考向28-书面表达之地点介绍类(全国通用).docx

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考向28 地点介绍类

地点介绍是英语作文说明文的基础类型之一，介绍一个地方通常会涉及地理位置、占地面积、人文历史、文化经济、风景特色等。写作时注意事项：
✓1、时态。一般描述用现在时包括一般现在时、现在完成时等，如涉及历史典故，则用过去时。
✓2、说明顺序。一般从基本情况（地理位置、人口、面积）到延伸内容（政治文化等）。
✓3、避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定背景，避免用it做主语引导，第1句应该具体写出描述的对象，如The Great Wall，Hong Kong等。
篇章结构

地点介绍类书面表达一般由三部分组成：
1. 引入话题 2.详细介绍 3.总括性说明常用词汇

1.  neighbor/border(vt.)
2. be located/situated in坐落在        
3. serve as…充当/用作……        
4.  highly-developed高度发达的        
5. official language官方语言          
6. the third largest city第三大城市         
7. in the intersection of在……的交叉处         
8. on its east lies…东边有……          
9. be rich/abundant in盛产        
常用结构

1. It covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers .
2.It has a small population of over 10 million.
3. Canberra, the capital of Australia, is a beautiful city.
4. The Opera House is well known throughout the world.
5. China has a population of over 1.4 billion.中国有十四亿多人口。
6. China has a very long history of over 5,000 years.中国有五千多年的悠久历史。
7. The area of this school is 6,000 square meters.这个学校占地面积有6000平方米。
8. Yibin is an important transportation center of Sichuan Province, with high-speed rail, expressways, waterways and airlines conveniently available to the city.宜宾是四川省重要的交通枢纽，高铁、高速公路、水路和航空交通都十分便利。
9. Every year the picturesque scenery attracts lots of visitors from home and abroad.每年这如画的风景吸引了国内外很多游客。
10. It is very convenient for you to come to our city. \ The best way to experience… is to take a bus tour. \ It takes … (time) to take a bus from… to…\. … is only a few bus stops from downtown.\. … is within easy reach.
真题典例子

Writing 1（2019·北京卷）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。
注意:
1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。
【解析】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
Writing 2（2017·北京卷）
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,

Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the your along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.  That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】首先，学生要仔细阅读提示：你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。
弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让 他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【点睛】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.高级词汇的使用：highly recommended。连接副词的合理使用：Personally，moreover。
经典变式练

Writing 1假设你是李华，你的家乡将于10月18日到12月18日举办光雾山国际红叶节，你的美国笔友汤姆Tom正在你市某中学做交换生。请给他写封信，邀请他参加红叶节，要点如下：
1.提出邀请并简述原因；
2.红叶节的时间，活动安排以及注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Writing 2假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Mary来信说，她对中国的民间文化很感兴趣并想亲身实地体验，希望你给她推荐一个地方。请你给她回信，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.推荐地方并说明理由；
3.表示欢迎。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim打算国庆假期间来中国旅游，发来邮件请你推荐两个目的地城市，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐城市及理由；2.其他建议。
注意：1.词数在100左右，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行言语连贯。
3.参考词汇：国庆假 the National Day holiday  推荐recommend
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua

