1、2012届中考英语考点备考复习7第二章 写作之旅第一板块:美文共赏The Best Day on Earth An ordinary(平常的) morning. You are starting your ordinary day. Do you want it to be ordinary? Ask yourself a question: “What would I do if today was the last day of my life?” I think your answer will be: “I would like it to be the best day of my
2、life.”I dont want to upset you, but nobody can ever find out what day is going to be the last. And so its better to live each day of your life as if it is the last. Im not telling you to quit(辞去) your job and spend all your money on traveling. But you can live your life to its fullest by adding some
3、 simple things to each day. It doesnt matter what is going on, but it does matter how you feel about it. Do not forget that life is too short to be unhappy! Here is my recipe for the best day on Earth!1. A Handful of HappinessWhere can you find it? Take a look inside of you! Happiness doesnt come fr
4、om the outside, it is within you. Each moment your life gives you a lot of opportunities(机会) to be happy. If you want to see them, you will. If you dont, its up to you.2. A Handful of LoveLove is the harmony(和谐) of your soul. A little love can make a big difference to the whole world. We are one. Ev
5、eryone and everything deserve(值得)your love as well as you do.“You can search(搜查) throughout the entire(整个的) universe(宇宙) for someone who is more deserving of your love and affection(感情) than you are yourself, and that person is not to be found anywhere. You yourself, as much as anybody in the entire
6、 universe, deserve your love and affection.” Buddha3. A Handful of GratitudeGratitude(感激)is one of the strongest positive(积极的) feelings. We all have something to be grateful for. If you are grateful for everything that you have, you will get more things to feel gratitude for. And this feeling makes
7、you feel good.“Let us rise up and be thankful, for if we didnt learn a lot today, at least we learned a little, and if we didnt learn a little, at least we didnt get sick, and if we got sick, at least we didnt die; so, let us all be thankful.” Buddha4. A Handful of DreamsFeel free to dream big dream
8、s and make small steps towards them. You are the creator of your life. Every time you are doing something to achieve your goals you are growing.“To dream anything that you want to dream. Thats the beauty of the human mind. To do anything that you want to do. That is the strength of the human will. T
9、o trust(信任)yourself to test your limits(极限). That is the courage(勇气)to succeed.” Bernard Edmonds5. A Handful of FreedomFeel free to do whatever you want to do! Do everything that makes you happy! Push the limits! Do you remember Yes Man movie with Jim Carrey? Always say “Yes” if you feel that it is
10、the right thing to do right now. This can be the way to your dreams.6. A Handful of CreativityTry to be creative in everything you do. Try to do your best every time you are doing something. Do not be afraid to use your imagination. Its such a pleasure to do something new. Feel the joy of creation!7
11、. A Handful of LaughterIts difficult to overestimate(高估) the role(作用) of laughter. It makes us feel good and unites us. In addition(此外) it is the best medicine! And it certainly can make any day brighter.8. A Game Life is a game. Dont take it seriously. Do you like to play games? Why not play every
12、day? Dont be afraid to lose, everybody can lose. One day you will be the winner! Our greatest glory(荣誉)is not in never falling but in rising every time we fall.9. A Handful of MagicDo you believe in magic? Well, you should. Life is full of miracles(奇迹). In fact, life itself is a big miracle. There a
13、re so many things that are beyond our understanding.“There are two ways to live: you can live as if nothing is a miracle; you can live as if everything is a miracle.” Albert Einstein10. A HolidayCelebrate(庆祝) every day of your life! Let the spirit(精神) of holiday fill each corner of your heart. Why n
14、ot? You live your life to its fullest and move towards your dreams!1.选出你最喜欢的句子(1-3句),说一说为什么。_2.谈一谈你最喜欢的本文写作技巧,说明原因。_3.诵读表演:每人一段,有感情地朗读。第二板块:写作技能1.英语写作方法六大原则1. advanced words (高级词汇原则)2. adverbial advanced (状语提前原则)3. phrases preferred (短语优先原则)pound sentence, composite sentence and sentence of special
15、kind (并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则)5. long and short sentences alternately (长短句交替原则)6. passages in paragraphs(短文分段分层原则)2.高分作文的五大特性1. sense of order (条理性: 段落完整,层次分明)2. accuracy (准确性: 语法准确,用词精当)3. fluency (流畅性: 层次清晰,行文连贯)4. conciseness & variety (简洁、多样性: 语言简洁,不重复)5. ideological content (思想性: 文章立意高,表达个人观点内容积极向上)第三板块
16、:推陈出新专题一:写景要点提示:1)景物描写既要追求独特性,也要注意其思想内涵,切忌为写景而写景。2)时态的把握主要是:栩栩如生型 以现在为核心,时态以一般现在时和现在完成时为主;往事再现型 以过去为核心,时态以一般过去时和过去进行时为主。3)风景描写或场景描写的最后都可以议论或抒情。1. scenery description_小结:_2. scene description_小结:_第四板块:通观全局1.阅读:她用爱创造奇迹An eight-year-old child heard her parents talking about her little brother. All she
17、knew was that he was very sick and they had no money. Only a very expensive operation could save him now and there was no one to lend them the money.When she heard her daddy say to her tearful mother, “Only a miracle can save him now,” the little girl went to her bedroom and pulled her money from it
18、s hiding place and counted it carefully.She hurried to a drugstore (药店) with the money in her hand.“And what do you want?” asked the salesman. “Its for my little brother,” the girl answered. “Hes really, really sick and I want to buy a miracle.” “Pardon?” said the salesman.“My brother Andrew has som
19、ething bad growing inside his head and my daddy says only a miracle can save him. So how much does a miracle cost?” “We dont sell a miracle here, child. Im sorry,” the salesman said with a smile.“Listen, if it isnt enough, I can try and get some more. Just tell me how much it costs.”A well-dressed m
20、an heard it and asked, “What kind of a miracle does your brother need?”“I dont know,” she answered with her eyes full of tears. “Hes really sick and mum says he needs an operation. But my daddy cant pay for it, so I have brought all my money.”“How much do you have?” asked the man. “$ 1.11, but I can
21、 try and get some more,” she answered.“Well, what luck,” smiled the man. “$ 1.11, the price of a miracle for little brothers.”He took up the girls hand and said, “Take me to where you live. I want to see your brother and meet your parents. Lets see if I have the kind of miracle you need.”That well-d
22、ressed man was Dr Carlton Armstrong, a famous doctor. The operation was successful and it wasnt long before Andrew was home again.How much did the miracle cost?( )1. What was the trouble in the little girls family? A. Her brother was seriously ill. B. They had no money. C. Nothing could save her bro
23、ther. D. Both A and B.( )2. In the eye of the little girl, a miracle might be _. A. something interesting B. something beautiful C. some wonderful medicine D. some good food( )3. The little girl said again and again “I can try and get some more.” That shows _. A. she had still kept some money B. she
24、 hoped not to be refused C. There was no need to worry about money D. she thought money was easy to get( )4. What made the miracle happen? A. The girls love for her brother. B. The girls money. C. The medicine from the drugstore. D. Nobody can tell.( )5. From the passage we can infer (推断) that _. A.
25、 The doctor didnt ask for any pay B. A miracle is sure to happen if you keep on C. The little girl is lovely but not so clever D. Andrew was in fact not so sick as they had thought分享:1.哪些句子让你难忘,为什么?_2.表演:5个人分别扮演:narrator, salesman, girl, Daddy, Calton,有表情地朗读全文。2.我来补充:一场可怕的暴风雨Last Friday a storm swep
26、t through two villages in the New Territories,destroying (摧毁) fourteen homes. Seven others were 1_ badly damaged(破坏)that their owners had to 2_ them,and fifteen others had broken windows or broken roofs(屋顶). One person was killed,several were badly hurt and 3_ to hospital,and a number of other peopl
27、e received smaller hurt. Altogether over two hundred people were homeless 4_ the storm.A farmer,Mr. Tan,said that the storm began early in the morning and 5_ for over an hour.“I was eating with my wife and children,”he said,“When we heard a loud noise. A few minutes later our house fell 6_ on top of
28、 us. We tried our best to climb out but then I saw that one of my children was 7_. I went back inside and found him,safe but very frightened.”Mrs. Woo Mei Fong said that her husband had just left for work 8_ she felt that her house was moving. She ran outside at once 9_ her children.“There was no time 10_ anything,”she said,“A few minutes later,the roof came down.”Soldiers helped to take people out of the flooded (水淹的) area and the welfare department (福利机构) brought them food,clothes and shelter.分享:1.说一说本文描写的思路_2.是什么原因使本文生动?_5用心 爱心 专心