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题目如下：

Some people say that the best way to improve the public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

正文内容：

A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend. One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle.

Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time. If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening. The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.

However, there may be better ways of tackling this problem. Interest in sport is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not those who most need them. Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local council has done. This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.

As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health. Even improving public transport would help: it takes longer to walk to the bus stop than to the car.

In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results. People should be encouraged not only to be more physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.

构思解析

范文首先在开头部分做了简单重述。在正文第二段，考官从现实出发，讲明现代社会，运动已经不再是生活必要部分，以及我们生活中花了较多时间保持坐着状态的主要的情况。以假设论证方法切入，指明如果有方便的运动设施我们则有很大可能性走出去而不是坐在电脑前。并且强调运动设施能够符合各个年龄层和不同爱好的要求，然后辅助举例说明比如我们可以选择我们喜欢的游泳项目而不是痛苦的足球项目。该段在论证逻辑上层层递进，严谨而有条理。且援引证据有足够的说服力。

而在正文第三段的反论部分，首先提出最大的问题是并不是所有人对运动都是感兴趣的，运动设施的设立可能导致的结局是吸引的是本身热爱运动的人，对于不爱运动的部分则没有强制性。接着表明事实上，安装器材鼓励效果是比较弱的，并且可能变成家庭成员间的娱乐互动。此处考官文章中表示这额外能提高孩子对运动的积极态度，笔者认为此句非常影响本段方面论述的立意，对该段论证没有积极支持效果，算是全文唯一的败笔部分。

接下去主体的第三部分，作者提出了两个其他方案：一是对垃圾食品征收高额税费来减少购买的人，二是在提升公共交通方面做一些调整使得交通线路过程中能迫使人们走更多的路。

全文表意清晰，文风地道，并援引合理佐证，是考生可以仔细参阅分析的一篇好范文。

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