Unit-4-I-like-music-that-I-can-dance-to作文.ppt

书面表达训练与指导书面表达训练与指导单元话题：单元话题：Unit 4 I like music that I can dance to.12List kinds of movies.documentary,drama,comedy,action movie,scary movie,cartoon.3Adj.that can describe movies.描述电影特点的形容词。描述电影特点的形容词。interesting,educational,moving,exciting,relaxing,fantastic,.4Adj.that can express feelings.表达对电影感受的形容词。表达对电影感受的形容词。happy,relaxed,excited,moved,pleased,proud,amazed,hopeful,.5从哪些角度可以谈论喜爱的电影？从哪些角度可以谈论喜爱的电影？moviecharactersdialogssongsmusic.director6Complete the sentences.I like movies that/which _.7Write an article for a newspaper or magazine about your favorite movie.目标：目标：根据写作技巧根据写作技巧完成写作任务。完成写作任务。8列列1Tip:what,who,why,how.9 what my favorite kind of movie is My favorite kind of movie is _.why I think others should watch it what my favorite movie is(name)who made it why I like it how it makes me feel why I like this kind of movie My My favoritefavorite movie movie1.列列 I like them because _.My favorite movie is _.It was made by _.I like it because _.I feel _.I think you should watch it because_.10 My favorite kind of movie is _.My My favoritefavorite movie movie1.列列 I like them because _.My favorite movie is _.It was made by _.I like it because _.I feel _.I think you should watch it because_.总述总述具体阐述具体阐述建议建议11列列1变变212技巧一：同义句式技巧一：同义句式My favorite kind of movie is cartoon.I like/prefer/love/enjoy/fall in love withIm interested inI show(take)great interest ininterest(s)me.2.变变13技巧二：合并句式技巧二：合并句式I like the movies.They can cheer me up.I like the movies which/that can cheerme up.2.变变I like the movies because they can cheerme up.14技巧三：扩展句式技巧三：扩展句式I feel relaxed.When I watch Kung Fu Panda,I feel very relaxed.If Im tired or down,I enjoy watchingKung Fu Panda.When I watch it,I feel very relaxed.If Im tired or down,I enjoy watching Kung Fu Panda.When I watch it,I feel very relaxed.Laughing for two hours is a good way to relax!2.变变15技巧四技巧四:亮点句式亮点句式2.变变a.a.your hard work day after day.(your hard work day after day.(日积月累日积月累)b.make good use of your textbook.(b.make good use of your textbook.(挖掘好书本知识挖掘好书本知识)b.make good use of your textbook.(b.make good use of your textbook.(挖掘好书本知识挖掘好书本知识)16When Im down or tired,I prefer movies that can cheer me up.When I,I prefer that I can just _ my brain,_ and _an excitingsuperhero 17It was one of the mostmoving pieces of musicthat Ive ever heard.is/was one of the+形容词形容词最高级最高级+n.s+that Iveheard/seen/done.18列列1变变2添添319添连接词添连接词 Among so many comedies I have watched,the one I like best is Kung Fu Panda.It was made by John Stevenson.I like it becauseit has _funny dialogs _ a happy ending._ the characters may not be perfect,they try their best to solve their problems.It is _ interesting _ I really want to laugh.Although/Thoughso that3.添添not only/both but also/and20 Body Ending Beginning添首尾句添首尾句/段段 Different people have different hobbies.I always love watching movies when I am free.How I wish we can share everything good together!3.添添My My favoritefavorite movie movieMy My favoritefavorite movie movie21列列1变变2添添3查查422检查时态检查时态 检查语法检查语法 检查标点检查标点 检查词数检查词数 查查423列列1变变2添添3查查4书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧What WhoWhyHow 同义句式同义句式合并句式合并句式扩展句式扩展句式亮点句式亮点句式添首尾句添首尾句/段段添连接词添连接词查时态查时态查语法查语法查标点查标点查词数查词数2425自自 我我 评评 价价 级别级别内容内容ABCD审题审题要点要点结结构构语语言言字数字数书书写写中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第五档（第五档（1-3分）分）第一档（第一档（13-15分）分）第二档（第二档（10-12分）分）第三档（第三档（7-9分）分）第四档（第四档（4-6分）分）26Rome wasnt built in a day!Rome wasnt built in a day!Practice makes perfect!Practice makes perfect!May all of you succeed!May all of you succeed!27Perfect(继续完善继续完善)your article after class.28 My favorite kind of movie is the historical drama.I like historical drama because they are a relaxing way for me to learn history that has greatly influenced on peoples lives.My favorite movie is Gone with the Wind飘飘.It was made in 1939.And it was written by Margaret Mitchell who was a very famous American writer.29 The movie is about the American Civil War (美国内战美国内战)and it has a lot of fantastic characters that help bring the story to life.When I watch this movies,I feel deeply moved.It makes me feel sad about the effects(影响影响)of the war,but it gives me hope and it can also spread love and the true human spirit.I think you should watch this movie too because it is one of the most greatest movies of all time.3031