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作文評語教學實務分享作文評語教學實務分享以以506班作品為例班作品為例報告人：鍾文宏報告人：鍾文宏98.8.2698.8.26莎士比亞的智慧莎士比亞的智慧n n好聽的話就像理髮師的椅子,不管尖屁股、圓屁股、或是扁屁股，坐上去都很舒服。評語字數多寡的兩難評語字數多寡的兩難n n簡潔有力的評語,像狙擊步槍,一顆子彈就能命中要害,但並不是每個人都是頂尖射手;冗長囉嗦的評語,則是一挺機關槍,在戰場上有震撼效果,但常常只是浪費更多許多彈藥罷了。理想的作文評語理想的作文評語n n一篇理想的作文評語，就像為美女量身訂做一款性感的比基尼泳裝。不管剪裁的布料多寡，樣式是否新穎摩登，而在於能夠凸顯優點、修飾缺點，蓋住重點。作文評語的一魚多吃作文評語的一魚多吃n n班級網頁佳作欣賞n n教師個人教學檔案n n親師座談作業展覽n n期末學生作文抽查n n充當另類畢業禮物作文評語的併發症作文評語的併發症n n文字土石流釀成災怵目驚心n n沉迷上癮欲罷不能魔戒效應n n過時八股恐龍標籤刻板印象作文評語撰寫之大原則作文評語撰寫之大原則n n正視現實n n互助合作n n擱置爭議n n建立共識n n共創雙贏作文評語撰寫之小技巧作文評語撰寫之小技巧品頭論足頭尾兼顧去頭截尾一概而論移花接木大大吹捧殷殷期勉諄諄告誡閒話家常1a.品頭論足品頭論足n n構思活潑而不失嚴謹，並能注意語辭修飾，凸顯擬人化故事的吸引力。故事一開頭的場景，就已經緊緊捉住讀者閱讀的興致，而一步步引人入勝，令人愛不釋手。1b.品頭論足品頭論足n n結尾雖輕薄短小，但仍不失扼題論述，能呼應總結前文關於夏天多樣風情的描寫。其中果然，配合最後令人不知該愛它還是恨它呢？耐人尋味，文章在精采雋永處畫上圓滿句號。2a.頭尾兼顧頭尾兼顧n n開頭結尾均扣緊主題敘事說理，第一段的引用名言佳句，和第五段的連續設問，都成功吸引讀者注意力。每一個人都想有所作為，所以要遠離酒肉朋友。2b.頭尾兼顧頭尾兼顧n n不同於其他同學流於公式般呆板結構，這一篇清新小品文，不強調硬幣的擬人化感情呈現，而凸顯人文關懷色彩。故事開頭一個鄉下小孩從我後面跑過，赤著腳，到結尾巷子破舊不堪，古今場景鏡頭轉換，使得文章趣味盎然，耐人尋味。3a.去頭截尾去頭截尾n n中間四段，從主旨選擇各層面分析，並且善用設問句、並列句等修辭句型，再加上貼切生動之四字詞語，如猶豫不決、半途而廢、執迷不悟、誤入岐途等等，使人印象深刻，說服張力十足。4b.去頭截尾去頭截尾n n中間三段之譬喻，能跳脫一般同學只用車輛之例子，生動活潑舉日常熟悉經驗為新穎比喻，文句效果自然凸出理想許多。指南針和打氣筒，給我們指引方向與加油打氣；而不良書刊則讓我們誤入歧途，甚至家庭破碎。4a.一概而論一概而論n n能掌握說明文總說分説和總結之布局架構，文辭流暢並適宜使用對比論述，將題旨朋友的重要及選擇原則，提出了簡潔有力的說明。4b.一概而論一概而論n n故事構思細膩，描述生動流暢，能從新穎角度跨越時空布局，讀者彷彿跟著作者，一同回到五、六十年前的臺灣，情節引人入勝，如同懷舊電影在眼前放映。5a.移花接木移花接木n n在第一段與硬幣邂逅的描述上，適當運用了許多生動的四字成語，烘托營造了形象鮮明的場景氛圍。悶悶不樂、小心翼翼，刻畫了人物的性情動作；金光閃閃、色澤鮮明，則描摹了硬幣清晰的形貌。而蒼蠅在上空盤旋，更讓讀者身歷其境，不由自主捏緊了鼻子。5b.移花接木移花接木n n在第二大段中，又以豬排餐為感官摹寫主題，其中咕嚕咕嚕、金黃酥脆、香味撲鼻而來和瞬間爆裂等生動語彙，使得文章段落洋溢濃郁氣味和想像力，也使得呆板旅程不再枯燥乏味，甚至讓人也忍不住想嚐一嚐豬排的酥脆口感。6a.大大吹捧大大吹捧n n文句鮮活有力，能掌握感官摹寫要領。