1、建议信1概念:建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。2分类:(1)建议信有可能是写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点。(2)建议信也可能是写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3内容安排:(1)首段:表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。(2)主体段落:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。(3)结尾段:对提出的建议进行总结,要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。4语言特征:提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。.建议信开头常用句式:1I am sorry to kn
2、ow that.2I am very glad to hear that you want to.3I know you have trouble in.4I am writing to you for the purpose of.5In my personal opinion,it would be wise of you to take the following action.建议信主体段落常用句式,给出建议:1first,firstly,secondly.then,after that,in the end,finally,meanwhile.2I think it would be
3、 more beneficial if you could.建议信结尾常用句式:1I believe you will take my advice into account.2 I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.3 I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.Dear _,In recent days,we have to face a problem of _,which,surprisingly,i
4、s becoming more and more serious.Confronted with _,my suggestions are as follows.First of all,_Second,_Finally,_I hope my suggestions are of great help to you.Yours,Li Hua题目要求假如你是李华,请根据下表内容给中国野生动物 保 护 协 会 CWCA(China Wildlife Conservation Association)的会长写一封建议信。问题问题1990年藏羚羊的数量大约为年藏羚羊的数量大约为100万只,万只,现在只
5、剩不到现在只剩不到30万只,数量急剧减少万只,数量急剧减少原因原因为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛,牟取暴利为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛,牟取暴利(make great profits),非法捕杀藏羚,非法捕杀藏羚羊的行为仍然时有发生羊的行为仍然时有发生建议建议利用贵协会的影响力加大对藏羚羊保利用贵协会的影响力加大对藏羚羊保护的宣传护的宣传(publicize)力度;增加用于力度;增加用于藏羚羊保护的资金;建议贵协会派出藏羚羊保护的资金;建议贵协会派出一些志愿者来协助保护藏羚羊一些志愿者来协助保护藏羚羊这是一篇书信。具体内容是就某一件事提出相应的意见、看法等,多使用夹叙夹议的写作手法使文章论述有力,说理透彻。一般
6、应分三段:第一段应为总写:说明写信目的。第二段写问题的现状及原因。第三段写你的期待。时态以一般现在时为主。第第1步步思路思路分析透彻是前提分析透彻是前提1._保护 2_的数量3_采取措施4_向提供5_因此【答案】1.protect2.the number of.3.take measures4.provide.for.5.as a result第第2步步词汇词汇必用词汇是关键必用词汇是关键1.据报道,为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛,很多的藏羚羊正在遭到非法捕杀。It is reported that too many Tibetan antelopes _ illegally for their fur
7、.2通过贩卖它们的皮毛,非法捕猎者能获取高额利润。_,the illegal hunters can make great profits.第第3步步句式句式熟练翻译是根本熟练翻译是根本31990年藏羚羊的数量大约为100万只,现在只剩不到30万只,数量急剧减少。The number of the Tibetan antelopes _ rapidly _ about 1,000,000 in 1990 _ less than 300,000 at present.4我们应该加大对保护藏羚羊重要性的宣传(publicize)力度。We _ protecting the Tibetan ante
8、lopes.【答案】1.are being hunted and killed2.By selling the fur3.is decreasing;from;to4.should publicize the importance of_第第4步步成文成文连句成篇是目的连句成篇是目的【参考范文】Dear President,Im writing to give some suggestions to further protect the Tibetan antelopes.As is reported,too many Tibetan antelopes are being hunted a
9、nd killed illegally for their fur.By selling the fur,the illegal hunters can make great profits;as a result,the number of the Tibetan antelopes is decreasing rapidly from about 1,000,000 in 1990 to less than 300,000 at present.Immediate measures must be taken to solve the present situation.First,the
10、 importance of protecting the Tibetan antelopes should be publicized through your association.Second,would you provide more money for the conservation of the Tibetan antelopes?Last but not least,I suggest that some volunteers be sent there to help protect the Tibetan antelopes.These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future of the Tibetan antelopes.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua