高中英语-Unit-4-Pygmalion-Section-4-Guided-WritingPPT-.pptx

PygmalionUnit 4 Section Guided Writing第第1页页【写作技巧】1.明确写英语故事基本要素英语故事属于记叙文，进行这类写作时，普通需要把握好记叙文六个要素，即when(时间)，where(地点)，what(事件)，who(人物)，why(原因)，how(方式)。尽管不是每篇英语记叙文都一定要将这些要素全部包含进去，不过，确定写作内容、搜集写作素材必定要围绕这些要素进行。怎样写英语故事第第2页页2.确定写作人称和故事展开次序写故事时要注意人称，用第一人称主要是以“参加者”身份介绍本人经历或耳闻目睹之事；用第三人称则主要是以“观察者”身份介绍他人经历和事情。不过在用第一人称时，不要过多地使用“I”，“we”，以免给人单调乏味感觉；在以第三人称进行叙述时，要防止过多评论，以至失去故事客观性。在确定了叙述角度后，还要确定以何种次序展开记叙。讲述故事时最常见方式是以时间为线索交代故事发生、发展和结局。这么，文章层次清楚，脉络分明，有较强整体感。第第3页页3.正确把握语态，提升语言准确性英语故事往往介绍过去发生事，所以通常使用过去时态。故事结束后描写从中吸收教训或故事发展后续则惯用普通现在时或未来时。4.选择使用情感性词汇，提升文章感染力英语故事写作中可使用一些情感性词汇来提升文章感染力，这类词汇有：even,still,only,hardly,almost,indeed,certainly,to ones joy/surprise/disappointment，fortunately等。第第4页页【惯用句型】1.开头用语one day,on a Sunday morning,long long ago,many years ago,once upon a time2.记叙过程用语：There was/were/lived,There used to be,When I saw/heardIimmediately.On seeing/hearing that,Iright away.Suddenly,he stood up,stared at me,and got close to me.I was doingwhen,I was about towhen第第5页页3.过渡语：表示时间：now/at present/nowadays;recently/lately;On Oct.13;at weekends;last month;the other day;the day before yesterday,etc.表示递进：at first/at the beginning;next/then/after that/after a while;suddenly/all of a sudden;by and by/gradually;finally/at last/eventually/in the end,etc.4.故事结束语：The story tells us that;From this story,we can learn thatties.第第6页页【典题示例】请依据寓言故事拔苗助长写一篇英语小故事。故事梗概：从前，有个农夫，种了稻苗(seedlings)后，便希望能早早收获。天天他到稻田时，都发觉那些稻苗长得非常慢。他等得很不耐烦。想了又想，他终于想到一个“最正确方法”，他将稻苗全都拔高了几分。第二天一早，他迫不及待地去稻田看他“结果”，却看到全部稻苗都枯萎了。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：100左右。第第7页页To pull up the seedlings to help them growOnce upon a time,there was an old farmer who planted a lot of rice.After planting the seedlings,he went to the field to watch the seedlings grow every day.He saw the young shoots break through the soil and grow taller each day,but still,he thought they were growing too slowly.Eventually he got impatient with the young plants and suddenly he hit upon an idea to pull up the young plants by half an inch.The next early morning,the old man couldnt wait to check his“achievement”,but he was heart|broken to see all the pulled|up young plants dying.第第8页页.审题谋篇1.本文是寓言故事，人称用第三人称：基本时态为普通过去时。2.写作关键点包含：农夫发觉稻苗长得慢，焦虑；他拔苗；稻苗都枯萎。.写作关键点从前，有一个老农夫种了很多水稻。普通表示：Once upon a time,there was an old farmer and he planted a lot of rice.高级表示：(用定语从句改写上面句子)Once upon a time,there was an old farmer who planted a lot of rice.第第9页页在种下稻苗之后，他天天去地里观察稻苗生长。普通表示：After he had planted the seedlings,he went to the field to watch the seedlings grow every day.高级表示：(用简单句改写上面句子)After planting the seedlings,he went to the field to watch the seedlings grow every day.他看到稻苗突破了泥土，天天都在长高。普通表示：He saw the young shoots grow up from the soil and grow taller each day.高级表示：(用break through改写上面句子)He saw the young shoots break through the soil and grow taller each day.第第10页页突然，他想到一个主意：把小苗拔高半英寸。普通表示：Suddenly he came up with an idea to pull up the young plants by half an inch.高级表示：(用hit upon改写上面句子)Suddenly he hit upon an idea to pull up the young plants by half an inch.第第11页页