英语六级写作之天龙八部PPT课件.ppt

大学英语六级备考College English Test Band-6杭州新东方：陈曲杭州新东方：陈曲Hangzhou New Oriental:FrankHangzhou New Oriental:Frank教授课程：写作部分教授课程：写作部分Courses:Writing PartCourses:Writing Part1对于题目的解读对于题目的解读Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled minutes to write a short essay entitled.You.You should write at least 150 words following the should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.outline given below.题目解读：题目解读：1.1.六级写作给出题目六级写作给出题目2.2.三句话写三段，不要三句话写三段，不要“别出心裁别出心裁”。3.3.字数绝对不得少于字数绝对不得少于150150个字个字2最新六级题目最新六级题目20092009年年1212月月现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班；现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班；1.1.对这种做法有人表示支持，对这种做法有人表示支持，2.2.有人并不赞成；有人并不赞成；3.3.我认为我认为 Should parents send their kids to art Should parents send their kids to art classes?classes?3写作五条黄金法则写作五条黄金法则印象给分（印象给分（2 5 8 11 142 5 8 11 14）1.1.提纲要点提纲要点翻译成英文翻译成英文各段中心句各段中心句2.2.惊艳惊艳学会制造学会制造亮点亮点（尤其第一段）（尤其第一段）3.3.清晰清晰学会学会使用使用标志词标志词（尤其是主体段）（尤其是主体段）4.4.六级词汇六级词汇六级高端词汇六级高端词汇GREGRE词汇词汇5.5.卷面保持清楚卷面保持清楚切忌藏宝图切忌藏宝图再次强调：文章分成三段再次强调：文章分成三段4六级词汇六级词汇SampleBut,honesty is not only very important to people,but also very good to organizations and nations.Nevertheless,honesty is not only of essential significance to individuals,but contributes to organizations and nations as well.替代词的使用5新六级写作历年真题新六级写作历年真题考试时间题目提纲2009.06On the Importance of a name名字重不重要2008.12How to Improve Students Mental Health大学生心理健康问题2008.06Will E-books Replace Traditional Books电子图书是否会取代传统图书6新六级写作历年真题新六级写作历年真题考试时间题目提纲2007.12Digital Age数字化产品对于人们生活的影响2007.06Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed做了好事要不要回报2006.12The Importance of Reading Classics阅读经典书籍对人的成长很重要7历年题目的第一段历年题目的第一段2009.06 1.有人认为名字很重要2008.12 1.大学生的心理健康十分重要2008.06 1.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多2007.12 1.如今数字化产品得到越来越多广泛的使用，例如 2007.06 1.有人做好事期望得到回报；2006.12 1.阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要。8写作核心：句型写作核心：句型总起：阅读经典书籍非常重要。总起：阅读经典书籍非常重要。初中初中Reading classics is very important.高中高中be important=be of importance great vital crucial 9写作核心：句型写作核心：句型It is of vital importance to read classics.大学预科大学预科Nothing is more important than Nothing is more important than to read classics.大学四级大学四级play a/an role/part10写作核心：句型写作核心：句型Reading classics plays a very important role nowadays.六级高分六级高分important=significant=essentialpivot=indispensibleNothing plays a more indispensible role than to read classics.11天龙八部天龙八部 第一部第一部2006.12 The Importance of Reading ClassicsIt is generally accepted that nothing can play a more indispensable role than reading books.描述类经典句描述类经典句真理类经典句真理类经典句It is generally accepted that one should never expect a reward when doing a good deed.Seemingly justifiable,however,it is not always the case.12第一部发散第一部发散存在类经典句升级：存在类经典句升级：There is little doubt that There is general acceptance that It cannot be denied that There is a growing recognition that It has been widely noted that It is universally acknowledged that A prevailing notion/trend is that 13天龙八部天龙八部 第二部第二部2007.12 Digital AgeIT技术技术 数字时代数字时代Probably without our consciousness/realization,the IT technology seems to give birth to a digital age in todays world.A-emerge into peoples sight/visionA-B A give birth to BOwning to the development of IT industry,e-books in growing number begin to emerge into peoples vision.14英英汉汉差差异异1 1英语多被动，汉语多主动。英语多被动，汉语多主动。我们应该重视阅读电子书我们应该重视阅读电子书We should pay attention to e-books.You should pay attention to e-books.文章中不得出现文章中不得出现you！Attention should be paid to reading e-books.15英英汉汉差差异异1 1加比加比较级较级：Much more attention than ever before have been paid to E-books.laid concentration/focus on/upon Much more concentrations than ever before have been laid on/upon reading classics.attach importance to16天龙八部天龙八部 第三部第三部2008.06 Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?In recent years,much more attention than ever before has been paid to the fast-developing IT industry which has brought unprecedented transformations to human beings life.In recent years,much more attention than ever before has been laid on/focused on/paid to A-(B)-C A bring B to C17天龙八部天龙八部 第四部第四部2009.06 On the Importance of a Name长期以来，人们一直都对名字的重要性很长期以来，人们一直都对名字的重要性很感兴趣感兴趣。Over the past centuries,people have long been interested in identifying the significance of a name.People have long been interested in identifying（影响）（影响）effect influence impact（作用）（作用）force（意义）（意义）importance significance18天龙八部天龙八部 第五部第五部2009.12 Should parents send their kids to art classes孩子的教育已经成为最重要的社会问题孩子的教育已经成为最重要的社会问题之一之一。Childrens education has recently arisen as one of the essential problems.之一之一 has arisen as one of 可以取代可以取代become 新生事物新生事物19天龙八部天龙八部 第六部第六部2008.12 The Importance of Students mental health孩子心理健康的重要性孩子心理健康的重要性众说纷纭众说纷纭。Nowadays the importance of students mental health has been a matter of debate/been open to debate.A have been a matter of debate/been open to B升级：升级：have led to/resulted in/triggered/give rise to a heated discussion.As regards,there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society.20天龙八部天龙八部 第七部第七部2009.06 Should parents send their kids to art classes越来越多的父母开始考虑把孩子送到艺术学校去。越来越多的父母开始考虑把孩子送到艺术学校去。An increasing number of parents begin to consider sending their kids to art classes,such as drawing and dancing on weekends or during the holidays.An increasing/growing number of people begin to 可以取代可以取代more and more People in growing number21英英汉汉差差异异2 2汉语多短句，英语多长句汉语多短句，英语多长句wind flower snow moon小桥小桥 流水流水 人家人家Murmuring stream flows underneath the bridge,leading to elegant dwelling.某人做好事要求回报某人做好事要求回报发散发散222024/2/28 周三23英英汉汉差差异异2 2One should expect a reward after doing a good deed.Though the question is seemingly simple,it poses a considerable challenge to the society.And it tends to showcase peoples moral belief.10-710-9甚至甚至10？24天龙八部天龙八部 第八部第八部2007.06 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?Seemingly simple,the question of whether one should expect a reward after doing a good deed poses a considerable challenge which tends to showcase peoples moral belief.pose a considerable challenge to tend to 当中文出现容易时当中文出现容易时I tend to believe/claim that 25第八部发散第八部发散使动类经典句升级使动类经典句升级(对对造成了造成了)pose to 或者或者 place/put on 1.Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.2.Rapid population growth will put/place a strain on economies around the world.3.Smoking place a great influence on our health.26第八部发散第八部发散趋势类经典句升级：趋势类经典句升级：tend to be likely to be inclined to be liable to be apt to be prone to 27第八部发散第八部发散1.One tends to shout when he gets excited.2.In winter,people are apt to catch cold.3.He is likely to make mistakes when tired.4.She is prone to lose temper in difficult situation.5.Leo is liable to act aggressively.6.This kind of shoes is inclined to slip on wet ground.28天龙八部步法天龙八部步法现象类现象类新事物新事物旧事物旧事物 新兴趣新兴趣旧事物旧事物 多人群多人群arise asbe interested inpay attention toincreasing描述类描述类新旧事物新旧事物 描述描述play a role讨论类讨论类讨论热议讨论热议debate discussion动作类动作类出现出现结果结果举例举例emergepose challengefor instance29为什么要用天龙八部为什么要用天龙八部天龙八部核心天龙八部核心 句型句型如2007年12月 Digital Age数字时代可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害。Digital age both has advantages and disadvantages.It goes without saying that Digital age both have advantages and disadvantages.30Exercise开头句开头句经典练习：学习英语到底有多难？思路设计:1a.现在越来越多的人在学习英语1b.英语扮演着非常重要的角色2a.然而如何学好英语却成为重中之重2b.举例说明学习英语的情况31Key to the Exercise第一句话：天龙八部出鞘第一句话：天龙八部出鞘句型句型1：arise as one of 1.English learning has recently arisen as one of the essential problems for any students,regardless of their age gender or background.增加描述regardless of =irrespective of 32Key to the Exercise句型句型2：much more attention than ever before has been paid to/laid on/focused on/concentrated on 2.At present,much more concentration than ever before has been laid upon English learningby majority of the students ranging from kindergarten kids to college undergraduates.增加对象33Key to the Exercise句型句型3：people have long been interested in 3.Over the past decades,people have been long interested in learning a foreign languageso as to improve their ability to communicate with othersand English in particular has been their focus.增加目的34Key to the Exercise句型句型4：An increasing number of begin to 4.An increasing number of students nowadays start to learn Englishat a very early age,even when they are in pre-school.增加时间（地点）35Key to the Exercise句型句型5.There is generally accepted that nothing play a role than 5.There is a growing recognition that English has played a dominant role in current world in communication.5.It is an irrefutable fact that,in current world,nothing can play a more indispensable part in communication than English.36Key to the Exercise第二句话：六脉神剑承接第二句话：六脉神剑承接句型句型6.has emerged into peoples vision6.Nevertheless,the issue of how to learn English well has emerged into peoples vision,since most college students still find the subject difficult and the language unintelligible,despite their learning English for over ten years.增加因果 转折37Key to the Exercise句型句型7.the question of pose/put/place 7.The issue of how to learn English well has placed considerable strain on most of the college students,who regard it as a great necessity for their future career.38Key to the Exercise句型句型8.the question of has been open to debate/triggered a heated discussion8.Consequently,the issue of how to master this language has been open to debate/triggered a heated discussion.Thus,as regards how to improve the English language skill,there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society.39Key to the Exercise句型句型9.举例类举例类回忆发生类句型回忆发生类句型witness9.Take China for example,the past decades has witnessed a dramatic increase in the number of people who is eager/has shown their great anxiety to master this language.40Key to the Exercise开头句组合1-英文重要现状There is a growing recognition that,in current world,nothing can play a more indispensable part in communication than English.Take China for example,the past decades has witnessed a dramatic increase in the number of people who has shown their great anxiety to master this language.(47 words)41Key to the Exercise开头句组合2-学习英文现状At present,much more concentration than ever before has been laid upon English learning by majority of the students ranging from kindergarten kids to college undergraduates.Consequently,the issue of how to learn English well has placed considerable strain on them,who regard it as a great necessity for their future career.(52 words)42Key to the Exercise开头句组合3-提出学习问题English learning has recently arisen as one of the essential problems for any students,regardless of their age gender or background.Nevertheless,the issue of how to learn English well has emerged into peoples vision,since most college students,despite their learning English for over ten years,still find the subject difficult and the language unintelligible.(56 words)432024/2/28 周三44