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7、u soon . Sincerely yours Li Ming1. be determined by 由所决定 2. have something to do with 与有 关3. combinewith 把和结合起 来;加上 4. in the fashion of 以方式 5. suchas 像一样6. be central to sth. 是的核心 7. in contrast/by contrast 与此相反 8. be due to 由于(常做表语)9. be deprived of 被剥夺 10. respond to 对作出反应 11. as the basis of 依据/
8、根据 12. be born with 天生具有 13. In contrast 相比之下 态度 14. only if 只要 15. shut off 关上,停止,切断 16. the sameas 与一样 17. in any case=at any rate 不管怎样, 无论如何; in no case 决不 18. or so 大概,大约 19. nothing but 只不过是 20. at the rate of 以的速率 21. by means of 通过;借助于 22. take time 花费时间 23. by the help of 通过的帮助 16. be likely
9、 to 可能;倾向于 38. in a sort of sense 从某种意义上 24. result in 导致 25. not nearly 远不能;远非 26. head into 走向;陷入(危机) 27. in the matter of 关于;就而言 28. makepossible 使成为可能 来说 29. manage to do sth. 设法做到 30. extract from 从提炼出 31. out of起源;来源;根据 32. by lack of=for lack of 因为缺乏 33. refer to提到;谈到 34. agreement on 一致意见 35
10、. be comparable to 和相当;犹如 36. in terms of 根据;按照;在方面 37. on the whole 总体来说;大体上看 38. draw a conclusion 得出结论 39. have the attitude towards 对的40. build up 建立;树立 41. rather than 而不是 42. by no means 绝不 43. be compared with 与相比 44. a sort of 某种 45. set in motion 开始; 46. differ in在方面不同 47. go through 经历;经受;
11、仔细检查 48. social inequality 社会不公 49. in the one case =on the one hand 50. in doing sth 在过程中 51. in the course of the day=during the day 52. a train of=a series of=an array of=a variety of 69. divertfrom 把从转移 53. lie with 取决于;在于 54. be validated by 被验证/证实 55. revolve around 围绕转; 以为 中心 56. not so mucha
12、s 与其说不如说 57. because of 由于 58. move forward 向前发展 59. suchas 例如,象这种的 60. in short 简而言之;总之 61. in general 通常;大体上;一般而 62. as we call it 我们所谓的 63. the reach of science 科学能够到 达的范围 64. a series of 一系列 65. over the years 多年以来 66. turnon转向,朝向 67. underprivileged youngster 贫困的 /下层社会的年轻人 68. grow up 长大 言 69. for example 比如 70. compensate for 补偿;赔偿 71. whetheror 是还是 72. depend uponand on 取决于还取 决于 73. depend uponand upon 取决于还 取决于 74. at the expense of=at the cost of 以为代价 75. vice versa 反之亦然 76. depend on 取决于 77. driving force 驱动力78. scoial contract 社会合同 79. undercir