成人学位英语作文部分范文解析.doc

考试作文速成模板——图表篇
成教学位英语考试作文五大类型的速成模版,即:图表分析型、对比论述型、问题解决型、道理阐述型和情景应用型。写作模版在字数要求、主题确立、布局谋篇和语言表达等四个方面都给出了具体的指导。一旦掌握了这些模版,考生即可按照作文题目的要求,综合作文题意和主题内容,
选择相应的模版,快速完成作文写作。
1图表分析型作文模版【写作模版1】
一The table/figure/graph/chart shows that from___to____二It is self-evident that,___三Three possible reasons contribute to___四One reason is that___五another reason is that ____六For instance,__七What's more___八As a result,_ 九However, in my opinion___十For one thing,_____十一For another, ___十二To sum up,____
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①图表总体描述(指出年代②指出突出的数据变化③具体表示急剧上升、下降或特殊现象的词或指代词代替上文内容④第一原因5第二原因⑥举例证⑦最后一个原因⑧总结上文⑨作者自己的观点或看法⑩论点⑾论点⑿总结上文
College Students Spending More Time on Computers 【模版例文】
①The chart shows that students are now spending much more time on the computer, from one hour to four hours per week from 1990to 1995.
②It is self-evident that it increases sharply to twenty hours in the year of 2000.
③Three possible reasons contribute to this phenomenon.
④One reason is that most college students now can afford a personal computer due to the sharp decline in its price.
⑤Another reason is that they find the computer a wonderful thing to have fun with.
⑥For instance, they can chat through QQ or playing games online.
⑦What's more, from Internet, they can learn things much more quickly than simply from reading books so that they can secure a good job in the future .
⑧As a result, all these lead to much more time spent on using computers.
⑨However, in my opinion, there are some complaints from both teachers and students.
⑩For one thing, students complain about the less availability of computers and slow speed of the network.
11For another,some teachers worry that the much more time spent playing computer games or surfing online will lead students to ignore their studies and even do cheating instead of doing research by their own.
12To sum up,in spite of problems concerning the use of computer, computer is sti
ll of more merits than defects.
问题解决型作文模版【写作模版4】
①Because of ____ great changes have been taken place in______.②Particularly,___. ③Besides,_____.
④As we know, there are several ways for __ to___choose. ⑤Above all, ____.⑥Secondly,______.
⑦Furthermore,___.⑧And finally,_____. ⑨As far as I am concerned,_____.⑩In the first place,_ __.⑾ In the second place,____.⑿Therefore,___.
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①问题出现的背景②提出问题③对问题进一步解释说明④提出解决问题的方法⑤方法一⑥方法二⑦方法三⑧方法四⑨我的做法⑩论点总结全文
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How I Overcame Difficulties in Learning English Like many other English learners, I found a lot of difficulties in learning English. Firstly, I found it difficult to understand what I read because most English words have more than one meaning. Besides, I found it difficult to write idiomatic English or translate Chinese into idiomatic English. Finally, my oral English was weak because I had no opportunity to communicate with native English speakers. Although I often read aloud, this didn't prove to be an effective way to improve my spoken English.But I didn't lose heart in overcoming these obstacles. I tackled English vocabulary in two ways. First, I tried to understand and memorize the specific meaning of a word in its context. Second, I enlarge my vocabulary by breaking words
up into roots and affixes and memorize them in connection with the words of the same roots or affixes. To overcome Chinese English, I tried to think in English directly. Although I haven’t had any opportunity to communicate with native speakers, I have tried to improve my spoken English by listening to English broadcasts and writing English compositions. These experiences have turned out to be effective. I am feeling very confident in myself while sitting here for passing my degree English today.
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①With the development of____,____.②So it is of great importance for us to____.③On the one hand,___.④On the other hand,___. ⑤To us___, we have figured out many ways to___.⑥First,___⑦Second,____.⑧Finally, _____.⑨In a word,____. ⑩To sum up,___. ⑾It is high time for us to_____. ⑿Therefore, we must____.
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①问题出现的背景②提出问题③必要性或后果④必要性或后果2 ⑤提出解决问题的方法⑥方法1⑦方法2⑧
方法3⑨总结上文⑩重申主题; 进一步强调主题; 总结全文
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How I Finance My College Education? With the rapid development of higher education in China, more high school graduates admitted, exclusively the government can no longer finance universities and students must pay at least partly for their schooling. There are various ways for a student to pay his tuition and fees. To begin with, if the student is quite excellent in his studies, he can apply for scholarship. Secondly, especially in China, he can always depend on his parents for all kinds of expenditure, including living allowances. Then, he can choose to turn to the bank to for a loan to pay his education, which he can repay after graduation. If he finds the entire above not desirable, he still has another road to take-to do a part-time job and work his way through college. In my case, I am fortunate enough to be born into a well-to-do family and have no difficulty having my parents pay for all my fees. as a college student, I dislike a totally dependent existence, so I am working part-time as a newspaper-boy to help support myself. And I am still studying hard, hoping to win a scholarship one day so that I can be wholly self-reliant and independent.
