高中英语书面表达之道歉信专题名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,第1页,Dear John,I am very sorry to tell you that I,am,unable to go to your party this Sunday.It is very kind,of,you to invite me to your house.,I really look forward to,going,to your party and sharing your happy experiences abroad.Much to my regret,I will be absent from your party because the final exam is just,around,the corner.Whats,worse,I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not,myself,.,Anyway,we will have,many,more chances to get together.I am,truly,sorry.I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apology.,I am looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,第2页,写作,三步曲,表示歉意,说明详细原因、提出补救方法,再次致歉，希望得到了解。,第3页,书面表示,假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语提议。但因为一些原因不能赴约，特写信表示歉意，并希望另约时间。内容以下：,（1）.表示未能赴约歉意,（2）.未能赴约原因,（3）.希望另约时间,要求：100字左右,开头已给出，不计总数,第4页,惯用语块,因某事向某人道歉,_,2.,因某事,向某人说对不起,_,3.,接收我真诚道歉,_,4.,为某事原谅某人,_,5.,并非有意做某事,_,have no intention to do sth.,apologize to sb.for sth./,make an apology to sb.for sth.,say sorry to sb.for sth.,accept my sincere apology,forgive sb.for sth.,第5页,6.,填补；赔偿,_,7.,赔偿；偿还,_,8.,给你带来不便,_,9.,给你带来许多麻烦,_,10.,愈加小心,_,be more careful,make up for,pay for/compensate for,cause you inconvenience,cause you much trouble,第6页,11.,犯这么愚蠢错误,_,12.,应该受到责备,_,13.,负担责任,_,14.,难以接收后果,_,15.,下不为例,_,16.,定约会,_,never let it happen again,make such a stupid mistake,be to blame,be responsible for/shoulder/undertake the responsibility,an unacceptable result/consequence,make an appointment,第7页,套用句式,我写这封信是因,向你致歉。,2.,请接收我真诚道歉。,3.,对于我说话,/,做事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非有意要,1.I am writing this letter to apologize to you for,I am writing to express my sincere apology for.,2.Please accept my sincere apology(for).,3.I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did,but please believe I had no intention to,第8页,4.,我真心希望你能了解我处境,/,设身处地地为我考虑，并接收我道歉。,5.,对于造成不便我再次表示歉意。,5.Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.,4.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my,apology.,第9页,6.,错过了,.,机会，我感到非常遗憾。,I am terribly sorry for missing the chance of.,我写信是向你表示抱歉,因为我错过了参加你毕业仪式机会,.,I am writing to express my sincere apology for missing,the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.,7.,我真心希望我们能够再找一个时间,.,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for.,对于造成不便我再次表示歉意。,我真心希望我们能够,再找一个时间去北京旅行。,Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for a trip,to Beijing.,第10页,书面表示,假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语提议。但因为一些原因不能赴约，特写信表示歉意，并希望另约时间。内容以下：,（1）.表示未能赴约歉意,（2）.未能赴约原因,（3）.希望另约时间,要求：100字左右,开头已给出，不计总数,第11页,1.,文体：,2.,写作对象：,4.,时态：,5.,写作关键点：,6.,语言格调：,电子邮件,三大关键点按照次序写；开头部分,也要包含进去。,现在时,&,过去式,外教,Smith,语言简练；,道歉语气诚恳；,礼貌得体。,审题,第12页,Beginning,1.,表示未能赴约歉意；,2.,开头部分内容。,Im writing to express my sincere apology for missing our appointment at 3 oclock yesterday afternoon,when,you planned/intended to give me advice on how to learn English well.,Im writing to express my sincere apology for you.,We made an appointment at 3 oclock yesterday,afternoon.And you planned to give me advice on,how to learn English well.,第13页,Body,未能赴约原因,:,look after a family member;,do a good deed;,get a bad cold;,pick sb.up at the airport,How to expand?,words and expression?,sentence patterns?,detail information?,第14页,Body,未能赴约原因,1.,我叔叔从美国回来,3:00,时下飞机。然而，我父亲妈妈没时间去接，所以我不得不去机场接他。,2.,我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照料自己，而父亲妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照料妹妹。,3.,在去见,Smith,路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到医院,4.,本人生病，医生提议我呆在家里，好好休息。,第15页,未能赴约原因：,1.,我叔叔从美国回来,2:30,时下飞机。然而，我父亲妈妈没时间去接，所以我不得不去机场接他。,Yesterday afternoon,my uncle came from America and got off at 2:30,but my parents had no time to pick him up,in which case,I had to meet him at the airport.After that it was too late to meet you.Thus I missed our appointment.,第16页,2.,我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照料自己，而父亲妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照料妹妹。,My younger sister had a bad fever.She is too young to look after herself,and my parents were at work.,In that case,I had to stay at home to take care of her,which,caused me unable to meet you as appointed.,第17页,趁热打铁,4.,在去见,Smith,路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到医院,On my way to your office,I happened to see a car accident.An old man was badly injured,but nobody came to offer help.So I stopped a taxi and sent him to a nearby hospital.I stayed there for several hours until his son came,which caused me to miss our appointment.,5.,本人生病，医生提议我呆在家里，好好休息。,I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself.For my healths sake,the doctor advised me to,stay at home to have a rest.,第18页,Ending,希望另约时间,I hope you can give me another chance to make an appointment with you again.,I will appreciate it if you can give me another chance to meet me.,Hope you can forgive me and give me another chance to meet me.,Would you mind if I change the appointment time?,Once again,please accept my sincere apology.,第19页,Dear Mr Smith,Im writing to beg you to excuse me for missing our appointment on 3 yesterday afternoon,which you intended to give me advice on English learning.Im sorry for the inconvenience it caused to you.,You may be willing to accept an explanation.However,I dont want you to misunderstand me.On my way to your office,I happen to see a car accident.The old man was bad injured,but nobody came to offer help.So I stopped a taxi and sent her to a nearby hospital.I stayed there for several hour until his son came,and that caused me to miss our appointment.,I am aware that our appointment is great importance.I do hope it that you would be kind enough to spare your valuable time to meet me again.,Looking forward to hearing from you.,Yours,Li Hua,_,at,_,when,_,unwilling,_,happened,_,An,_,badly,_,him,_,hours,of,第20页,Dear Mr Smith,Im writing to express my sincere apology for missing our appointment at 3 oclock yesterday afternoon,when you intended to give me advice on how to learn English well.,It is very kind of you to help me with English and,I really look forward to meeting.However,on my way to your office,I happened to see a car accident.An old man was badly injured,but nobody came to offer help.So I stopped a taxi and sent him to a nearby hospital.I stayed there for several hours until his son came,which caused me to miss our appointment.,I do hope that you would be kind enough to spare your valuable time to meet me again.Once again,please accept my sincere apology.,Looking forward to hearing from you.,Yours,Li Hua,第21页,