高分作文思路及模板.doc

问题解决型写作思路
基本框架
描述问题段
主题句---- 扩展句一（问题危害/原因/表现一）----
扩展句二（问题危害/ 原因/表现二）---结尾句
说明方法段
主题句---- 扩展句一（方法一）---- 扩展句二（方法二）---扩展句三（方法三）----- 结尾句
总结观点段
过渡句--- 扩展句（“我”的建议或看法）--- 结尾句
主题句--- 扩展句一（“我”的理由一）--- 扩展句二（“我”的理由二）--- 结尾句

结构模板
1 Recently, there has been a discussion about 总述该问题。2危害/原因一。 3 Additionally, 问题危害/ 原因二. 4 Therefore, it is high time that 解决该问题。
5 The following ways can be adopted to解决该问题. / Some effective measures have been taken to解决该问题 . / Many a factor plays an important role in解决该问题. 6 Firstly,/First of all, 方法一/因素一。7 Secondly/ In addition, 方法二/因素二。8 Thirdly/ Besides/ Moreover, 方法三/因素三. 9 Only through these ways / Only in this way 该问题才能够解决。
10 It is no doubt that解决该问题的意义. 11 As for me, “我”的建议或看法. 12 总结观点。

结构模板
1 Nowadays it is generally accepted that 总述该问题。2表现/作用一。 3 Additionally, 表现/作用二. 4. Therefore, how to 总述该问题 is worth paying more attention to.
5 The following ways can be adopted to解决该问题. / Some effective measures have been taken to解决该问题 . / Many a factor plays an important role in解决该问题. 6 Firstly,/First of all, 方法一/因素一。7 Secondly/ In addition, 方法二/因素二。8 Thirdly/ Besides/ Moreover, 方法三/因素三.
9 As for me/ As far as I am concerned, “我”的建议或看法. 10 “我”的理由一. 11 Besides/ in addition, “我”的理由二。12 总结观点。

示范作文
Reduce Waste on Campus
1) 目前有些校园内浪费现象严重
2) 浪费的危害
3) 从我做起，杜绝浪费

1 Recently, there has been a discussion about waste on campus. 2 It is obvious that a great loss has been caused by wasting precious resources, such as water and electricity. 3 Additionally, our waste adds our parents and society a burden. 4 Therefore, it is high time that more attention was paid to how to solve this problem. （描述问题段）
5 The following ways can be adopted to reduce waste on campus. 6 Firstly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes and dishes. 7 Secondly, in our daily life, we must learn to be economical and only buy what we really need. 8 Thirdly, we should turn off the light when leaving dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity. 9 Only through these ways can waste on campus be eliminated in the near future. （说明方法段）
10 It is no doubt that reduction of waste is of significance to our whole society. 11 As for me, the cultivation of good habit of thrift is most important for all of us. 12 Every college student should join in the efforts to combat the waste on campus. （总结观点段）

How to Succeed in a Job Interview
1) 面试在求职过程中的作用
2) 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是…

1 It is generally accepted that a job interview is indispensable in the process of job
hunting. 2 It is obvious that it is a good chance to display talented performance. 3 Additionally, if a job seeker can make the best use of the interview and leaves a good impression on the interviewer, he may be lucky enough to get the job competed for by many applicants. 4 Therefore, how to succeed in a job interview is worth paying more attention to. （描述问题段）
5 Many a factor plays an important role in a successful interview. 6 First of all, interviewees should dress neatly and properly since the first impression is always where we start. 7 In addition, the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitude and skills for the job and his knowledge about job-related areas. 8 Moreover, a really impressive job seeker must convey a sense of self-confidence. （说明方法段）
9 As far as I am concerned, the importance of an interview can’t be overemphasized. 10 If the interviewee presents his most attractive qualities during an interview, he will most probably obtain the job he has been dreaming of. 11 Besides, opportunity is for those who are well-prepared. 12 All in all, it is necessary that we learn some points to perform better in a job interview. （总结观点段）

Traffic in the City
1) 交通是现代城市的一大问题
2) 污染和堵车时交通问题的两大体现
3) 解决交通问题的手段
1 Nowadays it is generally accepted that traffic is one of the greatest problems of a modern city. 2 As more
and more people buy their own cars, air pollution as well as noise pollutions becomes more and more serious. 3 Additionally, roads are packed with cars, buses and bicycles so that traffic jam is very common. 4 Therefore, how to deal with traffic problem is worth paying more attention to.
5The following ways can be adopted. 6 Firstly, more streets and roads should be constructed. 7 Secondly, the private car ownership should be limited. 8 Thirdly, underground train and city train should be developed quickly.
9 As for me, the number of private cars should be put under control. 10 More cars mean more pollution. 11 In addition, more cars are a great challenge to roads, for the building of roads is not as speedy as the increasing of cars. 12 In a word, it is advisable that less motor vehicle be used.

How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas
1) 目前假文凭现象屡见不鲜
2) 这种现象造成的危害
3) 我们应该怎么做
1 Nowadays it is generally accepted that the flooding of fake diplomas is getting very serious. 2 It is
reported that fake diplomas are very common in the job market. 3 All kinds of fake diplomas or certificates are being offered.
4 Special attention should be paid to the fact that fake diplomas are bringing great damage. 5 On one hand, employers may recruit employees who are not qualified for a certain post, causing their company a great loss. 6 On the other hand, it’s unfair that one fails to get his job just because his rival has produced a fake diploma or certificate. 7 Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to stop fake diplomas from spreading.
8 Many a way can be adopted to eliminate fake diplomas. 9 First of all, companies and universities should have a close contact so that the fake diplomas cannot play tricks. 10 In addition, the one who fabricates the fake diplomas should be severely punished by law and totally exposed through media. 11 Moreover, we should keep detained records of the diploma holders and issue the diplomas with fake-proof seal. 12 Only through these ways can this problem be tackled.

On a Harmonious Dormitory life
1) 一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性
2) 如何创造和谐的宿舍生活
3) “我”的看法
1 Recently, there has been a discussion about a harmonious dormitory life, which is important to us college students and benefits all the members. 2 In a harmonious environment, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study.3 Additionally, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together. 4 Therefore, it is high time that efforts were driven to boost the harmony in college residences.
5 The following ways can be adopted to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. 6 First of all, we have to evaluate our life style and try to get rid of our bad habits, if there are any. 7 Secondly, when an annoying situation arises , we have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. 8 Thirdly, we should learn to share with each other and make good friends. 9 Only through these ways can we build a harmonious dormitory life.
10 It is no doubt that dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life and no one can ignore it. 11 As for me, consideration for others is an effective solution to conflicts in life. 12 In conclusion, a harmonious dormitory environment plays a positive role in college students’ studies and lives, and we must try our best to keep it well.

现象解释型写作思路
基本框架
描述图表段
主题句---- 扩展句（描述图表数据）---结尾句
说明原因段
主题句---- 扩展句一（原因一）---- 扩展句二（原因二）---扩展句三（原因三）----- 结尾句
总结观点段
主题句--- 扩展句一（影响/问题/理由一）--- 扩展句二（影响/问题/理由二）--- 结尾句

描述现象段
主题句---- 扩展句一（现象表现一）---扩展句二（现象表现二）---结尾句
说明原因段
主题句---- 扩展句一（原因一）---- 扩展句二（原因二）---扩展句三（原因三）----- 结尾句
总结观点段
主题句--- 扩展句一（影响/理由一）--- 扩展句二（影响/理由二）--- 结尾句

结构模板 1
1 From the chart/ graph / table / picture, we clearly learn that 总述现象，which has aroused great / common concern. 1 / According to the chart, it is clear that 图表内容概括. 2 What impresses us most is 图表中重点数据. /2 The chart / graph /table /picture indicates 图表数据一，while 图表数据二.
3 There are many reasons accounting for 现象或变化. / 3 many reasons contribute to 现象概括. 4 First of all/ To begin with, 原因一. 5 What is more/ Moreover, 原因二. 6 In addition/ Besides, 原因三. 7 Therefore/ As a result, 总结原因导致的结果.
8 As to me/ As far as I am concerned, “我”的观点. 9 For one thing / On one hand, 影响/问题/理由一. 10 For another/ On the other hand, 影响/问题/理由二. 11 Thus/ In brief/ To conclude/ In conclusion/ In a word, 总结观点.

结构模板 2
1 总体现象 has been brought into focus. /1 总体现象，which has aroused great concern. 2 现象表现或变化. 3 In addition, 进一步阐述现象。
4 There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. /4 The reasons/ factors 影响该现象 are varied. 5 Among all these reasons/ factors, 原因一plays a very important role .6 阐述原因一. 7 What is more/ Moreover, 原因二. 8 In addition/ Besides, 原因三.
9 As to me/ As far as I am concerned, “我”的观点. 10 For one thing / On one hand, 具体的看法或理由一. 11 For another/ On the other hand, 进一步说明看法/理由二. 12 Thus/ In brief/ To conclude/ In conclusion/ In a word, 总结观点.

