专题9-活动介绍之记叙文和日记、周记写作.docx

专题9活动介绍
记叙文和日记/周记写作
目 录
I记事类记叙文的分类及写法
II Useful expressions
Ⅲ日记写法指导
Ⅲ Useful expressions of daily routines
记叙文
范文1【2009年北京卷改编 】我们班的绿色行动
范文2 【2013年浙江卷】One Thing I’m Proud of
范文3 【2014年北京卷】向学校领导提建议解决自行车存放问题的经过
范文4 【2015年北京模拟】宣传节约用水活动(The World and the Environment, School Life)
日记、周记
范文5【2018年高考真题北京卷第二节】带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的周记
范文6【2013年高考陕西卷】帮助家人做家务（Topical Issues, Daily Routines）
范文7【2020年高考真题全国Ⅱ卷】 农场采摘活动（Topical Issues, Daily Routines）
范文8【2017北京卷第二节】毕业前夕制作毕业纪念视频的周记(School Life)
范文9【2010年北京卷】帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河旅行的周记(Travel and Transport)
体育比赛日记(Entertainment and Sports)
范文10【2013年湖南卷】 参与一次运动比赛的经历
范文11【2015山西省太原高三一模】观看足球赛的日记
Practice Ⅰ介绍参加运动会比赛的经过和感受
Practice Ⅱ【2015南昌二模】观看篮球赛的日记
Practice Ⅲ 【 2020级成都市高三一诊】校园篮球赛短文介绍
第一部分 写法指导
I记事类记叙文的分类及写法
记事类记叙文就是叙述已经经历过的事情，包括故事、通讯报道、日记和周记等，以一般过去时态为主，按事情发生的时间先后来叙述。
记叙文题目一般分为提纲类和图画类两种形式。图画类作文一般是要求考生根据图画叙述一个故事，描写一段经历，报道一个事件，写一篇日记或周记。因此，有可能要求考生根据图画：1.叙述一个成语故事、历史故事、身边同学的故事；2.描述种树的经历、做义工或其他某种有意义的活动的经历；3.报道一次球赛，报道救人、救火、抓小偷之类的好人好事等；写一篇郊游日记，这类作文一般属记叙文。
该类作文的解题思路为：
1. 认真审题。首先要看题目的汉语要求或提示，通常包括审文体、审时态审人称和定写作要点。
2. 看懂图意。理解和分析画面提供的全部信息，将每幅图的内容有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯完整的故事或事件。注意：文字说明和参考词汇对我们理解图画的意思非常有用。若是漫画，一般是针砭时弊和娱乐大众的，要弄清作者的看法，看他是讽刺什么人和什么事的，然后再加以评论。
3. 组织要点。在看懂图画的基础上，在草稿纸上逐条列出要点，以免遗漏。若是几幅图，要列出各图的大意，然后将所列要点用完整地道的英语句子表达出来。
4. 连句成篇。首先，在理清句子之间的关系后选用恰当的关联词语，把句子连接成文。其次，要结合生活经验，适当发挥想象，增加合理细节，使文段衔接自然，行文流畅。文末应尽量加上适当的结束语，以使文章结构完整。

II Useful expressions
1. 在记事类记叙文、媒体报道、日记和周记中，当按事情发展的时间先后顺序描写时，可使用如下词汇或短语：
(1) at first..., 开始 then... 然后, five minutes later..., after that, afterwards后来,
once upon a time, one day, the next day, last Friday, on the morning of April 5, soon,
immediately一……就……, during, at last, in the end, finally, when, while, after, before+句子
Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in order. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors. (陕西高考卷)
(2) Upon arrival, we began to work. 我们一到达就马上开始工作。
(3) Some ... ; some ... ; others... 一些人（做）……一些人（做）……另一些人（做）……
(4) ... were doing... when suddenly sb./sth. did... 当某事正在发生时突然又发生另一事
2.发表议论或表达观点
(1) Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Last but not least, ...
首先……其次……最后但同等重要的是……(列举事实证据)
(2) On one hand, ... on the other hand, ... 一方面……另一方面……(引导相互对立或对照的观点 )
For one thing, … For another thing, …一方面……另一方面……(论证同一方面的观点或意见，表累加)
(3) In my opinion, ... 依我看…… (表达自己的观点)
3.表示感受
amazed 感到惊讶的 amused有趣的、愉快的 annoyed厌烦的 delighted 高兴的 disappointed感到失望的 embarrassed感到尴尬的 puzzled感到困惑的 regretful遗憾的relieved放松的 satisfied感到满意的 ashamed羞愧的 sorrowful悲伤的

