优秀满分作文3.doc

假设Linda是你的好朋友，你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来，你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示，简要介绍Linda的变化。
提示：1.外貌：以前个子矮，短发；现在个子高多了，长发。
2.爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天；现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。
3.性格：以前外向；现在有些内向。
要求：1.不要逐字翻译，适当发挥；
2.层次清晰，语言流畅；
3.80词左右。

【优秀满分范文】

Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years. 

She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite. 

I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.

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背景设定：最近，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件，想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏，请根据以下提示，给Miachael回一封电子邮件。

过去
生活条件差，道路狭窄，车辆少，住不好，吃不饱，联系不便......
现在
生活条件优越，道路宽，车辆多，住得舒适，手机普及......
要求：1.围绕以上内容进行合理表述；
2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；
3.词数80词左右，开头语以给出（不计入词数）。
参考词汇：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯)，telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Michael,

You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.

In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.

Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.
Sincerely
Kang Min