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详细解说道歉文 内容安排1、 开门见山道歉2、 回忆事情经过（简单、清晰）3、 再次道歉并提出解决方案（可以有好几条）4、 问候，祝福例文，Dear , Im writing to you to express my sincere apology on my mistake. 经过 I hope nothing seriously happens because of these ,anyway, I regret so much for my being careless .To solve the trouble, It would be nice if you could come and get it back, or I sent it back by mail . I hope everything goes on well with you everyday.Best wishes, Yours Li Ming 建议（个人）、邀请 （通知适用于公众） 内容安排1、 抒情（表达建议，请求）+描述问题（即背景）2、 原委（原因段）（好的坏的）加长（相当于大作文的第二段第二句）3、 听话的意义不听话的后果4、 表达期待（问候）表达建议方式1、程度强烈版：Its high time that +过去式（表虚拟）2、委婉：it would be my honor if you could be presentwould appreciate if ( )could ( ) 意义：、your presence significance is beyond my word、without (your presence ),(our dinner ) would lose most of its glory .3、（）will shed light on ( ) ,如 your participation would shed light on our campaign activated performance. 表达期待:、 your instant reply would be highly appreciated、 couldnt wait to hear from you now 期待4、only in this way ; can we create a situation in which people dont smoke in public 意义中的1、2、3中选一，再加上 期待4例文 My dear fellows, It is high time that we abandoned the plastic bags. Today, such bags are seriously harming our land and rivers, and most of us have not realized its problem. Using plastic bags will bring negative effects to our life .because most of the pollution is caused by them. Meanwhile, abandoning them will bring numerous advantages with cleaning our environment as just a tiptop of the ice burg. Therefore, the significance of abandoning them is beyond my words. I would appreciate if you could consider my suggestion. Best wishes, The student ( ) 感谢内容安排、 感谢、 原委、 意义（好坏）、 再次感谢 表达感谢的方式：（词和词组）、 appreciate、 grateful、 owe to、 be oblige to 以上都可以+that组成从句，或者： My thanks to you are beyond my wordsWriting a letter can never fully express my thanks to you on 用于再次感谢All what I have said, what I have done, what I have written can express within two words: thank you!感谢信意义部分照搬建议信可用于意义：If it wasnt for you, I would still be in trouble now, your help means a lot to me.抱怨、 表达不满、 过程、 不好的后果（灾难）、 期待与其他文章不同，抱怨文没有专门的收信人称谓。可用1、Madamsir 2、 to whom it may concern 描述（过程）Neither did you meet my demand nor did you provide me any response on this issue.后果： Your neglect has caused anger/discontent in me and the following consequences might be serious 具体后果。 开头： 、 Im writing this letter to express my concernSerious dissatisfaction +on sth.、 This letter contains my complain 3、 It is a little bit regretful / disappointing to see that 不好的事情期待：Your timely reply will be appreciated and if there is anything I can help. Please let me know, plesase keep me aware of all your progress on this matter.推荐和介绍信：（人candidate、书或地方targetplace）内容安排、 表达热切之情、 好处（原因段的方法）、 接近（使用的方法）、 期待热情的表达方式：、 It is my great honor to take this chance to recommend you sth.、 I have the pleasure to be able to recommend you sth.方法（使用）：If there is any further information that you need to know about （主题词）.please feel free to let me know . And I will do all my best to be if help.期待：I would be most grateful if you may consider my recommendation, and if you accept it, I wish pleasure and achievements may follow.求助信=感谢信，只需要在开头前面添加表示求助的内容。、 I am writing this letter in the hope that I can receive some help from you.经过，意义摘要（summarizesummaryabstract）内容安排、 综合描述、 各大部分的主旨、 作者写作的目的、 自己的评论写法：、 the author of this article tries to describe that 文章主题。、 at the beginning of this article, the author gives an example a brief introduction of （主题词）question ,then the author further discuses its causes processtypesexamplesmethodsimpacts, trying to give a reasonable analysis on the issue of （主题词）.、 at last ,the based on the analysis made above ,the author came to the conclusion that （主题词）.评论：From my personal view, I believe doubt that 自己的观点原因。