I写法指导
日记书写的注意事项
(1)日期、星期一般顶格写在正文之前。可以先写星期，后写年月日，也可以先写年月日，后写星期几。
(2)天气情况应写在日期和星期的同一行稍靠右之处。表示天气情况常用fine, cloudy, rainy, snowy, windy, stormy, sunny等形容词来表示。
(3)正文的内容应该思想健康，积极向上。文章可长可短，开头语应简洁，结尾可适当发表感想。
（4）日记或周记的题材广泛，一般来说要求记录一次意义非凡的事件，例如：宣传节约用水活动、帮助父母做家务、现场或在电视上观看一场比赛、毕业前夕制作毕业纪念视频的过程、一次有意义的旅行、一次有意义的志愿者活动或助人为乐的事件等等。
(5)日记和周记的写作思路：
第一部分，交代事件及发生的时间和场所；
第二部分，描写事件的经过及具体细节；
第三部分，自己的感受及感想。
II Useful expressions of daily routines
1. 房间（Room）
dining room 餐厅 living room 客厅 bedroom卧室 kitchen厨房
study 书房 bathroom 卫生间 toilet洗手间;坐便器 balcony阳台
basement地下室

2. 家具、家电及日常用品（Furniture , household electrical appliances and daily necessities）
sofa沙发 couch长沙发 desk桌子 chair椅子 armchair 扶手椅
cupboard碗柜，碗碟橱柜wardrobe衣柜，衣橱 bookcase书柜 shelf书架 bed 床
bench长凳 drawer 抽屉 switch（机器、电灯等的）开关，电闸lamp灯
fridge/refrigerator 冰箱 fan风扇 air-conditioner 空调 microwave oven微波炉
hair drier电吹风 shave/shaver电动剃须刀 computer 电脑 scanner 扫描仪 printer打印机 plug（电源）擦头 alarm clock 闹钟 rug/carpet地毯 curtain窗帘 blanket毛毯
pillow枕头 quilt被子 bed sheet床单 vase 花瓶 soap肥皂
towel毛巾 mirror镜子 brush刷子 toothbrush牙刷 toothpaste牙膏
plate盘子 bowl碗 spoon汤勺 chopstick筷子 kettle水壶
pot锅 frying pan煎锅

3. 做家务（Doing housework）
tidy up rooms整理房间 clean the room打扫房间 sweep the floor扫地 sweep away rubbish扫去垃圾
wipe擦干净 wipe the table擦桌子 polish擦亮 polish furniture擦家具
polish shoes擦鞋子 wash clothes洗衣服 mop用拖把拖洗；擦，抹 mop the floor拖地板
rag抹布 clean a table with a rag用抹布擦桌子 sew a coat 缝补上衣

