上海中考英语作文专题指导资料.doc

上海中考英语作文专题指导
一、中考英语作文写作模式——“四审四注意”写作法
“四审”：
一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作，如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础；
二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you 或第三人称she, he, it或they为主；
三审时态。一般而言，写作时文章应多以现在时（包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时）或过去时（一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时）为主，切忌时态混乱；
四审内容。如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示来写，不可偏题乱发挥，可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述，不可遗漏，这是很重要的一点，一般文章按who，when，where，what，how，why等要素展开。
“四注意”：
一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，一定要写开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意；
二注意句式要富于变化，不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调，否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分，如可适当运用if, when, although等状语从句，I think / I hope / I believe that 等宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握；
三注意适当运用连接词，如on one hand, on the other hand; what’s more; however等，这样使文章更有层次、更富逻辑性，若语言和内容没问题, 做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。
四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型，尽量运用课本所学词句，坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语”，更不能乱“发明”, 一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。
最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分,词数不能太少也不能太多,笔者觉得, 以80词左右为宜。另外，书写一定要认真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。
二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析
1. 时态错误

2. 时间状语错误

3. 名词单复数错误

4. 动词误用

5. 语态错误

6． 词性误用

7. 介词误用

8． 某些搭配和惯用法误用

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中考英语总复习专项训练题
写作专项训练
A. 中考英语热门写作话题
1. 关于学习
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “How to learn English well”. （以“怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● When did you start learning English? (in ... / ... years ago)
●How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day ...)
● What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar ...)
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2. 关于兴趣
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My interest”. （以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What is your interest?
● Why do you like it so much?
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3. 关于写事
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Unforgettable memories”. （以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What is your unforgettable memory?
● Why do you think it is unforgettable?
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4. 关于计划
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My plan for summer holiday”. （以“我的暑期计划”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What are you going to do during the coming summer holiday?
● Give at least two points.
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5. 关于朋友
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My good friend”. （以“我的好朋友”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● Who is your good friend?
● What do you often do with him or her?
● Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?
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6. 关于写人
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My English teacher”. （以“我的英语老师”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● Who is your English teacher?
● Do you like him or her?
● Why do you like him or her?
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7. 关于英语
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “I changed my ways of learning English”. （以“我改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● How did you learn English in the past?
● Why do you change your ways of learning English?
● How do you learn English now?
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8. 关于旅行
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An unforgettable trip”. (以“一次难忘的旅行”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● Where did you go?
● What did you do during that trip?
● Why do you think it is unforgettable?
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9. 关于动物
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite animal”. （以“我最喜欢的动物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What’s your favourite animal?
● Why do you like it so much?
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10. 关于网上购物
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Online shopping is changing the way of our life”. （以“网上购物正在改变我们的生活方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What’s your view on online shopping?
● What are its advantages and dis-advantages?
● Please give one or two suggestions to your friends if they love online shopping.
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11. 关于学科
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My favourite subject”. （以“我最喜欢的学科”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
● What’s your favourite subject?
● Why do you like it best?
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12. 关于变化
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Changes in myself”. （以“我的变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. （以下问题可供参考）
● Have you had any changes in yourself since you came to the middle school?
● Which are the most important changes? (Give at least 2 examples)
● What do you think of the changes?
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13. 关于节日
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The Lantern Festival”. （以“元宵节”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. （以下内容供参考）
● Do you like the Lantern Fe