英语书面表达之建议信PPT课件.ppt

Welcome to our class!.1.2.3Look at the pictures.Do you think her English is good?If we write a letter to help her,what kind of letter should we write?A letter of thanks B letter of giving advice C letter of application.D letter of invitation.4 书面表达 -A letter of advice.5Introduction：Whats a letter of giving advice?.6建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：1.说明写信目的。（Heading）Purpose of the letter2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。（Body）Giving advice 3.表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复 (Ending)Summing up advice Whats a letter of giving advice?.7完成下列常用语块1.给某人提建议_2.如下_3.在做某事时遇到困难_4.利用 _5.向某人征求意见_6.制订计划_7.认为有用 _8.参加 _9.听从某人的建议_10.把考虑在内_11.得到改善 _12.有所好转 _13.依我看来 _14.我建议 _15.我已收到你的来信，得知你_ask sb.for advicegive sb.some advice(on)as followshave trouble in doing sth.make use oftake sth.into considerationmake a planfindhelpful/useful/beneficialtake part in/participate infollow ones adviceget improvedchange for the betterin my opinion/viewI have received your letter saying that you I would like to suggest that.8常用套语Para 1.（Heading）Purpose of the letter1After reading your letter,I am sorry to know that you are not good at 2I am very glad to hear that you want to3 I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter.4.I am writing to share some advice with you.9Para 2.（Body）Giving advice1.First，Firstly，Secondlythen，after that，not only.but also.；not.but.；besides；in other words；on the one hand.，on the other hand.;finally.2.Youd better do sth.3.It is useful/necessary/important for you to do sth.4.It should be a good idea for you to do5.In my opinion,it would be better if you 6.If I were you,I would.102024/3/18 周一11Para 3.(Ending)Summing up advice 1.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2.I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.12点睛之笔：1.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart!有志者事竟成.2.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧3.Never give up/lose heart.永不放弃！4.If you have any trouble,please turn to me for help.如果有任何问题，可以找我帮忙。5.Only in this way,can you learn English well.只有这样才可以学好英语。These sentences can your composition more excellent!.13 建议信优秀习作欣赏分析：.14Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also make more Chinese friends,who will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes.句为写信的_(想得到如何学好中文的建议)句总起有以下几点 _。句-句则根据题目中所给的_,分别写 ,并适当 添加 _ _,以使文章更丰满。句 写 。目的或原因建议要点四个建议细节(建议的理由)寄望与祝愿.15While writing:Discussing in groups:Supposing the writer asks you to give her some advice on how to improve her English,please discuss in groups of six and give her at least three pieces of advice:Advice 1._Advice 2_Advice 3_Advice 4_.16WritingNow the writer asks you to give her some advice on how to improve her English.Please Write a letter in 5 minutes in groups of 6 according to the model:Dear Zhang Ming,You have asked me for my advice on _,and here I will try to _.In my opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions.Firstly,_ _.I hope _ and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.Yours,Li Hua.17After writing:假如你是李华，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点：焦虑症状如头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等，并对这些症状做出以下建议：1考前制定好合适的复习计划2考试期间正常作息3睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠4.其他建议(内容由自己拟定)注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；3.词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。参考词汇：头晕dizzy(adj.).18Dear editor,Im Li Hua,a Senior Three student from Guangming Middle School.Im writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams._.Yours,Li Hua.192024/3/18 周一20