切记：一定不要照搬原文的句子，一定要改编。最佳改编方式：强调句 It is that 申请信=建议信 Im writing this letter to apply for n.job原因:、 After four years expert training and hard working, Im qualified in academies and practices. I have the confidence that I can do a competent job in your company.大作文（200字，20分）一、开头部分（一） if you can conceive what the picture trying to tell ,what is before you is not a picture at all. But merely loneliness, loneliness that have been ignored by many, loneliness that carries weight to all:主题句，以简单句模式（即主谓宾）用12句描述图。（二）the biggest distance is not truth and false but between when truth is before you, yet you fail to embrace it ,when such a picture is before us ,how can anyone dare to neglect what it is telling.主题句，以简单句模式（即主谓宾）用12句描述图。 （三）顾版：A dark night has given us dark eyes ,yet we use them to search for light; A simple picture has described a simple scene, yet we use it to ponder for truth .主题句，以简单句模式（即主谓宾）用12句描述图。（四）莎版 To be, or not to be, it is a question.、 加动词，直接添加，例如：To send children for art courses, or not to do so ,it is a question, a question asked by generations, yet answered in our own ways 主题句，以简单句模式（即主谓宾）用12句描述图。 、 加形容词，改为被动，如：To be naive ,or not to be so,To be blame ,or not to be so,、 加名词，如：To cherish （主题词）.， or not to， （好）To blame （主题词）， or not to,（坏） （五）艾版Why are my eyes frequented with tears? Because my heart is filled with love; why are my heart flooded with（）根据好坏，好的：light，amazement；坏的：doubts，worries,because the picture is filled with （好的：truth，坏的：warning），主题句，以简单句模式（即主谓宾）用12句描述图。（六）奥版：（只限于好的事情）If there is anyone who still doubts the significance of （）,who still wonders what to do ;who still questions the power of （）,the picture above is you answer! 描述，以简单句模式（即主谓宾）用12句描述图。（七）鲁版:As not a single road ever exists before being walked on by many; so not a single person ever progresses before realizing that 主题句，以简单句模式（即主谓宾）用12句描述图。（八）托版（问题版，坏的事）:Happiness are always similar ,yet problems often come in diversities ,with one described in the picture as typical today:主题句（是不好的），以简单句模式（即主谓宾）用12句描述图。（九）对话版，drama，具体参看笔记作文部分第一段示范：A dark night has given us dark eyes, yet we use them to search for light; A simple picture has described a simple scene, yet we use it to ponder for truth: corporation is important today. Two guys are walking together, they are helping each other. Because without anyone, the other is not able to walk. All those scenes picture mirror the significance of our concern.第一段结束部分用问句，以下选一：（看字数）What can be the causes?What accounts for such an argument?第二段 原因段（观点的原因），1、数据，可选择用来编的领域有（sociology, education, psychology, philosophy, legal.实在不行，science, social science ）2、理论3、伦理：主题词setting good example for young was ,is and will be essential tradition for us today.Miss Gao句型：（用于好的，若坏的，全加not）红字的为坏的Setting good example to young, a requirement（reality）which we should confront today; a duty which the public should take（cope） ;a way in which young generation can (not)develop healthy is essential today. the history of our nation has witnessed the deepening process of our understanding on the issue 主题句第二段第二句实践中以下任选两点1、（好坏皆可）主题词setting good examples will bring numerous advantages（disadvantages）with promoting（pubic harmony ）as just a tiptop of an iceberg.坏处：2、主题词 is like opening a Pandora box .3、 (主题词) is too simple ,sometimes naive.好坏间可用while, whereas ,on the contrary ，not.不能自相矛盾肯定比喻:4、（setting good example for young will bring great benefits to children） no less than sunshine will bring benefits to plants .否定比喻:5、（having wrong examples in life will not bring any benefits to children, ）any more than money can bring any happiness以上两种比喻后半部分，即比喻部分都是用肯定句6、省略模式（一定要用被动）: The mental spirit of young man will be raised and with it his achievement7、倒装 if 坏的 could be justified nothing could be further from truth.