Writing 4寒假即将到来，你一定想去某个地方旅游。请以“我最想去的地方”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容：1.谈谈你想去这个地方的理由；
2.你的计划和打算。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The place I want to visit most
The winter vacation is approaching, and it is the best part of the school year for me.
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Writing 5寒假即将到来，你一定想去某个地方旅游。请以“我最想去的地方”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容：1、谈谈你想去这个地方的理由；
2、你的计划和打算。
注意：1、词数：100左右；
2、适当增加细节，行文连贯。
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Writing 6假定你是李华，寒假将至，你的留学生朋友 Jack发邮件向你询问你的寒假计划。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 科学地完成学习任务；
2. 和家人一起过春节；
3. 到某个地方旅游。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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Writing 7假定你叫李华，上周你的英国笔友Arthur来信询问有关你家乡的情况，请给他回信，内容包括：
1.你家乡的地理位置；
2.你家乡的气候、历史和特色食物等；
3.欢迎他参观你的家乡。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Arthur,
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Yours
Li Hua
Writing 8假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信想了解中国新农村的相关信息。请你给他回一封邮件，介绍你的家乡新面貌。内容包括：
1.路面干净，房子美丽，环境优美；
2.更多致富途径，生活水平大大提高；
3.更多农民免费看病，免费治疗。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 9假定你是李华，最近学校向学生们征集校园摄影作品。请学生们在校园里选取一个地方拍摄照片，并附上一篇文字说明，发表在学校校刊上。内容包括：
1. 介绍作品；2. 说明选择该处的理由；3. 你通过作品想表达的期望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing 10《中国国家地理》正在举行征文比赛。请以The Moput Beautiful Place in My Hear为题,用英语写一篇短文参赛。内容包括:
1.地方简介;
2.认为美的原因。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.短文题目已为你写好,不计入总词数。
The Most Beautiful Place in My Heart
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参考答案
1．Dear Tom,
Guangwu Mountain International Red Leaf Festival is coming. I remember you once told me you’d like to see the beautiful red leaves yourself, so I’m writing to invite you to come.
The festival will take place on Guangwu Mountain from October 18th to December 18th. To ensure the guest have the best view of Guangwu Mountain and the red leaves, a Red Leaf Route has been designated by the sponsor. Apart from enjoying the red leaves, there are other activities. Several famous singers have been invited to give a concert to welcome guests from all over the world the first night. Besides, because it rains a lot these days, you are supposed to take some warm clothing.
I sincerely hope you can join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于邀请信。要求考生给美国笔友汤姆Tom写信，邀请他参加将于10月18日到12月18日举办的光雾山国际红叶节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
到来：come → draw near
确保：ensure → make sure
此外：besides → in addition
应该：be supposed to → should
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Several famous singers have been invited to give a concert to welcome guests from all over the world the first night.
拓展句：Several famous singers have been invited to give a concert to welcome guests who come from all over the world the first night.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I remember you once told me you’d like to see the beautiful red leaves yourself, so I’m writing to invite you to come. (运用了省略连词的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, because it rains a lot these days, you are supposed to take some warm clothing. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
2．Dear Mary,
Knowing that you are keen on Chinese folk culture and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend my hometown Beijing. The reasons are as follows.
With a history of over 3000 years, Beijing is not only the national political center, but also the cultural center. Here you can experience the imperial culture in ancient times and Hutong culture in modern times. As the capital city of China, it’s a world-famous tourist attraction with lots of sights to see, which makes it almost a must for foreigners to visit in China.
Look forward to meeting you in Beijing and I would like to be your guide if you like.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Mary回信推荐一个地方，让她亲身实地体验中国的民间文化，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.推荐地方并说明理由；3.表示欢迎。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……喜爱：be keen on→be fond of/be taken with
想要做某事：want to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
旅游景点：tourist attraction→scenic spot
许多：lots of→a number of/a great many
2.句式拓展
使用倒装句
原句：With a history of over 3000 years, Beijing is not only the national political center, but also the cultural center.
拓展句：With a history of over 3000 years, not only is Beijing the national political center, but also it is the cultural center.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on Chinese folk culture and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend my hometown Beijing. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As the capital city of China, it’s a world-famous tourist attraction with lots of sights to see, which makes it almost a must for foreigners to visit in China. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3．Dear Jim,
Glad to know that you’re coming to visit China this approaching National Day holiday, I offer my recommendation.
You may begin from Beijing, our capital city, an ideal place to witness China’s glorious past and everchanging present. It has the richest tourist resources with numerous historical sites and modern complexes. The second destination is Chengdu, a southwestern pearl, home to the cute giant pandas. It has ranked among the most livable cities in China for years, owing to its pleasant environment and leisure lifestyle.
There are various transportation and accommodation services available in both cities so you’d better check online and find the ones that suit you best.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给打算国庆假期间来中国旅游的英国朋友Jim，推荐两个目的地城市，内容包括：1.推荐城