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如何用英文给教师写感激信

　　【本期标题】

　　在初中三年的学习生活中，你一定遇到过特别多教师，如今请你选择其中对你协助最大的一位教师，给他(她)写一封感激信，谈谈你对他(她)的印象，回忆一下他(她)是如何协助你的，并表达你对他(她)的祝愿。信的开头和落款已给出，不计词数。

　　提示词：kind, help, encourage, thanks, hope

　　【写作指导】

　　此题要求我们给对本人协助最大的教师写一封感激信，由因此本人亲身经历的，又是写给本人的教师，同学们一定有千言万语要对他(她)说。在情真意切的同时，我们还要格外留意文章的详略和条理。

　　通过审题，我们能够获知：

　　1. 文章的主题：感激师恩

　　2. 文章的要点：对教师的感激之情，对教师的印象，回忆教师的协助，并表达祝愿。

　　3. 文章的体裁：书信

　　4. 文章的人称：you, i

　　5. 文章的时态：由因此回忆，因此以一般过去时为主。

　　同学们先把相关短语和词汇整理一下：

　　1. 描写教师的描绘词有哪些呢?

　　kind, nice, selfless, patient, easy-going, responsible, be strict with…

　　2. 有哪些单词和短语能够表示教师对本人的协助呢?

　　help me with my english/ maths, explain…to me patiently,

　　encourage me never to give up, praise me when i make progress, have a talk with me, take me to the hospital when i am ill, tell me some good ways to learn……

　　接下来，我们看看如何表达对教师的感激和祝愿吧。

　　1. i want to say thanks/thank you.

　　2. i owe my progress/success to your help.

　　3. i owe you a lot for your help/what you’ve done for me.

　　4. i’ll never forget your help and i will remember all the happy times we shared together.

　　5. i hope you can be happy/healthy, forever.

　　6. i wish you good luck/health!

　　【一般作文】

　　dear miss wang:

　　i’m glad to write to you.

　　you are such a kind and easy-going teacher that we all like you. i remember that at first i hated learning new english words very much and i even wanted to give up. when you noticed this, you had a talk with me. you told me some good ways to remember those words and

　　encouraged me never to give up. i’ve made great progress in english and now i’m a top student in english.

　　i want to say thanks. i will work harder in the future. i hope you can be happy and healthy forever.

　　yours,

　　linda

　　点评：

　　本文信息点齐全，层次比拟明晰，语言比拟通畅，句式也有一定的变化。作者首先用一个so…that 句式将教师随和、仁慈的特点勾勒出来，接下来回忆了教师是如何在本人当初因厌恶背单词而想放弃学英语时对本人无私的协助。结尾处，关于教师的感激和祝愿也就水到渠成，感情真诚、自然。 因此，文章的连接和语言优化方面也仍然能够进一步改良的。

　　【总分值范文】

　　dear miss wang,

　　i’m glad to write to you. at this moment, words can no longer express my feelings.

　　how kind and responsible can a teacher be? you just gave me the perfect answer. i can clearly remember how much i hated learning new english words at first. to be honest, i really wanted to give up. as soon as you noticed this, you offered to help me by telling me some shortcuts to learn them. you never failed to encourage me even when i made only a little progress. little by little, my interest in english grew and now i’m a top student in english.

　　i want to say thanks to you. i will work harder in the future to live up to your expectations. i hope you can be happy and healthy forever.

　　yours

　　xiaoming

　　点评：

　　这篇修正后的作文不管在语言表达以及文章内涵方面都是相当优秀的。 首先，开头at this moment, words can no longer express my

　　feelings. 短短的一句话便把作者如今的激动和对教师的感激之情表达得特别充分。第二段首句的设征询句how kind and responsible can a teacher be? 更是精彩。在描写本人起初对英语单词的厌烦时，作者用了一个how 所引导的宾语从句替代原文的一般句式。

　　文章的几个过渡语也是恰到好处: to be honest, little by little等，均在一定程度上加强了文章的连接性。此外，几个表达法也相当地道、出彩，比方用 live up to one’s expectations (不辜负某人的期望)表示本人的决心，使得整篇文章的感情更加饱满、真诚，给人留下了深化的印象。