英语六级作文模版市公开课一等奖百校联赛特等奖课件.pptx

text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,*,CET Writing,第1页,校园生活类作文,Campus life,第2页,社会热点话题,Social Focuses,第3页,评分标准,四六级作文和托福作文评分标准是整体式评分,(global scoring,）给出奖励分（,reward scores),，雅思索试评分标准是分项式评分（,analytical scoring,）。因而，四、六级阅卷员会找出一篇作文中,shining sentences/points,而不是寻找错误点。,第4页,Word Processing,评分标准,2,分,一塌糊涂,5,分,糊里糊涂,8,分,马马虎虎,11,分,清清楚楚,14,分,漂漂亮亮,第5页,The Perfect Triple-Decker,Paragraph,破题,自己观点,正反对比,第6页,Opposing Views,对立观点型作文通常在提要中给出两个对立事物或同一事物两个对立面，要求考生进行分析和评论,7,第7页,注意事项,1.,扣住中心词,2.,进行好坏、优劣、正反对比,3.,最终一部分表示自己观点,第8页,OVERALL STRUCTURE,Introduce the topic,Opposing views,Put forward,personal opinions.,Answer Sheet,第9页,Sample Writing,q dsad,Who Should Take Care of the Old,There is no defying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic today that,whether the aged should be taken care of by individuals or by government.,To this,peoples attitudes differ sharply.,some insist that,the government should take the responsibility by building more homes for the elderly.,They think that,the old have been working for the country development and deserve peoples care and respect.,Many others,however,hold that,it is the familys duty to look after its senior members.,They point out that,after a lifetime toil of raising children,the advanced people should be well looked after by their children.,personally,I think both sides have something right.On the one hand,the gray-haired should be supported by their family.Anyone who tries to escape the duty should be blamed.,On the other hand,the government should also give its support by promoting traditional values and funding more programs for the well-beings of its senior people.,第10页,高分模板,It has been a hot topic for a long time whether T.Some people take it for granted that V1.However,others think that V2,Those who hold the former opinion believe that R1.In addition,R2,However,there are still others who advocate the latter opinion because they hold R1.And R2.Whats more,R3.So,(Summarizing V2).,As for me,my favor goes to V1/V2.For one thing PO1.For another PO2.And I hope,第11页,高分模板,With the development of(introduce the topic).Some people think that V1.In their opinion,R1.,However,others hold that V2.They maintain that R1.To their minds,R2.,As far as I am concerned,what really matters is PO.When it comes to I think PO.In a word,第12页,作业,Should Parents Send their Children to Art classes?,Should College Students Hire Cleaners?,Should College Students Get Married?,Certificate Craze,My View on University Ranking,On the Importance of a Name,On Credit Cards,第13页,作业,8 Should Mathematic Olympic Contest be Canceled?,9 Should Organ Donation be Compulsory?,10 Should the University Campus be Open to the Tourist?,11 Salary or Interest,12 Cell Phone,Friend or Foe,13Spring Festival Gala on CCTV,第14页,作业,14 Is Criticism a Bad Thing?,On Household Registration,Should College Students Keep Pets,Should Western Festivals be Observed in China?,Should Parents Send Their Children Study Abroad?,My View on Premarital Agreement,第15页,Sample,It has been a hot topic for a long time whether,the CCTV spring festival Gala should be cancelled,or not,.,Many people take it for granted that,spring festival Gala,the traditional entertainment should be maintained.,However,others reckon that,spring festival Gala should be cancelled.,第16页,Sample,Those people who hold the former opinion believe that,spring festival Gala offers a wonderful opportunity to celebrate this traditional festival,for,Chinese all over the world can share the same happiness and excitement brought by the TV program.,In addition,many performances are very impressive and some can even positively affect our life value.,第17页,Sample,However,there are still others who advocate the latter opinion because,they hold this form of celebration forces people to spend the eve more passively.And the preparation for the Gala consumes excessive time and money.,Whats more,a great proportion of the programs are not attractive enough.,So it is advisable to,cancel it.,第18页,Sample,As for me,my favor goes to the former opinion.,For one thing,CCTV spring festival Gala gives us an option to celebrate this important moment.,For another,it offer a good chance for a family to have a rest happily.,But it is really essential to improve the quality of the programs.And I hope some better forms of celebration will be created in the near future.,第19页,第一段,-,引导文章开头惯用句型,1,recently the issue of _has been brought into public focus.,最近，。问题引发了社会广泛关注,2,recentely the issue of whether or not _has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.,最近是否。问题已经非常明确，而且引发了社会关注。,第20页,3,now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations,and great changes have taken place in peoples attitudes towards some traditional practices.,如今我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新崭新时代，很多人对一些传统看法也发生了很大改变。,第21页,the controversial issue is often brought into public focus,people from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.,这种极具争议话题往往很受社会关注，不一样背景人对他看法也不尽相同。