2022年高考备考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累：话题05+人生感悟+.docx

话裁防人也感焙彳舌题解读人生感悟类话题是常考热门话题之包括从日常生活方生的事情当中感悟的道理，考 生可以把这些重点话题多练练。命题者可能从以下一些角度命题：1. 幸福幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是 孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是。2. 感恩对父母心存感恩，因为他们给予我生命，让我健康成长;对老师心存感恩，因为他们 给了我教诲，让我抛却愚味;对朋友心存感恩，因为他们给了我友爱;对社会心存感恩，因为 社会给了我智慧和力量。白从国家实施义务教育以来，书本免费，食宿免费，而且还有贫困 助学金等。面对这些，我们应该心存感恩，感谢祖国对我们的厚望和期盼。让我们永远记住: 感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢朋友、感谢全社会！3. 过程比结果更重要安静地享受过程远比匆忙地寻求结果更智慧，更受人推崇。除此之外，对结果毫无耐心 也不值得提倡，因为它会使人们行动鲁莽，注重结果，破坏期待。4. 行动的力量行动越多，积累的经验、技能越多，距离终点越近。梦想引导行动，行动实现梦想。5. 努力创造机会努力创造机会总是必要的，也是值得的。尤其是在这个竞争激烈的社会。等到机会从天 而降很大程度上会导致过一种枯燥而没有成就的生活。一、话题常用单词impact 影响请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。Never be afraid of making mistakes. Factually, making progress is making mistakes. Mistakes reveal where success lies.注意：1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；2. 附诗歌外，文体不限；3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；4. 词数为10()左右【范文】No one is perfect, and no one never makes any mistakes. Mistakes are the best teachers who guide us through difficulties. Therefore, the first thing we should bear in mind is that mistakes are actually stepping stones to our progress. In fact, mistakes will make us learn and improve. In my opinion, we should not regard mistakes as something embarrassing； instead, we should consider them as valuable learning.Sometimes mistakes can open up new horizons. Many scientists may make a great number of mistakes before they make a discovery. British scientist Alexander Fleming wrongly left his experiment room window open, which led to his discovery of penicillin, a powerful modern medicine.We should not be afraid of making mistakes, because sometimes through mistakes there can be more discovery or progress. Just as an old saying goes, uexperience is the mother of wisdom”【写作指导】考查半开放性作文。本文讨论的话题是“mistakes”，从所给的材料可以看出这篇文章的主题的犯错有时是好事，通过犯错我们可以得到进步，从而取得成功。写作的时候要围绕 这个主题展开论述，要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象， 进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的 想象能力和英语语言表达能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型， 在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选 择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least 等。【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：boar in mind记住，In my opinion在我看 来，regard* as 认为是，open up new horizons 开阔新的视野,afraid of 害怕,Mistakes are the best teachers who guide us through difficulties. 这句话用 了定语从句， Therefore, the first thing we should bear in mind is that mistakes are actually stepping stones to our progress, 这句话用了表语从句和定语从句，British scientist Alexander Fleming wrongly left his experiment room window open, which led to his discovery of penicillin, a powerful modern medicine.这句话用了非限制性定语从句, Just as an old saying goes, experience is the mother of wisdom 这是一句谚语。(2)作为一名高三学生的你，明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短 文，谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议。1. 对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢；向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意；2. 努力学习，实现人生梦想；对学弟、学妹的建议。注意：1. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯；词数：100左右(开头已给出，不计入总字数)。High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one* s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won t be long before I graduate.【范文】High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one* s life.As a Senior 3 student, i t won t be long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, t achers, parents and friends included.对thout their help and advice, my life would be different Secondly, ifs high ti me to say sony to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, fbr I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the M saying goes, No pains, no gains.wFinally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.【写作指导】这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但是不是很具体，考生要 把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。还要有所拓展，内容要充实，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥， 在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。 同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First, second, Besides, What* s more 等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：Above al I首要的是，最重要的是，made up my mind to do 下决心做，make every effort to do 努力做，make full use of 充分 利用,范文中的句式多变，运用不同的语法知识:I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. 这句话用了现在分词做定语，its high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship 这句话用 了固定句型.it* s high time to do 该做什么 了，just as the old saying goes, No pains, no gains. time and tide wait for no men.这两句是谚语,还有范文还使用 Firstly, Secondly, Finally这样的词使文章更加连贯。(3)随着社会对“富二代”各方面负面新闻不断的报道。最近你校学生就“金钱是否能带来 幸福”这一话题进行了一场激烈的辩论，辩论的结果如下表所示:正方反方1. 钱非常重要，生活离不开钱：2. 钱可以帮助我们解决很多问题3. 钱使我们的生活更舒适。1. 金钱不是万能的；2. 金钱买不到幸福和健康；3. 过分在乎金钱就会失去人生的意义请根据以上素材为某英语报IW写一篇英语稿件，介绍这次辩论的内容，并谈谈我们应该如何 看待金钱。注意：1.词数100左右开头己给出，但不计入总词数：1. 