考试作文速成模板——情景应用篇
5情景应用型作文模版
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(Date:__ Dear__, ①I am delighted to learn that___ . ②You are welcome to___ .③I am sure_____.
④As for____ , I am thinking about___.⑤On the one hand, ___.⑥0n the other hand,_____.If____⑧As to the___, I suggest_____.⑨Of course____. ⑩By the way, ____. ⑾In addition,___.⑿I am looking forward to__. Yours truly,
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①写信原因②表示欢迎③期待④主题词+建议⑤建议1⑥建议2 ⑦让步条件进一步论证⑧建议的具体内容⑨其他的建议⑩提醒注意事项1; 注意事2; 寒暄结束语
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Require About How to Choose a Good Major in the University
June 7th , 2006 Dear Susan, ①I am delighted to learn that you are going to apply for admission to my university. ② You are welcome to be my schoolmate.②I am sure you will be successful.
③As for the specific major you apply for, I am thinking about the international economics course.
④On the one hand, this is one of the best specialized programs in the university. ⑤On the other hand, in today’s society, students majoring in international economics are more likely to find a good job.⑥If you have more ideas, please let me know. ⑦As to the basic requirements to be cons I dered for admissions, I suggest you reach the minimum scare set for admission to key universities in the College Entrance Exams first. ⑧Of course, you have to satisfy the special requirements in mathematics and be good at computer and English. ⑨By the way, in order to prepare for the exams, I suggest you pay attention to all the high school subjects, and maintain a balance between them.
⑩In addition. I am also going to mail you some math's revision materials and a set of New Concept English which will be of great help, I bet. ⑾I am looking forward to good news from you. Yours truly, Tom
【写作模版】 Dear, ①This letter comes to you from_______ . ②In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon. ③As you know, _______. ④But unfortunately, we don’t find___ sometimes.
⑤For one thing,____.⑥For another, _____.⑦what's more, _________.⑧Honestly speaking,_________.
⑨For example,___.⑩And__________⑾But there is still much room for improvement. ⑿I do believe____________. Sincerely yours, (Signature:
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①写信人姓名及身份②写信目的③主题词④主题句⑤问题⑥问题⑦问题⑧承认好的方面⑨举例⑩举例复述观点;提出愿望
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Complain about the Dining Service in School
January 6th , 2007 Dear Mr. President, ①This letter comes to you from one of your students. ②In it, some opinions are put forward for you to think about. ③As you know, students of us go to the dining-hall three times each day. ④But unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes.⑤For one thing, the food is not nutritious as it should be. ⑥For another, the fare is a little higher than we can afford. ⑦What's more, sometimes the staff in the dining-hall just bring us steamed bread with their bare hands and you can‘t imagine how dirty they are! ⑧Honestly speaking, some measures have been taken and things are improving there. ⑨For example, IC cards have taken the place of money in the canteen. ⑩And the attitude of the staff is also changing a little bit. ⑾But there is still much room for improvement. ⑿I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solve the problems there and make it a better place our students.
考试作文速成模板——道理阐述篇道理阐述型作文模版
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①It is well-accepted that(__.②For instance, (__ _.③Besides, ( . ④Furthermore, ( . ⑤Not to mention( . ⑥In spite of all these,___.⑦To begin with,____.⑧At the same time,___.⑨Finally___.⑩Thu___.⑾In short,___.⑿It pays to___.
【模版要素】①提出主题或现象②举1 ③举例2 ④举3 ⑤举例4 ⑥主题词⑦论证123 ⑩小结上文; 总结全文; 深化主题,回应全文
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①It is well-accepted that nowadays dishonesty is a common phenomenon in society. ② For instance, many good-hearted doctors would not tell dying patients about their real condition. ③Besides, poor students tend to cheat on exams. ④Furthermore, greedy advertisers, armed with misleading advertisements, may lure customers into buying fake commodities. ⑤Not to mention such "decent" and famous figures as Liu Xiaoqing, used to be considered as China' s movie queen, have cheated the government on income taxes. ⑥1n spite of all these, honesty is always regarded as an important part of the human character. ⑦To begin with, if you treat others fairly, those associating with you will certainly profit from your sincerity. ⑧At the same time, a sense of trust builds up in their hearts, which, in turn, will earn you more true friends. ⑨Finally, that will benefit you in the long run. ⑩Thus it is essential for everyone to maintain an honest attitude towards the whole society. ⑾In short, honesty wins trust, respect and honor.⑿It pays to be honest.