,第22页,5,when it comes to _,most people believe that _;but other people regard _as_.,提到,问题，很多人认为,；不过一些人则认为,.,第23页,第二段：承 惯用句型,some people are of the opinion that_,有些人认为,they hold that _,他们认为,people,who advocate that _have their sound reasons,坚持认为,人也有其依据。,第24页,people who support _give some or all of the following reasons.,那些支持,观点人列出来以下原因：,第25页,第三段 转 惯用句型,but on the other hand,there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that_,however there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.,On the other hand,there are also many opponents who strongly_,第26页,最终一段 合 惯用句型,according to my personality and fondness,I would prefer _rather than_,依据我个性以及兴趣，我选择,Personally,/as far as Im concerned,I side with the former/latter opinion,就我个人而言，我支持。,第27页,Personally,I am in favor of the former point of view.,就我个人而言，我支持,To my mind,/in my opinion,the advantages far overweigh the drawbacks/disadvantages.,我认为优点胜过缺点,Taking into consideration both sides of the issue,I tend to favor the latter view that._,两种观点进行综合考虑，我同意后者,第28页,单一问题处理型作文,Problems and Solutions,这类作文包含,what,why,solution,三个要素。从文章结构上来说，即是问题（,problems),原因（,Causes and Reasons),以及方案（,solutions),29,第29页,文章结构,提出问题：概括性地引出评论事物或观 点。,分析产生问题原因，提出怎样处理现象或问题提议。,针对上文讨论，总结全文得出结论,第30页,真题示例,How to Succeed in a Job Interview,1,面试在求职中作用,2,取得面试成功原因：仪表、举止、谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是。,How to Improve Students Mental Health,1,心理健康很主要,2,所以，学校能够,3,我们应该,第31页,写作过程,审题,打腹稿、写出提要,简述面试普遍性和主要性（提出问题）,分析取得面试成功很多原因（分析原因,),提供面试成功方法,(,提出处理问题方案）,总结全文,第32页,Sample Writing 1,Nowadays,it is universally acknowledged that,a job interview is indispensable in the process of job hunting.Obviously,a job interview offers you an opportunity to display your capability.Additionally,doing well in a job interview means you stand more chance of being employed.,Therefore,the job interview is very important for a job hunter.,But how can you,succeed in it?(,提出问题,）,第33页,Sample Writing1,There are many factors involved in,a successful interview.,First of all,you should take care to wear clean and suitable clothes,the right clothes worn on the right occasion would give a good feeling of you in the interview and help win the interviewers favorite judgment of you.,第34页,Sample Writing1,In addition,you should pay particular attention to,your manner of speaking and to the quality of your speech.Your self confidence can be demonstrated by a clear voice and vigorous speaking style.,whats more,you should show your aptitudes and skills for the job and your knowledge about the job-related areas.,last but not least,you ought to be honest about your academic background,for honesty is the best policy(,分析问题，提出提议,),第35页,Simple Writing1,To sum up,the job interview is indeed important,but there is no need to be nervous.Once you have the ability for the job and are willing to achieve what is mentioned above,the new job will be within your reach.(,总结,),第36页,Simple Writing 2,With the,intense competition,in,job hunting market,employment,has become a big concern to,college graduates.,knowing how to,succeed in a job interview,plays a significant part in,getting a good job.,There are many ways for,college graduates,to,deal with job interview successfully.,To begin with,when interviewed,you should wear clean and suitable clothes.Making a good impression is half done.,Secondly,the interviewee should pay attention to the rate of speech,pitch and tone of voice,gestures,expression through the eyes and the ability to hold the interest of others.The interviewer form an impression about him/her based on these.,Besides,being confidence,can,make,第37页,Simple Writing 2,you a successful interviewee.The secret is to be consistently you,at your best.,Whats more,you should demonstrate your aptitude and skills for the job and your professional knowledge.,Last but not least,you ought to be honest about your academic background,for,honesty is the best policy.,As for as Im concerned,the job interview is critical.,On the one hand,one should prepare well and seize the opportunity.,On the other hand,one should be relaxed and confident.,All in all,the man who knows better how to succeed in a job interview stands a better opportunity to be favored.,第38页,写作模板,It is generally accepted that,Nowadays,it is universally acknowledged that,Today,How to has become a matter of concern.,Now people are increasingly aware/conscious of ,Recently the problem of has been in the limelight,第39页,写作模板,There are many ways to In the first place,.;In the second place,.;whats more,;,Why do many people?One reason is that _.Another one is _.,The phenomenon is mainly/partly attributed to _.,Measures must be taken to solve the problem of _.,Both government and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in,not only for ourselves but also for future generation.,第40页,写作模板,Taking into account all these factors,we may safely draw the conclusion that _.it is time we put considerable emphasis on the development of _.,第41页,Tips:Dos and Donts,Things to Check For:,Correct spelling,grammar,complete sentences and punctuation.,Did you repeat words and/or phrases?,Were you clear?,Has your essay been proofread?,第42页,Assignment,Directions:you should write a composition on the topic of,How I Finance My College Education,you should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given below:,上大学费用,(tuition and fees),能够经过各种渠道处理；,那种渠道适合我（说明理由）,第43页,细化提要,当前大学生缴纳学费越来越高，怎样支付学费成了大学生们关注焦点。