不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，以行文连贯。Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness.【范文】Recently I have had a debate about whether money can bring us happiness. The students have different opinions.Some students think that money is so important that we couldn* t survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition, it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life.Others, however, have opposite opinion. They think money doesn t mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life.Personal ly, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. On 1y in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.【写作指导】本篇书面表达为正反方议论文。讨论金钱是否能带来幸福”这一话题，正方和反方的观点都 已经给出，谈我们应如何正确看待金钱，正反方议论文结构典型，要记住基本结构，另外多 记忆一些模板句。写作时可以套用一些固定格式，文章结构为：引入句f正方观点阐述 一 反方观点阐述，还有自己的观点，论述两种不同观点主要是结合要点写，自己的看法没 有要点要学生自己发挥。要求学生有很好的英语思维能力。但里面的内容句式要富于变化， 要注意遣词造句，层次清晰，语句连贯。【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如help sb. do, allow sb to do, 1 ive a 1 ife for example, attach to ，in this way；还运用句型 nor 引导的部分倒装句，only放句首引导的倒装结构等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:besides, in addition, however, for example, personally 等等。(4)美国己故大演说家、成功学家鼻祖”罗曼-文森特-皮尔有一句名言：Attitude Is Everything 请你结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈拥有正确的人生态度的重要性，词数100左 右。【范文】As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything. n It moans our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. If wc take a positive attitude and keep on trying , we will achieve our goals in the end.I cant agree more with this view. At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed. Then I realized that I had to do well in English to go to my favorite university. I talked with my acher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me. Wth my teachers help, I improved my English gradually.My story shows that if we have a good attitude and keep on trying, we will be able to overcome difficulty and move on. It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.【写作指导】考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出J一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由 发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织 要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围 之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词, 把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章 的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】范文主题明确，夹叙夹议，在语言上用了一些常见的短语：can t agree more with, take a positive attitude 采取积极的态度，With my teacher s help 在老师的 帮助下，句式上也是富有变化：As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything. It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future, 这句话用 了宾语从句， At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed. 和 I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me.,这两句话用 了定语从句，11 is our attitude that plays a key role in our 1 i fe. 这句话用了强调句。Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.请仔细观察图片，描述图片内容，并以生活中发生的一件事情说明图片所说明的内涵。 注意：词数不少于100。【范文】In the picture, two goats are tied to each other with a rope. They both see some grass in opposite directions, and try to pull to get their own food. They arc unsuccessful, because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time. However, if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first, and then the grass on the right, they will both be able to get their food.Several days ago, two of my friends had a fierce quarrel. Both of them hold their owi view without considering the others. One cf them wanted to go to the bookshop first, while the other wanted to finish theircould not onlycould not onlyproject first. Laid； I gave them a suggestion that they should go to the book shop first, where they buy the book, but also find some useful information, which might help the other better their project.Therefore, cooperat ion is better than conf 1 icl. Remember that sometimes our goal is not that only we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want. All in all, only good cooperation will benefit everyone.【写作指导】 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥 的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点 的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内, 选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各 个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档 次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】范文主题明确，夹叙夹议，在语言上用了一些常见的短语not only-butalso不但而且，All in all,总的来说。句式上也是富有变化:because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time.这句话用了 too to结构，One of them wanted to go to the bookshop first, while the other wanted to finish their project first. 这句话用了 while 表示对I:匕，Later, I gave them a suggestion that they should go to the book shop first, where they could not only buy the book, but also find some useful information, which might help the other better their project. 这 句话用了同位语从句,非限制性定语从句。Remember that sometimes our goal is not that only we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want.这句话用了 not. but-结构，和表语从句。附加英语填空挑战题()1. We use language every day. We live in a world of words. Hardly anymoment passes with someone talking, writing or reading. Indeed, _1_languages is most essential to mankind. Our lives increasingly dependon fast and successful use of language.()2. Strangely enough, we know _2more about things around us than on ourselves.()3. For example, language _3_is species specific,()4. that is, it is language that differs human from _4_animals.()5. However, we do not know yet how exactly we inquire language _5and how it is possible for us to perceive through language;()6. nor we6_ understand precisely the combinations between language andthought,()7._7_language and logic, or language and culture; still less, how and when language started. One reason for this inadequate knowledge of language is that wc, 1 ike language users, take too many things for granted.()8._8_Language comes to every normal person so naturally()9. that a few _9_of us stop to question what language is, much less do we feel the necessity to study it.()10. Language is far more complex than most people have probably imagined and the necessity to study it is far greater than some people may have assured. Linguistic is a branch of science which _10takes language as its object of investigation.2. affection 喜爱ambition 决心3. assessment 评价campaign 活动4. abolish 废除acquire 获取5. al locate 分配appea 1 to 吸引6. accommodate 供给，调节arise 出现7. assume 假设attain获得，得到8. blossom 开花boom 兴旺9. achievement 成就adaptation 适应10. adventure 冒险association 联系11. barrier 障碍willpower/persistence 毅力12. withstand chai lenges 经得住挑战aggressive有进取心的13. energetic精力充沛的striving spirit 进取精神14. open-mindednes 心胸开阔widen one* s knowledge 增长见识15. innovation 创新se 1 f-conf i dence 自信心16. ambition雄心壮志be happy / sad / upset / nervous / lonely 高兴/难过/不安 /紧张/孤独17. be pleased with 对感到高兴be worried about / worry about 担心,担忧18. be / get angry with sb. about sth.因某事生某人的气be disappointed at sb.对某人感到失望19. be confident of sth. / in sb,对某事/某人有信心二、话题常用短语1. 不可否认 11 is undeniable that. /There is no denying that.2. 采取措施 take effective measures to do sth. /something effective must be done to.3. 充分利用 make full use of/take advantage of大有裨益 do good to/be beneficial to4. 导致弓I起 lead to/give rise to/contribute to 对有害 do harm to/be harmful to5. 奉献社会 make contributions to society毫无疑问 Undoubted 1 y/There i s no doubt that6. 交流思想 exchange ideas/emotions/information交流情感 exchange emotions7. 解压减负 relieve stress/burden经济负担 financial burden8. 开阔眼界 broaden one* s vision课业负担 too much homework/heavy burden of homework9. 普遍认为 It is common 1 y bel ieved /recognized that恰恰相反 in contrast/on the contrary10. 热烈讨论 have a heated discuss ion/debate投身于 be devoted to11. 心理负担 psychological burden with扬长避短 adopt ones good points and avoid the shortcomings21.引起关注draw public attention22.与某相比compared wi th/ i n compar i son23.与时俱进keep pace with times24.自然资源valuable natural resources25. 综合素质 comprehensive qual i ty遵守秩序 observe public order/observe discipline26. 把时间精力放在上 focus one* s time and energy on不可推卸的义务unshakable duty27. 产生有利影响 have positive effects on产生不利影响 have negative effects on28. 持不同态度 hold different attitudes towards考虑到多方面因素 take many factors into account/consideration29. 扩大知识面 expand ones scope of knowledge切实减轻我们的课业负担 effectively reduce our heavy homework assignments30. 身心两方面 both physically and mentally我们生活的各方面 in all aspects of human life31. 因特网方便快捷 Its convenient and efficient to use computer and the Internet.三、参考语句话题常用句型We are deeply grateful to you for your support.我们深深感谢你的支持。1. It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow.我们明天必须离开，真是遗憾。2. To begin with, No pains, no gainsH should always be our motto in our life and work.我们应当始终把“没有付出就没有收获”当作工作学习的座右铭。3. Only those who are hard-working and brave enough to encounter difficulties of allsorts are most 1ikely to reach the summit of success.只有那些努力工作，不畏困难的人才能到达成功的顶峰。4. We should embrace positive attitudes and behave confidently. 我们应该具有积极 的态度，并且表现自信。5. Only in this way can we crack down the difficulties confronting us successfully and lead a happy life.只有这样，我们才能克服我们面对的困难，过幸福的生活。6. On the way of I i fe, we shouldn* t focus merely on one or two success.在人生汽勺 道路上，我们不能仅仅满足于一两次的成功。7. On 1 y through persistent pursuit can we be able to make progress and development.只有不断地追求，我们才能够取得进步和发展。8. Persistence functions as an indispensable driving force to keep up our spirit and to assist us to fulfill our study and work.坚持是我们保持精神向上的不可或缺的驱动力，并且能够帮助我们完成自己的学习和工作。9. In fact, only those who are hard-working and brave enough to encounter obstacles of all sorts are most likely to reach the summit of success.事实上，只有那些努力的、勇敢的人才能克服各种困难，才更有可能摘得成功的桂冠。10. The secret to happiness is to keep setting yourself new chailenges.幸福的秘诀就是要不停地给自己设定新的挑战。11. Undoubtedly the cartoon conveys the meaning that life is like the process of running in which one should make constant efforts and never stop making progress. 亳无疑问，这幅画显示了人生就像跑步的过程一样，人们应该做出不断的努力，而且决不要 停止前进。我例割析【典例01】请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?