖上的浪费，许多城市发起了“光盘行动”，倡导人们在日常生活中要注意节约粮食，就餐时，要吃光盘中的饭菜。你的笔友Lily想了解一些关于“光盘行动”的情况，请阅读下面信件，根据要求写一封回信。
　　Dear David，
　　Five years have passed by since we last met in Nanjing．A campaign called Clearing Your Plate is reported to be very popular throughout many big cities in China．It sounds very interesting. Could you please tell me what Clearing Your Plate exactly means？Why do people launch the campaign？And how is it going in your city？Besides，I'd like to know your opinion about it．
　　Looking forward to your reply．
　　Best wishes，
　　Yours truly
　　Lily
　　【学生习作】
　　Dear Lily,
　　Very glad to hear from you. As for the campaign call Clearing Your Plate, it advocates that people should eat up all the food in their dishes when having meals, aimed at building an environmentally-friendly society.
　　The campaign is launched for several reasons. Firstly, while eating out in restaurants, we tend to order more food than they actually need, which leads to much waste and has aroused much concern. Secondly, with the saved food, we can help those starving people who live in poor areas. Besides, saving food is a traditional Chinese virtue we should never forget.
　　In our city, people come to realize the importance of saving food. In restaurants, people order the food based on their needs and take away the leftovers. In the school canteens, less food is thrown away in the food waste collector. Local government officials stop having meals in expensive restaurants for no good reason.
　　Personally, I’m strongly in favor of the campaign. We should save not only food but also other valuable resources like water and electricity.
　　Yours truly
　　 Lily