写作技巧09-风格独具的“特殊句式”.doc

层级九 风格独具的“特殊句式”
在写作中，倒装和省略句型应用比较广泛，这两种句型的巧妙应用是作文得高分的助力。
■ 美句输入
一、常用的倒装句式
1.“only＋状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。
Only in this way can we experience the pleasure of working.(2019·北京卷满分作文)
只有以这种方式，我们才能体会到劳动的乐趣。
2.none，neither，nor，not，never，hardly，little，seldom等否定词，以及由no构成的否定短语(如at no time，by no means等)置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。
Not only can you enjoy many music masterpieces but also you can take the chance to perform your favorite music.(2019·全国卷Ⅲ满分作文)
你不但能欣赏到音乐杰作，而且你也能够抓住机会表演你最喜欢的音乐。
No sooner/Hardly had he finished his talk than/when he was surrounded by the excited workers.
他刚一结束讲话就被兴奋的工人们围了起来。
3.在so/such...that...结构中，当so/such...位于句首时，其后的句子用部分倒装。
So attractive and alive do they look that I think you could be interested in it.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)
它们看起来如此迷人和生动，以至于我想你可能对它感兴趣。
4.as/though引导的让步状语从句，有时将形容词、副词、名词等放在句首引起倒装。
Busy though/as I am with the lessons，I have managed to find time to hang out with my friends.(2017·天津卷书面表达)
尽管忙着上课，我还是设法挤出时间和朋友们出去玩。
5.here，there，now，then，out，in，up，down，on the wall，in the room等表示地点、时间或方位的副词或介词短语置于句首，且主语是名词而不是代词时，句子用全部倒装。
In that picture，around the table with three books on it sit three students.(上海卷满分作文)
在图画中，三个学生围坐在桌子周围，桌子上有三本书。
二、常用的省略句式
1.if/unless/when/while/once等＋从句省略结构
If interested in it，please send an email to 123456@.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ满分作文)
如果有兴趣，请发送电子邮件到123456@。
2.if possible/necessary/not/so/any/ever等固定结构
If so，please come to the Student Union and sign up before April 5.
如果这样的话，请在4月5日之前来学生会报名。
■ 佳句输出
Ⅰ.补全句子
1.Only when you come to China can you experience Chinese food culture.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)
只有当你来到中国时，你才能体验中国的饮食文化。
2.Not only do his poems have a strong influence on the Chinese literature，but also his poems have been translated into many foreign languages.(北京卷满分作文)
他的诗歌不仅对中国文学有很大的影响，而且还被翻译成多种外语。
3.On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。
4.So carelessly did he drive that he almost killed himself.
他开车如此粗心，以至于差点把自己害死了。
5.Only in this way can the government solve the pollution problem completely.
只有用这种方法政府才能彻底解决污染问题。
6.In front of our school stands a tall tree with a history of 1，000 years.
我们学校前面有一棵1 000年树龄的大树。
Ⅱ.同义句转换
1.Though he is a child，he knows a lot about astronomy.(改为倒装句)
→Child as/though he is，he knows a lot about astronomy.
2.It not only affects our daily life，but it also puts people’s lives at risk.(改为倒装句)
→Not only does it affect our daily life，but it also puts people’s lives at risk.
3.While/When he was writing the book，Li Shizhen suffered a lot from tasting some unknown plants on his own.(改为省略句)
→While/When writing the book，Li Shizhen suffered a lot from tasting some unknown plants on his own.
■ 完美文章(感谢信)
利用倒装句和省略句，结合中文提示补全短文并背诵
【题目要求】
(2020·秦皇岛高三模拟)假定你是李华，最近，你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习。学习期间，你和房东Mr.Wilson结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲，给Mr.Wilson发一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1.表示感谢；2.回顾他对你的照顾和帮助；3.邀请他来中国游览。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考生作文】
Dear Mr.Wilson，
How is everything going？I’ve been back home now.I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness.
1.While in England(当我在英国时)，your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable.Only when I am back home 2.do I realize (我才意识到)how I miss the days we spent together！Thanks to your help，not only 3.did I get used to the lifestyle there soon(快速习惯于那里的生活方式)，but also I made much progress in my oral English.I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me.Besides，I really appreciate your patience 4.while talking with me(当与我交谈时).By practising talking with you every day，I gradually improve my spoken English.
I hope we can keep in touch and communicate with each other in the future.It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China so that you can experience Chinese culture.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
■ 常用表达
Ⅰ.首段常用语
1.I am writing to express my thanks for...
我写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意。
2.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...
在信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。
3.On behalf of my whole family，I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for...
我谨代表我全家对……表示真诚的感激。
Ⅱ.中段常用语
1.Through your teaching，our oral English has considerably improved.In the meanwhile，you teach us not only English but also British culture as well，which really broadens our horizons.Above all，you have remarkable talent and professional skills to make your class lively and interesting.For us your class is a perfect mix of fun and learning.通过您的教学，我们的英语口语有了很大的提高。同时，您不仅教我们英语，还教我们英国文化，这确实拓宽了我们的视野。最重要的是，您有非凡的天赋和专业的技能，这使您的课堂生动有趣。对我们来说，您的课是乐趣和学习的完美结合。
2.Thanks to your efforts and devotion，our English，especially oral English has improved a lot.Words fail to express how grateful we are!
多亏了您的努力和奉献，我们的英语，特别是口语有了很大的进步。言语无法表达我们的感激之情！
3.Without your guidance，I couldn’t have won first prize in the competition.In spite of your busy schedule，you set aside a few days to teach me more pronunciation skills and background knowledge.Besides，the books you recommended are very helpful and I still refer to them often.没有您的指导，我不可能在比赛中获得一等奖。尽管您的日程安排很繁忙，您还是留出了几天时间来教我更多的发音技巧和背景知识。此外，您推荐的书非常有用，我仍然经常参考它们。
Ⅲ.尾段常用语
1.Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.
没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们会永远牢记在心。
2.Thanks again for your kind and generous help.
对您友善、慷慨的帮助再次表示感谢。
3.I appreciate it more than I can say./I can never thank you enough.
感激之情，无以言表。