七年级下册英语作文76265说课材料.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Unit7-9作文评讲课,主讲：谢泽武,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,How to describe your family?,1.外表特征：,外貌与五官,2.内在特征：,性格特征等,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,1.用英文描写人物的,外貌与五官,在描写人时,通常会描写其外貌特征,如:身材,体形,头发(长短,颜色,发型),脸型,肤色,眼睛,衣着,爱好等,但不必面面提到,一般要抓住某人,比较明显的特征,来描述。在描写人的外貌时,用,一般现在时,。,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,(1).描述,身高,常用的形容词有:,tall,short,of medium height,(2).描述,体型,的有:,fat,thin,slim,big,small,of medium build,strong,(3).描述,相貌,的有:,beautiful,pretty,good-looking,ugly,sweet,handsome,funny,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,(4).在用英语描写,面部容貌,的时候，可以从,脸型、头发、五官,入手。,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,脸型（face）,:,round 圆的;thin 瘦的;long 长的;,square 方的,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,(1)发型（hair style）:,straight 直的;curly 卷发的;crew cut 平头;,bald秃头的,(2)发色(hair color):,black 乌黑的;blonde 金黄色的;grey灰色的；,white 白色的,头发（hair）,:,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,(1)眼睛（eyes）:big大的,small小的,(2)鼻子(nose):straight 挺直的;big 大的;small小的；long 长的,五官:,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,kind,nice,friendly,strict,quiet,shy,lazy,smart,二.用英语描述人物的,内在特征,如：,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,Can you find the mistakes?,1.My family have three people.,_,2.There are my parents,my brother and I.,_,3.My father and me very like.,_,4.And my sister,she has a long hair.,_,There are three people in my family.,They are my parents,my brother and I.,I look like my father very much.,And my sister has long hair.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,5.My father is tall,he likes P.E.very much.,_,6.My family is very friendly.,_,7.Let me tell you what do my family look like.,_,8.I very love my family.,_,My father is tall and he likes P.E.very much.,My family are very friendly.,Let me tell you what my family look like.,I love my family very much.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,How to write a composition about describing your family,?,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,Unit7-9书面表达（15分）,某英语报社正在以“My family”为话题征集文章。假如你是张磊，请你根据以下要点写一篇文章向该报社投稿。,要点：,1.How many people are there in your family?,2.What do your family look like?,3.What are they like?,要求：1.语句通顺，逻辑连贯。,2.包括以上要点，60词左右。,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,1.审字数。,注意字数不能过多，也不能太少。如作文要求60词左右，大家最好控制在55-65之间。,2.审写作要求与内容要求。,注意看要求写几方面的内容，理解每一方面的内容要求写什么，确定哪一方面的内容是重点要叙述的。,3.审信息点。,切记不要缺写信息点，也不要过多增加信息点，避免信息点理解错误。,第一，学会审题。,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,第二，增加印象分。,1.段落分明：,一般情况下，作文要有三个段落：Beginning,body and ending。当然有时也可以整合成两段。,2.书写整洁：,作文一般有1-2分的卷面分。,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,第三，如何来写好每一个段落呢？,1.开头段(Beginning):开门见山，直奔主题。,如：,I have/live in a happy family.There are four people in it.They are my parents,my brother and I.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,2.主体部分(Body）：关注三方面。,（1）.使用过渡句。如：,Do you want to know my family?Now let me describe them to you.,（2）.使用连接词。如：,表并列连词and,表转折的but,表选择的or,表原因的because 或者so等等。,（3）.注意标点符号的正确使用。,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,3.结尾段(Ending):首尾呼应，点明主题。如,：,This is my family.I love my family very much.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,Rewrite your composition by yourself.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,I have a happy family.There are four people in my family.Theyre my parents,my brother and I.Now let me describe them to you.My father is tall and thin.He is a little strict and he doesnt talk much.My mother is kind of fat and she is very friendly.My brother is tall and he is of medium build.He is smart and he always helps me with my homework.Im thin with short straight hair.Im a little lazy.,This is my family.I Iove my family very much.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,What do you learn from this lesson?,Summary,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,Homework,1.Copy the composition in your notebook.,2.Recite the composition about describing your family.,Evaluation only.,Created with Aspose.Slides for.NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.,Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.,