Unban Greenbelt Construction
30000
26709.57

25000
21911.93

20000

15000
12917.61

10000

5000

8819.26

9853.26

0 1998 1999 2000 2001 2002
1） 上图所示为1998-2002全国城市绿化资金支出情况，请描述其变化
2） 请说明发生这些变化的原因
3） 你认为这样的变化是否合理，为什么
1 According to the chart, it is clear that the national expenses on Urban Greenbelt
Construction in China from 1998 to 2002 changed a lot. 2 The chart shows in 1998, 8819.23 million RMB was spent on Urban Greenbelt Construction, while by the year 2002, the national expenses on Urban Construction in China had risen to over 26709.57 million RMB. （描述图表）
3 Many reasons contribute to this change. 4 To begin with, the natural environment has become worse than before and the climate has also been affected. 5 Moreover, the government has realized that they can no longer ignore the deterioration of the environment and decided to take some measures. 6 In addition, the public are paying more and more attention to environmental problems. 7 As a result, more and more attention and money are paid to the Urban Greenbelt Construction. （说明原因）
8 As to me, those changes are reasonable and welcome. 9 First of all, if the government does not pay attention tot the changes of environment, they might never spend much money on it. 10 Besides, these changes demonstrate that the government has realized that we have one environment only; if it is ruined, we would be nowhere. 11 To conclude, I have the confidence to believe the environment around us will become better and better. （总结观点）

示范作文
1） 有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师
2） 学生选择教师时所考虑的因素
3） 学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题
Students Selecting Their Lecturers
1 Students’ selecting their lecturers has been brought into focus. 2 Nowadays, many universities entitle their students to choose freely teachers for courses, which is welcomed by most students. 3 In addition, teachers have also paid much attention to it since it involves their career fate. （描述现象）
4 The factors which will influence the students’ choosing a teacher are varied. 5 Among all these factors, a teacher’s professional knowledge and ability play a very important role. 6 That is a precondition for a good teacher since students choose his course to learn knowledge. 7 Moreover, quite a few students think teaching methods and skills are essential. 8 Besides, a teacher’s humor sense is also an important factor many students will consider. （说明原因）
9 As far as I am concerned, free choosing of teachers has its disadvantages as well as its advantages. 10 For one thing, it can provide a good chance for teacher to prove his ability, and give students more initiative in learning. 11 For another, however, since it is a free choice, few excellent teachers will become the focus of most students’ choosing, which will lead to an unreasonable class size and influence teaching effect seriously. 12 In a word, both students and teachers should take this matter into serious consideration. （总结观点）

Income Sources between Chinese Students and American Students

Sources of income
Percentage
of total income
Parents
Part-time job
Fellowship or scholarship
American students
50%
35%
15%
Chinese students
90%
5%
5%

1） 根据上表，简要描述中国学生和美国学生收入来源的不同
2） 请分析导致这种差异的原因
3） 说明自己的观点

Income Sources between Chinese Students and American Students
1 From the table, we clearly learn that there is a great difference between the income sources of Chinese students and those of American students, which has aroused common concern. 2 What impresses us most is Chinese students earn only 5% of their money from part-time jobs and 5% from fellowship or scholarship while American students 35% and 15%. （描述图表段）
3 There are many reasons accounting for this difference. 4 To begin with, different social and family values lead to the difference. 5 That is to say, Chinese students tend to form a habit of asking for money from their parents while American students are likely to form more of a sense of economic independence. 6 Moreover, developed America provides more part-time jobs than China. 7 In addition, Chinese universities do not provide sufficient scholarship while it is quite a different story in American. 8 As a result, the difference follows up. （说明原因段）
9 As to me, this difference concerning the income sources is indicating something necessary to do. 10 For one thing, Chinese students have to realize the necessity of self-dependence. 11 For another, more opportunities should be provided for them to hold part-time jobs. 12 To conclude, it is high time that Chinese students went out of the ivory tower to become more independent. （总结观点段）

The Adaptation of the Classics
1） 近来，许多经典名著被改写成各种版本以供大众娱乐
2） 这种现象产生的原因
3）经典名著被改写可能产生的问题
The Adaptation of the Classics
1 Recently many classics are being adapted in many ways, which has aroused great concern. 2 In those adapted works, all plots are changed and all characters become somewhat watered clown. 3 In addition, some familiar characters expressing the good wishes of our common people have been distorted. （描述现象段）
4 There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. 5 Among all these reasons, readers’ preference plays a very important role. 6 That is a precondition for the market of the adaptation of the classics. 7 What is more, the concept of creativity is prevailing in every aspect. 8 In addition, the improved living standard enables people to pursue and enjoy more choices of entertainments including the adaptations of the classics. （说明原因段）
9 As far as I am concerned, the adaptation of the classics does more harm than good. 10 For one thing, since the classical literature is the representation of the outstanding art of our nation, the act of adapting may ruin its charm. 11 For another, those adapted works will affect children’s outlook on life, who are the future of the nation and always believe what is in the books is