高三英语书面表达--建议信.doc

高三英语书面表达—— 建议信

【学习目标】
学习建议信的写法，掌握建议信的常用短语和句型，正确撰写建议信。
【学习重点】
掌握建议信的常用短语和句型。
【学习难点】
组织恰当的语言，正确撰写建议信。
【学习内容】

文体概述: 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：
1. 说明写信目的。
2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。
3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。

一、美文欣赏：
假如你收到一封叫 Flower 的网友写来的一封信，她向你询问如何交友，请给她回一封信，并提出建议。
提示：1.交朋友首先要对别人友善；
　　　2.要使陌生人感到亲切，不管他在何处，关心别人胜过自己；
　　　3.与别人有分歧时不吵架，要商量；
　　　4.不要相信危急时刻背弃朋友的人，因为“患难见真情”。
Dear Flower,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. Everyone needs friends, so how to make friends is very important. I would like to put forward the following suggestions.
　First of all, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with others. Secondly, if I were you, I would look after others more than myself. In my opinion, it will be better to make the stranger feel easy. If you have different opinions, you can discuss with others .I don't think it necessary to quarrel with them. Finally, don't trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
　 I trust you will take good consideration of my suggestion. I hope everything goes on well with you, and you'll make a lot of good friends.
Yours truly,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Simon
二、 常用语块
1. 给某人提建议 ________________________
2. 如下 ________________________
3. 在做某事时遇到困难 _____________________
4. 利用 ________________________
5. 向某人征求意见________________________
6. 制订计划 _______________________
7. 认为……有用 _______________________
8. 参加 _______________________
9. 听从某人的建议 _______________________
10. 把……考虑在内_______________________
11. 得到改善 ________________________
12. 有所好转 ________________________
13. 依我看来 ________________________
14. 我已收到你的来信，得知你……________________________
15. 我建议…… ________________________
三、 常用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助的。
_____________________________________________________________________
3. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。
_____________________________________________________________________
4. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。
_____________________________________________________________________
5. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
_____________________________________________________________________
四、 写作模板
Dear ______,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to ___________ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.
In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions. To begin with, you’d better Besides, if I were you, I would . Moreover, I would like to suggest that .
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
I am looking forward to your reply and wish you a good work.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
五、习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)
Dear Roy,
I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice to how to learn Chinese well.
Here are few suggestions. First, this is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
Beside, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easier. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese.
Try and write to me in Chinese the next time.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
六、实战演练
假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生Jenny。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深夜哭泣。对此，请你给Jenny写一封建议信，要点如下：
1. 鼓励Jenny坚定求学信念，志存高远。
2. 就Jenny的目前状况，提两到三个建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Jenny,
I am so glad to have a talk with you.
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Wish you happy every day.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
附 录
Para 1. Purpose of the letter 建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter, I am sorry to know that you are not good at …
2．I am very glad to hear that you want to…
3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter
4.I am writing to you for the purpose of -----
5 I am writing to share some advice with you.
6 In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.
Para 2. Giving advices 建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议，井然有序。
1.first，firstly，secondly, then，after that，in the end, finally, meanwhile ．
2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could ---- 我想如果你能----可能会更好
3.You’d better do sth 你最好做…
4.It is useful/helpful/necessary/important for sb. to do sth.
5.It can help you if you can…
6.It should be a good idea for you to do…
7.It will certainly help a lot to do sth / It also helps to do sth
8.In my opinion, it would be better if you do…
9.If I were you, I would…
10.You may consider doing…
Para 3. Summing up advices 建议信结尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into account.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。
3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
4. I believe you will take my advice into consideration. 我相信你会考虑我的建议。
5.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 我觉得只要你坚持做这些肯定会受益无穷的。
6. I’m willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need. 无论何时，只要你需要我都会和你深入探讨这个问题。

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