4. 日常起居（Daily life指日常生活作息）
get up 起床 get dressed 穿衣 clean one’s face and teeth 洗脸刷牙
have breakfast/lunch/supper 吃早饭/午饭/晚饭 do exercise 锻炼 do housework做家务
do chores做家务 do a laundry洗衣服 go home 回家
go for a walk 散步 walk a dog 遛狗 have a rest休息
watch TV看电视 listen to music 听音乐 have a shower 洗澡
go to bed睡觉 fall asleep 入睡
（1）Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.首先，我把散落在每一间屋子里的书，报纸和其他物品都收起来放好。
scatter vt. 撒；使散开；使分散
put sth. in place 把sth.放好
（2）Then, I wiped the dust off all the furniture. 我清除了所有家具的灰尘。
wipe sth. off someplace 把sth.从某地上清除
1. （3）After that, I swept and mopped the floors. 做完这些之后，我清扫和擦拭了地板。
2. （4）Kids who are expected to do chores at home learn useful basic skills.
3. 参与家务劳动的孩子能够学习到有用的基本技能。
4. 目前的学习情况（Current situation about study）
（1）Since entering Senior Three, I’ve been studying much harder than ever with the purpose of preparing myself for the college entrance examination. 自从进入三年级以后，我一直努力学习，准备高考。
（2）Besides, so many tests do we have to face every day that I feel extremely stressful, even lose sleep sometimes at night. 除此之外，每天都要面对很多考验，以至于我感到极大的压力，有时甚至在晚上会失眠。
（3）What’s more, occupied with my study, I can’t afford any time to take up my hobbies, let alone play computer games as before. 更何况，我还忙于学习，连业余爱好都没有时间，更不用说玩电脑游戏了。
范文1 【2009年北京卷改编 】我们班的绿色行动（The World and the Environment）
假设你是红星中学高三(1）班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班于4月12日去郊区植树。

［写作内容］
以“Green Action in Our Class”为题给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇英文稿，内容包括：
（1）介绍植树活动的全过程；
（2）看到所种的一排排的树，你的心情。
I审题
体裁：记叙文
主体时态：一般过去时
主要人称：我，我们，同学们
写作要点：_______________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
II写作提纲
Para.1 概括介绍基本信息（时间、地点、任务、事件）
Para.2 具体经过
Para.3 感受或评价
III参考范文
Green Action in Our Class
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience that day.
In the morning，we bicycled to the suburb to plant trees，talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival，we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes; some were carrying and planting young trees, while others were watering them. After getting the work done，we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees，and before leaving, we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees，we all had a sense of achievement（成就感）.
We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
Useful expression
a sense of achievement成就感
范文2 【2013年浙江卷】One Thing I’m Proud of
请以 “One Thing I’m Proud of” 为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，记叙一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1.记述事情的经过；2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。
参考范文A
One Thing I’m Proud of
There are many wonderful experiences I am proud of in my life, of which one impresses me most.
One Friday morning, it was freezing cold and I was cycling on my way to school as usual. Suddenly I noticed something lying on the pavement. I stopped, picked it up and found it was a schoolbag. Luckily from the books inside I learned it belongs to Li Hua, a Senior Two student from Class 3. You can imagine how excited Li Hua was when he got back his schoolbag.
Not only did I pick up a schoolbag but also I found the loser. What a pleasant experience! I’m proud of what I have done.
参考范文B
One Thing I’m Proud of
Last Monday, I was walking in the street when I suddenly saw an old man fall off his bicycle. I rushed towards him and saw one of his legs was badly bleeding. Immediately, a crowd gathered around us. I asked one of them to telephone for an ambulance while I applied some first aid, which I had learnt before. I told the man to lie as still as possible and wrapped a cloth around his leg to stop the bleeding. Soon, the ambulance arrived and the medical staff praised me for my excellent actions.
I was very proud to have been able to help someone in an emergency.

Useful expressions
1. I asked one of them to telephone for an ambulance while I applied some first aid, which I had learnt before.
我叫他们中的一个人打电话叫救护车，同时我用以前学过的急救知识采取急救措施。
2. I told the man to lie as still as possible and wrapped a cloth around his leg to stop the bleeding.
我让那个人尽量躺直，并且用布包好他的腿，以便止血。

参考范文C（Sports）
One Thing I’m Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. As is known to all, practice makes perfect, so I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.
It is not the result but the whole process in which I tried my best to fulfill my potential and finally achieve my goals that makes me feel so proud.

Useful expressions
1. As is known to all, practice makes perfect. 众所周知，熟能生巧。
2. It is not the result but the whole process in which I tried my best to fulfill my potential and finally achieve my goals that makes me feel so proud.
此句为强调句，强调主语 “not the result but the whole process in which I tried my best to fulfill my potential and finally achieve my goals ”。
本句译为：在比赛期间我尽自己最大努力释放潜能，并且最终实现了我的目标。所以不是结果而是参与比赛的全过程让我感到如此自豪。

参考范文D (Sports)
One Thing I’m Proud of
There are many wonderful experiences I am proud of in my life, of which one impresses me most.
When I studied in junior 1, there was a sports meeting held by our school .Those days the number of people who signed up for the athletics was on the increase. Everyone has his own advantages and wants to be the ultimate champion. Actually the contest was competitive and dramatic. Fortunately, I performed excellently and scored the highest mark in the final. When the host declared that I was the champion, I rose to my feet, walked to the platform for the prize and meanwhile couldn’t hold back my tears.
I think that it was my trainer’s help and years of hard training that guaranteed my victory(强调句). Whenever I think of it, I always feel proud of this thing.

Useful expressions
1. Those days the number of people who signed up for the athletics was on the increase.
当时报名参加田径运动的选手一直在增加。
2. Fortunately, I performed excellently and scored the highest mark in the final.
幸运的是，我表现得很好，并在决赛中得了最高分。
final n.决赛
3. When the host declared that I was the champion, I rose to my feet, walked to the platform for the prize and meanwhile couldn’t hold back my tears.
当主持人宣布我是冠军时，我站起来走向了领奖台。我简直无法抑制住自己的泪水。
4. I think that it was my trainer’s help and years of hard training that guaranteed my victory.
此句为强调句，强调宾语从句中的主语 “my trainer’s help and years of hard training ”。
本句译为：我认为正是教练的帮助与数年的艰苦训练确保了我的胜利。
范文3 【2014年北京卷】向学校领导提建议解决自行车存放问题的经过
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊"英语园地"写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。
注意：1. 词数不少于 60; 2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Useful expressions
1.be crowded with挤满了
2.only have one entrance只有一个入口
3.put forward some suggestions for solving this problem提出了一些解决问题的建议
4.build two entrances 修了两个进出口
5.take one’s advice采纳某人的建议
6.achieve a good result 有了一个好结果
7.be in and out of the parking place more quickly 更加迅速地进出停车场

参考范文
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. Yesterday, when I went to school and arrived at the parking place, I was surprised. There are too many people.
I had to wait for a long time. So I decided to give some suggestions to our headmaster. After school, my friends and I went to the headmaster’s office and told him what happened . The headmaster was very friendly. He encouraged us to do more good things, so all of us were very happy. In this process, my friends provided me with a lot of information. At last the problem was solved.
I will do my best to make the school better in the future.

范文4【2015年北京模拟】宣传节约用水活动(The World and the Environment, School Life)
假设你是某所中学的学生，3月22日(世界水日)你参加了你班开展的一系列节水宣传活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以日记的形式记录当天的活动内容。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：宣传材料leaflets；危机crisis

March 22, 2015　Thursday Sunny
Today is World Water Day.____________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________

参考范文
March 22, 2015　Thursday Sunny
Today is World Water Day. In the morning, we had a class meeting talking about what to do on this special day. Finally, we reached an agreement and immediately began to make preparations for the afternoon's activities.
At 2：00 pm, we went to the neighboring community to hand out leaflets, calling on people to save water. Around 3 o'clock, the expert we invited made an excellent speech on the current water crisis in China. He talked about the draught in the Southeast and the severe shortage of water in our city. The speech had a strong appeal to all the people present, including me.
After the speech, we had a discussion with our neighbors about various ways of saving water in our daily life. I suggested turning off the tap water immediately after use, and a granny came up with the ideas of reusing the water from kitchen, for example, the water after washing fruits and vegetables can be used to water flowers and so on.
Today, I have had a better understanding of the importance of saving water and really learned a lot about saving water.

Useful expressions
1. have a class meeting 举行班会
2. reach an agreement 达成了一致协议
3. hand out leaflets 分发册子
范文5【2018年高考真题北京卷第二节】带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的周记
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。（满分20分）

Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience Chinese tea culture, which turned out to be extremely meaningful.
On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and procedure of making tea. In order to help them have a better understanding of the whole procedure, I made tea in person. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign st