山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练-短文改错+写作(17).doc

山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（17）短文改错When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory. 1. _But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 2. _to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 3. _saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 4. _like to have. One of the answers he accepted was from a man 5. _was looking for a job, too. This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 6. _when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 7. _ address to your present boss as I have been trying to find 8. _a position like yours for a long time. ” After he reads the letter, 9. _he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish. 10. _书面表达假如你是李华，目睹了近年来你所在城市的变化。你写了一篇有关城市变化及所带来的思考的短文寄给某英语报社。短文包括城市的变化，并表达你的感受和建议：在建设和发展的同时，还应加强文物和古迹保护，以传承文化。几年前满街小商铺，小卖摊点，拥挤，垃圾现在街道宽敞，沿街种植了绿树和鲜花，新建了公园和高楼注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：摊点：stalls 历史文物historical relics1. work 改成job 2. 去掉been 3. change前加 a4. experiences改成 experience 5. accepted改成 received6. 去掉was 或was前加 who 7. your改成 my 8. 正确9. reads 改成read 10. real 改成reallyOur city has changed greatly over the last few years. Streets used to be narrow, with old buildings and stalls crowded together, and litter everywhere. Nowadays the streets are wider, cleaner and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks. However, in creating a more modern city some tradition has been lost. Some of the historical buildings have been torn down and highrise buildings and parks have been built in their place. The ancient culture has disappeared, and our city has become the same as all other cities: modern, clean but without its own special character. Are all changes good changes? I think we should do something to protect our historical relics at the same time. 2用心 爱心 专心