How-to-keep-healthy-写作课.pptx

How to keep healthyHow to keep healthy -He An,Fengye Middle School-He An,Fengye Middle School music 2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.HomeworkListen and fill in the blanks.Used to NowHe used to be _.He used to be _.He was one of _.He is too _.He always _ in the winter.He cant pass the _.Toms problemsTask:Write a letter about:How to keep healthy.thinfatstronghas a coldthe top studentstestWhat kind of food can you see?2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.HomeworkWhat kind of food can you see?2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.Homework2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.HomeworkHow many kinds of food do you know?Please make a list quickly.What kind of food do you like?beefporkmuttonchickenduckfishricenoodlebreadhamburgercornporridgecarrotcabbagebroccolipotatotomatoonionapplebananapearorangestrawberrywatermelonFruits:Vegetables:Meat:Main food:2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.Homeworkprmd A balanced dietFour layers2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.HomeworkEat mostA balaced dietEat moreEat lessmeat:fruits:apple、bananapear、stawberryoranges、grapeswatermelon potato、tomato、carrot、onion、cabbagevegetabes:pork chicken hotdog hanburger2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.HomeworkThe ways about keeping healthyA balanced diet Exercise Sleeping 2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.HomeworkFFTFTIs it a right way to keep healthy?1.Peter only eats food that tastes good.2.Tony likes eating lots of candies.3.Some types of oil are bad for us.We should be careful.4.Dont eat burnt meat.It might cause cancer.5.Laura gets too nervous before big tests.2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.Homework The ways about keeping healthy Should Shouldnt1.23.4.5.1.2.3.4.5.Group work:2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.HomeworkMake a summary:Can you make some sentences by using the word“healthy”or say something about health?1.2.3.4.5.It is important for us to keep healthy.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.HomeworkDear friends:My names Tom.Im a student of Fengye Middle School.I have some problems these days.I used to be thin.But nowIm fat.I used to be strong,but now I always have a cold in winter.Whats more,I used to be one of the top students,but now I cant pass the test.My classmates said that I should keep healthy first.But I dont know how to do it.Can you tell me?Please write to me soon.Thank you!TomIts time to reply Toms letter.Do you remember the letter?2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.Homework According to Toms letter,try to write a letter to Tom about“How to keep healthy”.Dear Tom:Im glad to hear from you.-Before writing,we should follow these writing skills:1.Search (审题：主题，人称，时态审题：主题，人称，时态)2.List（列提纲列提纲,至少提三个方面建议至少提三个方面建议）3.Add（加入优美词句加入优美词句）4.Connect（连接全文连接全文）5.Correct（修改错误修改错误）Best wishesXXX2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.Homework According to Toms letter,try to write a letter to Tom about“How to keep healthy”.Dear Tom:Im glad to hear from you.-Best wishesXXX 评分标准：评分标准：1.观点正确，要点齐全（至少三个方面的建议，观点正确，要点齐全（至少三个方面的建议，每条建议每条建议2分）分）-记记6分分2.表达清楚，结构合理表达清楚，结构合理,语法正确：语法正确：-记记2分分3.句式多样，最好能有亮点句句式多样，最好能有亮点句 （从句、谚语）（从句、谚语）-记记1分分4.卷面整洁，不少于卷面整洁，不少于80字。字。-记记1分分2.Presentation&Practice1.Preparation3.Production4.HomeworkHomework:Finish your composition,and try to keep a better lifestyle in the future.