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①It is well-known that . ②For example,____.③And____ . ④What's more,___.⑤Even____. ⑥However,___ . ⑦First of all,____.⑧Meanwhile,____.⑨And___ .⑩Therefore,___.⑾In a word, _______. ⑿We should___.
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①提出主题或现象②举例1③举例2 ④举例3 ⑤举例4 ⑥主题词⑦论证1 ⑧论证2 ⑨论3 ⑩小结上文,做好过渡总结全文; 强调主题论点
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Fight Against the Fake Commodities.
①It is well-known that with the development of economy, fake commodities prevail in many places
of our country.②For example, fake medicines and fake diplomas are widespread all over the country.
③And there are many reasons explaining this phenomenon, one of which is that some profiteers, regardless of people's interest, can’t wait to make a fortune; They just take risk making and selling fake commodities. ④What’s more, the punishment is not severe enough to stop the violators.
⑤Even the violators are not afraid of it. ⑥However, fake commodities are extremely harmful to consumers as well as to the whole society. ⑦First of all, fake commodities may cause losses to consumers. ⑧Meanwhile, fake commodities may harm people's health, sometimes even lives.
⑨And in the 1998 fatal alcohol poisoning case in Shanxi Province, for example, a peasant produced "alcohol", dreaming of becoming rich overnight; Which, with 27 people killed and about 700 poisoned, caused great sufferings to the victims and shocked the whole country as well.⑩Therefore, it is really high time we took measures to crack down on the production and sale of fake commodities. ⑾In a word, fake commodities are really harmful to everyone concerned. ⑿we should fight against the fake commodities.
范文
Overseas Study at an Early Age
1.目前很多父母在孩子高中毕业前就送他们出国学习
2.导致这种趋势的原因
3.我对此的看法
Nowadays more and more parents are eager to send their children to study abroad before they finish high school by whatever means and at whatever cost. It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas because they place high expectations on their children. They are encouraged by the success stories of those who have completed their overseas study. With the development of economy, companies and institutions at home are giving more and more emphasis on overseas experiences, too. Consequently, pursuing overseas study became a kind of short cut in gaining a better future. Moreover, there is still one underlying reason for this rush-economic reason. The rapid economic progress in the past few years in China has enabled more and more parents to afford the huge cost for their children’s overseas study.As for me,overseas study is surely a helpful way to get both advanced knowledge and necessary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither necessary nor beneficial. The students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves. I do think that overseas study can contribute to one’s self-improvement, but it’s better to be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and livin g on his own.
题目:爱是人类普遍而伟大的感情,请以“love”为题,写一篇100单词左右的英语小短文。文章每一段的前一句话已经给出。1Love plays an important part in this world today.2The love between you and your parents is a specials love.
3There are other kinds of love.
【范文】Love
Love plays an important part in this world today. With the increasing modernization of society,relationship between people are becoming looser and looser. It is difficult to imagine what they would be like if there were no love for each other. Love is the caring and concern for, and understanding of other people and the acceptance of their strength and weaknesses. To love and to be loved is the true happiness in life.The love between you and your parents is a special one. This love, as any other sincere love, must be honest and be shared by both parents and children. The love of parents is a great support in their children's lives. It will remain with them and help them overcome all the difficulties and make them feel secure.There are other kinds of love. Love between friends, partners, human beings and animals. The power of love makes us endure the difficulties in our lives, even though we may not have the chance to think about it, it maybe be kept alive deeply in our heart.
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该文逻辑清晰,词语简练,先从“爱”的普遍意义谈起,说到“爱”的含义,“爱”对我们的重要。在第二段里又重点地谈了谈父
母和孩子之间的“爱”,然后结尾处点到了其他种类的“爱”。有序有节,完整精干。并不是好文章必须追求艰涩的词语,平易
的语言只要运用得当,也会有极好的效果。
作文地带提纲:1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员 2. 引起此现象的原因你的看法● 审题概述本文是一篇论述大学生报考公务员人数增多的原因和对此的看法。第一段
,主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段,侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段,重点谈自己对此的观点。
【参考范文】
Craze for Civil Service Examinations
Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s a lso gaining popularity among science and engineering students. In the final analysis,
this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors –ambitions and comforts. On one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as