以上选二第二段第三句（可不要）引子，examples are sufficient in sustaining our point 例子（国家，名人，自编名人），简单句。第四句，虚拟（捆绑第三句）If things had gone in the opposite the situation now wouldnt have been like this.第五句1、强调句在原来的观点句基础上加入例，its a proper example that may bring positive effects to young generation第五句2（在奥版结尾使用）Can we expect a better prospect in our concern? Can we expect a final (terminal ultimate) solution of our worries?第五句3 倒装Frequently we discuss, yet seldom do we perform， Hence never do we catch第三段 方法段（可不要）第一句 打气1、鲁版：not a single road ever exists before being walked on by many2、阅读真题版： although there is still long way to go ,the tide is unable to return.3、布版 :where there is suffering, there is duty .4、哲人版：sometimes in life we are called to do great things ,yet as saint Nightingale has said, everyday we are called to do small things with great love.5、the only thing that does not change is the change itself 6、小罗版： it is not the time to ask what the country can do for you ,but what you can do for your country!7、if you are doing everything, you are doing nothing. 第二句 （以下选二）1、government should play a more positive role to appeal for adults（not）to（） 2、great emphasis should be attached to our education for next generation to make them understand that（）3、sufficient fund should be consistently available to provide for a sustainable solution of current problem.4、public awareness is demanding substantial rise so that people better appreciate the value of （）5、although it is shared by all, it is realized by each. Therefore, individuals are expected to be further involved 6、functional rules and laws should be applied to assure that 主题句7、与奥版开头、奥版结尾捆绑Therefore the answer to our questions is clear and definite: YES, WE CAN主题词和主题句形式：一、名词性:例如，cooperationCooperatingTo cooperate Not-to-cooperate Not-cooperating将名词改为to do的模式例如，自私： to think only about himself (selfishself-centered) 爱国主义：to love your own country(patriotism) 正直：to be honest in business(rectitudeintegrity ) 良心：not to harm others interest(conscience) 守法：to obey （observe）the law （keep the lawabide by the law） 勤奋：to work hard always （diligentassiduousindustrious） 节俭：to save moneynot to waste money(thriftyfrugal) 公德心：to follow public virtues 正义感：sense of justice 团队精神：to help each other二、词组模式: The spirit of n. n. oriented例， 贪财 money oriented（adj.） To be money oriented (n.) Target-oriented = ambitious pop star-oriented 追星 To pursue excellence = excellence-oriented 追求卓越卓越（outstandingbrilliantremarkable）三、 被动模式Being -ed To be -ed 四、最后的救命丸:The right attitude on sth.懒人专用版 Although the picture seems to be simple, the meaning conveyed in it yet contains for reaching implicating to us, especially for todays world. If there is any one who still doubts the significance of (主题词), who still wonders what to do; who still question the significance of (主题词). The picture above is you answer! It is a question asked by generations, yet answered in our own ways, why the issue of (主题词) carry so much weight today? It is highly believed that if we do not follow it in a reasonable way, there might be negative consequences. For example, if a man, especially a young man neglect (主题词) in his daily life, he will lose confidence and in response he will also lose respect from others. How to establish adequate respect and awareness of the public concerning this issue? Firstly and inevitably the government should play a more positive role so that sufficient emphasis can be placed in our education and social respect on it. Further more as long as we have raised our awareness, we also need to apply our understanding of its value in our daily business to maintain and develop our tradition and culture. The only thing does not change is the change itself! In a world flooded with change, chance and challenges today, great significance should be consistently attach to the understanding of (主题词) 。7