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打造高分作文，培养语言美感推陈出新原则Habits play an important role in our daily life. Important 可以升级为significant。It has become common that students go to “one-to one” classes.Common 可升级为universal.The dinner looks a little bit terrible. -disgustingThe question is really difficult to understand._confusing词义旧词新词词义旧词新词名声fameReputation困难的difficultchallenging机会chanceOpportunity传统的traditionalconventional忍受standtolerateendure不好的badunfavorable采用；采取useadopt显然的obviousevident拥有ownpossess适当的properappropriate感激thankappreciate严重的serioussevere同意agree withsubscribe to有益的helpfulbeneficial激励encouragemotivate惊人的；非凡的surprisingextraordinaryamazing走完；读完walk/readcover非常的；极度的very/hardextremelydesperately 句子优先原则好处之一：短语会使文章增加亮点如：When he was a child ,he wanted to learn everything._When he was a child , he had a strong appetite for knowledge.He had to face all the possible difficulties._He had to cope with(应付，处理) all the possible difficulties.Your efforts will be very important.Our school lies in the east of the city._Our school is located in the east of the city.I thanked him a lot for his help._I was grateful to him for his help.1、I read all the books I could find that threw light upon these matters.2. The scenery on the top of the mountain held me entirely in its power.3、Her words lighted me up ,making me aware that honesty was far more important than a broken vase.4、The boy threw/cast an angry look at me.好处之二：使用短语可增加文章的长度如：I want it .-I am looking forward to it/I am dying for it ./I am longing for it.I cannot bear it .- I cannot put up with it.I suddenly I had a good idea.-I came up with a good idea./All of a sudden a good idea occurred to me ./A good idea came upon me.类似的还有：cause -result in /lead to /bring about know-have a good command /knowledge ofvisit -pay a visit touse -make use of /take advantage oflike-have a preference forenjoy -be fond of /be keen on/keep sb. spellboundend/stop -come to an end /stopunderstand -have a good understanding of /make sense of /get the hang ofbe found -come to light再如：重视：attach great importance to 一定：be bound to do很多：a variety of /varieties of便利使用: have easy/free access to sth.陪伴某人：keep sb. Company越来越多的人：an increasing number of people习惯于：be used to doing/be accustomed to doing.多实少虚的原则： a nice mangenerous （慷慨的） ,humorous（幽默的） , kind-hearted（善良的） , warm-hearted （热心的）, hospitable（好客的）, gentle （文雅的）, optimistic（乐观 的）, easy-going（随和的）, spirited（英勇的） ,cultivated（有教养的）, manly（有男子气概的） , knowledgeable（知识渊博的）, cautious(谨慎的)试比较：He is a nice student.(空泛)He is an easy-going and knowledgeable student.如：走出房间，一般说：walk out of the room但是小偷走出房间：slip out of the room小姐走出房间：sail out of the room小孩走出房间：dance out of the room老人走出房间：stagger out of the room“叫“Cry哭叫，shout 大喊大叫，scream 尖叫，moan 呻吟，sigh 叹气，quarrel大吵大闹 “看“Look 看的动作/see看的结果；watch 观察/observe为了研究进行的观察；notice注意 catch sight of 看见/stare好奇地看/glare 瞪着看；glance 瞅见/glimpse瞥见，witness目睹，见证养成好习惯 form /develop/cultivate a good habit of 养成坏习惯 slide into /get into a bad habit of灵活多变性原则The interesting teacher knows how to make an interesting class.-The humorous teacher knows how to make his class vivid.The main aim of painters ,who were not interested in showing nature and people ,was to present religious themes. The text is so difficult that I cant understand it .-The text is so difficult that I cant make sense of it .-The text is so difficult that I cant figure it out .意义常用词替换词决心，决定decisionDetermination, resolve目标，理想aimGoal, target, dream专心做，忙于做be busy doingbe devoted to doing sth. be occupied in doing sth., be engaged in doing sth, be addicted to doing, focus on ,concentrate, be fixed on/upon sth, be absorbed in doing支持，赞成supportapprove of ,in favor of, uphold, stand by ones side, agree with实现，完成finishachieve, accomplish, fulfill, complete解释explainaccount for; illustrate, clarify证明，证实provetestify, confirm, verify, turn out(to be)需要needcall for, require, demand涌入come into, enterflood into; overflow into; crowd into易于 ，倾向于be possibletend to ; be likely to 有助于be helpful tocontribute to ; make a contribution to; make for 漂亮的beautifulappealing; attractive; inviting; charming; fascinating沮丧的，失意的sadfrustrated; discouraged; depressed; down-hearted优秀的goodoutstanding ,perfect, brilliant, remarkable, distinguished, excellent 低等的，次要的lowerinferior, junior, minor, secondary, lesser, insignificant事实上in fact in reality, in effect ,as a matter of fact, practically, virtually, actually词性转换如：我吃得不多。I dont eat much.这个很俗。但I am a light eater.更为形象。类似的还有：a heavy smoker/drinkerdelight Her first delight was going to the Tower.The museum displays more than just the visual delights of art.Nursery rhymes delight small children.再如：useful /important/valuable/helpful/-be of great /some use /importance/valuemake a choice/suggestion/description/decision/attemptincrease steadily-experience a steady increase 平稳地增加decrease sharply-undergo a sharp decrease 大减life is full of ups and downs.人生充满盛衰荣辱。The whole society is dedicated to furthering the structural reform.整个社会致力于深化体制改革。The government has taken some measures to better the life of the people.政府采取措施改善人民的生活水平。Warm clothes are a must in the mountain.到山区去穿暖和的衣服是必须的。约定俗成原则发表演说： deliver/make a speech 做实验：make /conduct/carry out /perform an experiment.取得成就：make achievements 获得声誉：gain reputation达到目的：attain ones aim面临新的机遇和挑战：be faced with new opportunities and challenges /meet the challenge of引起了广泛的公众关注： arouse wide public concern /draw public attention