,现实生活中存在各种支付学费路径，如父母支付，自己打工，银行贷款等。,陈说个人观点，,尤其要详细说明原因,。,第44页,范文,With the rapid development of higher education in china,universities are no longer financed exclusively by the government and students must pay at least part for their schooling.Then how to finance their college education is becoming a big concern to students and the society.,第45页,范文,There are various ways for a students to pay his tuition and fees.if a student is quite excellent in his studies,he can apply for scholarships.If a student was born in a wealthy family,he can depend on his parents to complete his college life,which is totallly accepted in Chinese culture.However,many other choices are available,a student,whether rich or poor,can turn to bank for a loan,which he or she can repay after graduation.,第46页,范文,As for as I am concerned,doing a part time job is a wise choice,on the one hand,I can make money to cut down on the financial burden of my family,on the other hand it can help me to understand the value of hard work and accumulate working experiences,both of which are essential for my whole life journey.In sum,we,college students,should choose a suitable way to finance our education so that we can finish our education smoothly.,第47页,作业,Job hunting,1,大学生找工作难,2,原因很多,3,处理方法,How to keep psychologically health,1,心里问题往往是造成疾病原因之一,2,分析人们产生心理问题原因（失业，压力过大。缺乏支持，缺乏人际交往能力,3,你认为怎样保持心理健康,第48页,第一段,Nowadays more and more people begin to realize/be aware of/notice the importance/significance/seriousness of the problem of _.,现在越来越多人,There is no denying that special attention must be paid to the problem of _.If we ignore to the problem,it is very likely that _.,开始注意到,.,问题严重性。,第49页,第二段,There are many/several/a variety of causes/reasons for this _ in _,T,he phenomenon is mainly/partly attributed to _.,造成,.,原因有很多。,第50页,第三段,There supposed to be two effective measures,on the one hand,we,on the other hand,we,通常认为有两种有效办法，其一是,其二是,Measures must be taken to solve the problem of_,必须采取办法来处理,.,问题,第51页,现象解释类,假如提要要求对一个现象产生原因或带来影响进行解释，则归为现象解释类 作文。,第52页,现象解释类,Digital Age,1,数字化产品得到广泛使用,2,对人类工作、学习和生活产生影响,Will E-books Replace Traditional Book?,1,电子图书越来越多,2,取代传统图书，原因是,3,我看法,第53页,现象解释类,Due Attention Should be Given to Spelling,Due Attention Should be Given to The Study of Chinese,1,忽略学习汉字现象,2,出现这种现象原因和后果,3,为了改变这种现象，我认为,第54页,现象解释类,The Impact Of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication(.6),漫画、图表,what electives to choose,1,各大学开设各种各样选修课,2,学生因为各种原因选择了不一样选修课,3,以你为例,第55页,现象解释类,Traditional Operas are Gaining Revival on Campus,今年来由越来越多大学生对传统戏剧感兴趣,分析产生这一现象原因,你对此看法,Free Admission to Museums,Students Use of Computers,On Students Selecting Lectures,第56页,现象解释类,要求学生从试题提醒性文字，图表或图画入手描述它们反应现象，并对该现象进行解释说明，分析其原因，影响前景等并加以评述。,结构：首先描述现象并说明其现实状况；然后分析这种现象原因呢，相关原因带来影响；然后对现象做出品论或提出提议,.,第57页,现象解释类,Sample1,E-learning,1),近年来网络学习越来越流行,2,）产生这种,现象,原因,3,）分析其带来好处,第58页,现象解释类,Sample1,In recent years,many people have chosen e-learning as a way to further their study.With the rapid development of technology and peoples increasing demand for education,e-learning or on-line learning has led a new trend of education.In addition,in some areas,e-learning has played a role that traditional education cannot compare.The reasons for this phenomenon are varied.(,现象描述,),第59页,现象解释类,Sample1,Among all this reasons,the quick development of the internet plays a critical role.It makes all our dreams of attending classes in the distance possible.Moreover,e-learning breaks down the barriers of time schedule.Besides,compared with traditional ways of teaching and learning,it is far more costeffective for students.(,说明原因,),第60页,现象解释类,Sample1,In my opinion,on-line learning,as a new form of education,will benefit both the individual and the society.On the other hand,it offers people a convenient and flexible way to improve themselves.On the other hand,the overall qualities of people can be promoted,and hence impolite and critical behaviors can be greatly decreased.To conclude,e-learning does have a lot of advantages.,第61页,现象解释类模板一,第一段,Nowadays/At present,.,（概述现象）,.The phenomenon has become a heated topic among the people around us.,The phenomenon has been brought into focus./.(,某现象,),which has around great concern.(,阐述现象表现,).,第62页,现象解释类模板一,第二段,There are many factors that may account for it,and the fallowing are the most conspicuous aspects.,There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon.,The reasons(factors)that contribute to.(,现象,)are varied.,First of all/To start with,.(,原因一,).In addition/Furthermore/What is more/Moreover,.(,原因二,).Finally,.(,原因三,).On the whole,.(,总结原因,).,第63页,现象解释类模板一,第三段,As far as I am concerned,I a