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写作点拨系列（八）短文写作之提要作文1/15(山山东东高考高考)假假设设你你是是新新华华中中学学学学生生李李华华,很很快快前前在在学学校校举举行行英英语语竞竞赛赛中中取取得得一一等等奖奖。校校报报请请你你写写一一篇篇稿稿件件登登载载在在英英文文版版面面上上,介介绍绍你你课课外学外学习习英英语经验语经验。请请依据以下提醒用英依据以下提醒用英语语写一篇短文：写一篇短文：1.参加英参加英语语角益角益处处；2.坚坚持写英持写英语语日志作用；日志作用；3.英文英文阅读阅读网站网站(EnjoyReading)对对你帮助。你帮助。注意：注意：1.词词数数120150个；个；2.可适当增加可适当增加细节细节,以使行文以使行文连贯连贯。2/15【审题审题抓准信息抓准信息 快速推断】快速推断】项项目目结论结论体裁体裁_话题话题_时态时态_人称人称_提要作文提要作文介介绍绍你你课课外学外学习习英英语经验语经验普通普通现现在在时为时为主主第一人称第一人称为为主主3/15【定点【定点把握关把握关键键点，遣点，遣词词造句】造句】第第1段：点明段：点明话题话题参加英参加英语语角角【信信息息】假假设设你你是是新新华华中中学学学学生生李李华华,很很快快前前在在学学校校举举行行英英语语竞赛竞赛中取得一等中取得一等奖奖【点【点拨拨】转转化人称化人称,注意文章注意文章逻辑逻辑性性【利利用用】(1)我我是是新新华华中中学学一一名名学学生生,名名字字叫叫李李华华。在在很很快快前前学学校校举举行英行英语竞赛语竞赛中取得一等中取得一等奖奖。4/15My name is Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Middle School.I _ in the English contest _ not long ago.got the first placeheld by our school5/15第第2段：列段：列举举学学习习英英语经验语经验【信信息息】参参加加英英语语角角益益处处；坚坚持持写写日日志志作作用用,英英文文阅阅读读网网站站对对你帮助你帮助【点【点拨拨】增加增加细节细节,使文章条理使文章条理【利利用用】(2)首首先先,参参加加英英语语角角有有利利于于提提升升英英语语口口语语,所所以以不不论论什么什么时时候有机会我都会把握它。候有机会我都会把握它。普普通通表表示示：First of all,attending English Corner is helpful to improve my oral English.Whenever there is an opportunity,Ill grasp it.6/15高高级级表示：表示：(用用连词连词so合并句子合并句子)First of all,attending English Corner is of great help to improve my oral English,_so whenever there is an opportunity,Ill grasp it.7/15(3)其其次次,我我坚坚持持写写英英语语日日志志,这这使使我我把把发发生生在在日日常常生生活活中中事事情情表示出来表示出来,经过这经过这种方式能种方式能训练训练我英我英语语写作能力。写作能力。普普通通表表示示：Secondly,I keep writing English diaries.It enables me to express what happens in daily life and in this way I can practice my written English.高高级级表示：表示：(用非限制性定用非限制性定语语从句从句连连接成一个句子接成一个句子)Secondly,I keep writing English diaries,_ _ and in this way I can practice my written English.which enables me toexpress what happens in daily life8/15(4)再次再次,我也我也浏览浏览英文英文阅读阅读网站。网站。Thirdly,_.(5)众众所所周周知知,我我们们需需要要泛泛读读来来开开阔阔我我们们视视野野,所所以以我我们们最最好好养养成天天成天天阅读阅读好好习惯习惯。_,we need extensive reading to enlarge our vision,_reading English materials every day.I also surf EnjoyReading on the InternetAs we all knowso wed better develop a good habit of9/15第第3段：学段：学习习英英语语体会体会【信息】【信息】对课对课外学外学习习英英语经验总结语经验总结【点【点拨拨】适度适度发挥发挥,以使文章符合以使文章符合逻辑逻辑【利用】【利用】(6)只有只有坚坚持我持我们们已已经经决定要做决定要做,我我们们才会到达才会到达目目标标。_we achieve a goal.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will10/15【注注意意事事项项】这这是是一一篇篇提提要要作作文文。在在写写作作时时要要注注意意以以下下几几点点：1.认认真真审审题题和和分分析析所所给给出出提提要要,认认清清题题目目和和提提要要之之间间关关系系,然然后确定文章主后确定文章主题题、大致内容以及文体。、大致内容以及文体。2.每每一一个个关关键键点点能能够够作作为为文文章章一一个个段段落落层层次次。段段落落展展开开应应围围绕绕提要中心和内容。提要中心和内容。3.提提要要只只是是对对文文章章提提醒醒和和概概括括,不不是是主主题题句句。考考生生需需要要依依据据提提要要性性质质,写写出出完完整整、表表达达提提要要主主旨旨句句子子,使使之之成成为为主主题题句句,然然后后围绕围绕主主题题句句进进行行扩扩展。展。4.搜集材料支持主搜集材料支持主题题句。句。11/15【成篇【成篇衔衔接接过过渡，渡，连连句成篇】句成篇】My name is Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Middle School.I got the first place in the English contest held by our school not long ago.Here Id like to share my experience in learning English with you.12/15 First of all,attending English Corner is of great help to improve my oral English,so whenever there is an opportunity,Ill grasp it.Secondly,I keep writing English diaries,which enables me to express what happens in daily life and in thisway I can practice my written English.Thirdly,I also surf EnjoyReading on the Internet.As we all know,we need extensive reading to enlarge our vision,so wed better develop a good habit of reading English materials every day.Of course,Rome was not built in a day.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do will we achieve a goal.13/1514/1515/15