高考英语作文模板求助信篇名师优质课获奖市赛课一等奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,本幻灯片资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据，如有不当之处，请参考专业资料。,17.求助信,第1页,文体概述,求援信是当个人碰到一些自己无法处理问题或困难时向他人请求帮助一个书信。通常包含三部分内容：,1.表明写信目标，请求帮助。,2.要清楚陈说请求帮助详细内容。,3.希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感激。,第2页,惯用语块,做某事有麻烦 _,2.给某人帮助 _,3.寻求帮助 _,4.碰到一些问题 _,5.面临困难 _,have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth.,do sb.a favor/give sb.a hand,ask for help/seek for help,encounter some problems,be faced with difficulties,第3页,6.忙于做某事,_,7.为某事做准备 _,8.集中精力 _,9.学以致用 _,10.让某人失望 _,let sb.down,be busy doing sth./be engaged in doing sth.,prepare for sth.,concentrate on/focus on,putinto use,第4页,11.克服恐惧 _,12.取得巨大进步_,13.渴望做某事,_,14.提供一些有建设性指导,_,15.因某事感激某人_,be grateful to sb.for sth.,overcome the fear,make great progress,be anxious to do sth./long to do sth.,offer some constructive guidance,第5页,套用句式,我写信想请您帮我一个忙。,2.我碰到三个困扰我问题。首先，其次，最困扰我是,3.不幸是，我以为做某事很困难。,3.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite difficult/hard to do sth.,1.I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand.,2.I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot.To begin with,Whats more,What troubles me most is,第6页,4.面对以上问题，我渴望得到你帮助。你能给予我一些关于提议吗？,5.我想知道你能否帮助我处理这些问题。假如你能帮助我，我将感激不尽。,4.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help.Would you please offer me some advice on?,5.I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties.I really appreciate it if you could help me.,第7页,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文),Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua,the Chinese student takes summer,courses in your university.I am writing to ask for help.,I come here last month and found my courses,interested.And I have some difficulties with note-,taking and I have no idea of what to use the library.,a,taking,came,interesting,But,how,第8页,I told that the Learning Center provides help for,students and I am anxious to get help from you.,I have no class in Tuesday mornings and Friday,afternoons.Please let me know which day is OK with you.You may email or call to me.Here is my email address and phone number:lihua;12345678.,Im looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,was,on,are,第9页,1.the a此处表示“一个”学生，表泛指，要用冠词a。,2.takes taking此处是非谓语，且与逻辑主语是主动关系，故用现在分词taking。,e came由后面last month可知，要用普通过去时。,4.interested interesting此处是指courses令人有趣，是修饰物。,5.And But依据上下文逻辑关系，此处应该表示“转折”，而不是“递进”。,第10页,6.what how依据句意应该是不知道怎样使用图书馆，故用how。,7.在told前加was此处表示“我被通知”，应该用被动语态，且是在写信前被通知，故用普通过去时被动语态。,8.in on详细指“星期几下午/早晨”，要用介词on。,9.去掉call后to因为call是及物动词。,10.is are此句是倒装句，主语是my email address and phone number，故用are。,第11页,课堂练习,假定你是李华，你正在为高考担心复习，但最近你碰到了一些问题造成无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校外籍心理老师Kate写一封求援信寻求帮助。关键点以下：,1.作业多，没有时间运动。,2.压力大，难以入睡。,3.希望得到Kate帮助。,注意：,1.词数100左右。,2.能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,第12页,Dear Kate,I am Li Hua,a Senior 3 student,.Recently,Ive,been busy preparing for,my College Entrance Exam,but unfortunately I,find it quite hard to concentrate on,my study.So Im writing to,ask you for help,.,Im,encountering,some problems which,trouble,me a lot.First,I have to,spend so much time on,my homework that I hardly have time to,take sports.,第13页,Moreover,the high expectation from,the teachers and my parents makes me extremely,stressful,because I dont want to,let them down.What troubles me most is that,its difficult for me to fall asleep every night.,Faced with the above problems,Im anxious to,get your help.Could you please,offer me some advice on,how to solve these problems?,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,第14页,课外作业,假定你是李华，当前你在英语学习方面碰到了一些问题。于是你向你校外籍老师Tom写一封求援信寻求帮助。关键点以下：,1.本人介绍。,2.求援内容。,3.希望得到Tom帮助。,注意,：1.词数100左右。,2.能够适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,第15页,Dear Tom,Im Li Hua,a Senior 3 student in your school.Currently,I,m having trouble learning,English.So Im writing to ask you for help.,Therere two main problems I,m faced with,now.First,I,find it quite hard to master,the English,grammatical rules,and put them into use.Furthermore,so nervous do I feel,in front of my classmates,that,I cant say a word in English.,第16页,Therefore,I sincerely hope you can,offer me some advice on,how to study English grammar and how to,overcome my fear of,speaking English.,I have the confidence that with your help,I can,conquer,my English.,I really appreciate it if,you could help me.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,第17页,