高一上短文改错技巧(课堂PPT).ppt

,*,書式設定,第1,第 2,第 3,第 4,第 5,*CORPORATION,*CORPORATION,書式設定,第1,第 2,第 3,第 4,第 5,高考改错技巧,图木舒克中学,杜秀娟,The Story about Growing Pains is my favorite American,TV play because it is very interested.The play ._,tells humorous stories that happen in the Seavers ._,family.With such stories it make people think ._,about life,but therefore attracts the audience.It is ._,also a window which we can learn about American._,society.And there were many meaningful things that ._,are worth think of,such as the relationship between ._,parents and children in a lot of American family.It ._,is quite different from those in China.The play is ._,very popular.Wed better not to miss the chance ._,to enjoy it.,interesting,makes,and,are,thinking,families,that,to,the,from/through,2,如何做短文改错题,从句子的角度分析：,（,1,）查时态是否一致,1,、,They offered me coffee and other drinks,we,have,a good time talking and laughing,2,、,My favourite sport is football.I,was,a member of our football team.,3,、,I remembered her words and,calm,down.,3,（,2,）查主谓是否一致,1,、,Anyone may borrow books and,it,cost,nothing to,2,、,Playing football not only but,also,give,us,3,、,clear up mysteries.But then,there,is,always more mysteries to,look into,4,（,3,）查指代是否一致,1,、,And,they,must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.,2,、,I used to love science,class,-all of,them,-,3,、,I liked those classes because I felt that,it,helped me.,5,（,4,）查上下文修饰语是否一致,1,、,They want to know about China and ask me a lot of,question,.,2,、,We study quite a,few,subject,.,3,、,She said that she and my,classmate,all,4,、,Ill spend all the whole weekend reading and,prepare,for it.,5,、,It was very kind,for,them to meet me.,6,5,）查行文逻辑是否一致,1,、,It is a very important exam,but,I cant afford to fail it.,2,、,Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital,since,they are ill.,3,、,She was smiling,but,nodding at me.I remembered.,7,逐句找错，错在那里？,动词形，,名词数,还要注意形和副,代词,格,，,细领悟,介词短语须关注,习惯用法,要记住,冠词连词常光顾,8,此考点归纳的是除动词时态与非谓语动词之外的动词考点，它包括,被动语态、情态动词、动词形式的变化、动词用法辨析、动词,be,的误加与漏用,等。,NMET2000,：,Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library.,NMET2003,：,She liked it very much and reads it to the class.,Of course,when my mother was asked,“Have you”_,are,_,一、动词形,read,was,9,He lied down by the side of the path to rest.,(lied,改为,lay,，,lie,表示“躺”时，其过去时是,lay)(,全国卷,),(2)Charles and Linda were seeing near the top of the building.,(seeing,改为,seen,，因为从含义上看，此处谓语应用被动语态,)(,全国卷,),(3)Books may be keep for four weeks.,(keep,改为,kept,，因此处要用被动语态,)(,全国卷,),10,(11)It was very cold.The snow lied thick on the ground.,(12)There will have an English film in the school hall tonight.,(13)After that,the boy decided not to a sailor.,(14)After supper,my father would go out for a walk and then come back to see newspapers.,(15)Hear to me carefully.What Im saying is very,important.,lay,be,be,read,Listen,11,短文改错的名词考点主要涉及名词的单复数问题，即在该用复数的地方误用其单数，或在该用单数的地方误用其复数。,NMET2001,：,so that Ill get good marks,in all my subject.,NMET2003,:,Their word were a great,encouragement to me._,subjects,words,二、名词数,12,(1)We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream.(,全国卷,),(2)We climb everywhere,not only in America.We have been to Europe many time.,(3)There are branch library in many villages.,(4)I hope that you two could come and visit us some times soon.,water,times,libraries,time,13,主要涉及冠词的,误加和漏用,，有时也考查,不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词,的用法区别,(,包括,a,与,an,的区别,),。其中，涉及最多的是，,当一个单数可数名词表示泛指时，其前漏用不定冠词,；另外注意习语中的冠词,三、冠词连词常光顾,After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened.,I decided to climb the tree to see where we were.,Some people read the books or watch television,while others have sports.,(4)Good health is persons most valuable possession.,an,a,a,14,连词常光顾,We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.,I told Mother,Father,Sister,all my friends here what a great time I had.,Its an important exam but I cant afford to fail it.,She was smiling but nodding at me.,对连词的考查主要涉及,and,but,or,so,等几个表示并列、转折、选择、因果等关系的词语。严格说来，这类错误主要属于行文逻辑的错误。,but,and,and,and,15,1.,I would describe myself as shy and quietly.,2.,He asked angry if we had finished the work.,quiet,angrily,四、还要注意形和副,16,短文改错对形容词与副词的考查主要涉及形容词和副词,比较等级的误用,(,尤其是在本身已是比较级的词前误加,more),、形容词与副词的混用,(,如修饰动词时误用形容词或修饰名词时误用副词,),等，另外，用作表语时该用形容词的却误用了名词、简短副词,(,如,in,down,等,),的误加与漏用、涉及形容词搭配的,as,as,结构、,how,与,what,的混用等也是常考的考点。,17,After an hour or so we began to feel very frightening.,Charles said,“As soon as I see a realy tall building,I want to climb it.,Last Sunday,police cars hurry to the taller building in New York.,As a result,people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.,For instance,one night he played strong and loudly music till four oclock in the morning.,frightened,really,tallest,loud,18,主要有,现在分词、过去分词，动名词,和,不定式,错误。例如：,My parents love me,and will do all they can make sure,2.,We fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.,3.,Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper.,to,visited,talking,五、非谓语，细辨别,19,主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：,多词、少词和搭配错误,。例如：,1:,Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher.,2:,My teacher advised me to keep my diary.,a,六、习惯用法要记牢,20,不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：,1:,I don,t know that they don,t,like to talk with me.,2,：,I live in Beijing,，,where is the,capital of China.,why,which,七、句子成分多分析,21,(1)In the last five years that theyve climbed churches,high buildings and television towers.,(2)Charles said,“As soon I see a really tall building,I want to climb it.,(1)He is the man his car was stolen.,(2)Thats the hotel which we were staying last summer.,(3)Thats the palace where we visited last summer.,(4)I suddenly woke up in mid-night.And it was a long time I got to sleep again.,(5)In the past few years when weve planted thousands of trees along the river,as,whose,where,Which/that,before,22,短文改错应注意的问题,四不改,:,标点符号不改。,大小写不改。,词序错误不改。,（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来改,),。,在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，,在句中不可能用错。,23,At Christmas Eve,Jim went with his,1._,father to choose a Christmas tree.They choose,2._,a big one.It was almost as taller as the room!,3._,They put them in the corner of the sitting,4._,_,On,_,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,代词格，细领悟,24,room.Kate was covered it with a lot of,5._,Christmas light.The sitting room looked,6._,really beautifully at the moment.There was,7._,a fire burning in the fire place,but the Christmas,8._,tree lights are shinning brightly.Jim and his,9._,parents singing and dancing happily.,10._,was,_,lights,_,_,beautiful,_,and,were,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,冠词连词须关注,_,25,I often dream of a teacher.I dream of standing on the _ platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys ._ and girls.I teach them,play with them,but watch them ._ growing up.I am always young when I was staying ._ with them.I know there is not easy to be a teacher.You ._ have to learn in order to teach.Without enough knowledges ._ you can never learn well.What is more,you have to be ._ friends with your pupils and take good care of him._ Only in this way can you are a good teacher and win _ respect from them.Though I am a student now,I will work as very hard to make my dream come true._,being,giving,and,am,it,knowledge,teach,them,be,Practice,26,I love camping.Its my favorite way to spent the,summer vacation.Last year,my family and I went,camping in the countryside.It was one of the most excited,experiences I had never had.We slept in a tent and went,on a long walk every day.We cook over a fire and the,food always tasted wonderfully.For a whole week,I,saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air.At night,I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree,and I felt so,peaceful.It doesnt cost much to camp,and what I believe,its the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.,27,1.Dont lose hearts,youll be successful in time.1_2.I need some more informations.2_3.,These machines look the same,but they are of different kind.,3_4.,People remember him for his contribution to the country.,4_,heart,information,kinds,contributions,名词和数词,返回,28,1.At,a,very beginning,I choose a play and actors.1_the_2.You cant consider him a honest man.2_3.,In China,children usually start school at an age of seven,.3_4.The play is set in the Paris.4_5.,It is necessary for the teachers to add the art to their teachings.,5_6.I cant stop because Im in hurry.6_,an,the,the,the,a,冠 词,返回,29,1.Knowing is one thing;doing is other.1_2.This is the best film which I have ever seen.2_3.I also enjoyed the days when we spent together.3_4.The ones what you decide not to keep can be traded with other people.4_5.He drove too fast,and the police stopped her and handed him a ticket.5_,another,that,that/which/x,that/which/x,him,代 词,返回,30,1.Though it was cold,but he went out without a cat.1_2.He likes sports,but I like music.2_3.Pick out the wrong sentences but correct them.3_4.Work hard,and youll succeed sooner and later.4_5.,Whatever you do,and Ill be right here waiting for you.,5_6.,This kind of car costs a lot of money,and he can afford it.,6_,but,but,and,or,while,and,连 词,返回,31,1.She look like enjoying the concert the other day.1_2.Water pollution often bring on disease.2_3.,The students watches the teacher doing the experiment,.3_4.He care for collecting coins.4_5.So far,he made a living by picking up wastes.5_6.The young man dressed in blue are my brother.6_7.,The church burned down yesterday date from the 18,th,century.7_,8.He is said saving money to by a bicycle.8_9.Money is spend to look after people with illnesses.9_10.She was persuaded taking the job.10_11.,Compare to 1992,the price of grain was increased about 50%.11_,12.Judge From his accent,he is a southerner.12_13.She is used to live in the country at present.13_14.We should stop the children from play fire.14_15.,With a boy led the way,they started towards the village.,15_,looked,brings,watch,cares,has,is,dates,to save,looking,to take,Compared,Judging,living,playing,leading,动 词,返回,32,1.By the time when he was 15,he had had his own lab.1_,2.The bad news made us feel sadly.2_,3.,Are you certainly that he will help us check the information?,3_,4.,The children learn to read and write,they play games as good.,4_,5.He set off for work an hour before.5_,6.I hate him as many as you do.6_,7.he was caught in a heavily rain.7_,8.Its not good to keep children busily with their studies all day long.8_,when,sad,certain,well,ago,much,heavy,busy,形容词和副词,返回,33,巩固练习,Another problem is that good soil is gradual lost.1_When trees is cut down,there is nothing to hold 2_the soil in the place on the hillside.So when it 3_rained,the soil is washed down the hills and into 4_the rivers.Strong winds can also blow out the 5_valuable soil lies on the top of the fields.6_,gradually,are,the,rains,away,which/that,34,