透過逗趣又詳實的介紹，讀者馬上聯想起炎炎夏日的各種記憶，強調出文章主題夏日印象畫之迷人魅力，實在是不可多得的精采佳作。6b.大大吹捧大大吹捧n n第三段關於臺灣戰後貧窮困苦生活之描述，真實詳盡且運用排比修辭技巧呈現。爛地瓜、破銅爛鐵和撿蝸牛等敘述，反應出作者平日閱讀經驗豐富，能將書本知識素材，融合於寫作靈感中，值得嘉勉。7a.殷殷期勉殷殷期勉n n然而，美中不足的是第四、五兩段文氣轉弱，太陽公公部份，較缺乏先前的童趣與個人新穎創意，而且語詞重複出現。建議最後結尾處理，可以更肯定直接，甚至誇飾強調，整篇文句效果會更理想。7b.殷殷期勉殷殷期勉n n結尾一段雖然能總括全文，但只有兩行半，不但架構上和前文不均衡，也缺乏再次強調主題夏天令人喜愛之原因。有些人可能無法體會自然的美妙，你需要把生活中其它和夏天有關的美好印象，和小讀者們大方分享。8a.諄諄告誡諄諄告誡n n最後一段，又出現類似以往虎頭蛇尾草率結束的老毛病，這三個問句設計處理十分不理想。不僅沒有和前文呼應，甚至讓讀者一頭霧水。你不能只丟出一些問題，必須繼續延伸，清楚具體提出有力論點，強調有了朋友，生命才能多采多姿。8b.諄諄告誡諄諄告誡n n第二段部分，你太刻意搞笑逗趣，反而使這篇短文離題。拉拉特異的服飾打扮，是無法引起讀者的興趣，反而會覺得很奇怪。丁丁遇見失去聯絡的拉拉，不是熱情地和他寒暄敘舊，反而只注意那些墨鏡和外套？9a.閒話家常閒話家常n n段落布局安排，文句修飾流暢度，比起前一篇作品，又有了更進一大步的提升，對於你的積極寫作態度，老師感到十分欣喜與安慰。篇幅長度已有四頁半，一邊批改一邊欣賞，實在是一件愉快的事！9b.閒話家常閒話家常n n第四段還是稍嫌短了些，但老師很高興你已經能掌握結構完整性，並且參考黑板講解提示，將主題和故事情節發展互相配合。希望你對自己要有信心，因為認真、專注是你可貴的優點，而大多數同學還是喜歡偷懶草率、應付了事，在這一方面，你比他們表現得棒多了。夏日印象畫夏日印象畫 506 506 張逸昀張逸昀張逸昀張逸昀n n 夏天，我期盼已久的夏天終於來囉！夏天可以看到什麼？可以看到五顏六色的短袖、短褲，陳列在百貨公司的服裝櫃中；走出戶外，抬頭看看天空，你會發現，天空好藍好藍，幾朵雪白的白雲，這可是夏天特有的景色喔！第二段第二段n n夏天可以聽到什麼？可以聽到蟬先生大聲唱著情歌，對蟬小姐訴說他的愛意；對了！還有一種令人垂涎三尺的聲音，那就是叭噗叭噗好吃的冰淇淋叫賣聲。掏掏口袋，唉呀，半毛錢也沒有，果真是欲哭無淚呀！第三段第三段n n打開鼻孔，用力吸一吸，聞到什麼味道？我聞到涼麵醬和地熱的味道。夏天午餐吃什麼好呢？熱湯喝了又直冒汗，所以吃涼麵最好，冰冰涼涼的麵，加上香噴噴的醬汁，和黃瓜、蘿蔔絲，哇！真香！至於地熱的味道，可就不好了啦。那種令人眼冒金星的味道，少聞為妙！第四段第四段n n夏天，只有燙和涼這兩種觸覺，完全沒有溫可言。摸一摸單槓，就跟著火一樣，摸不住呀！但開冰箱可就截然不同了，把手伸進冰箱，冰冰涼涼的，真恨不得把整個人給塞進冰箱，舒舒服服冰個涼。第五段第五段n n每到夏天，我最期待媽媽從市場抱個大西瓜回來，香甜多汁，咬一口，從頭涼到腳，比冰棒還好吃，又比較營養。打成果汁，再加上幾顆冰塊，呀呼，人間美味呀！大口大口咬，好過癮。幾顆大西瓜，就能滿足我的夏日。第六段第六段n n最後，夏天的心情如何呢？我喜歡夏天時抱著泳圈跳進游泳池的快感，也愛吃冰時那透心涼的感覺。但當你收到電費單時，或是心愛的車子被颱風淹掉了，大概就笑不出來了。夏天呀，你真是令人又愛又恨呀！以夏日印象畫為例以夏日印象畫為例一、作者以夏天美好回憶為抒發重 點，語調活潑洋溢如陽光般青春氣息，文句兼重流暢自然與幽默逗趣。在 輕快節奏的感染影響力下，讀者不 由自主地，也掀起了對歡樂夏天的激動 期待之情。一概而論一概而論二、每一小善用設問句型，引導文章描 述重點，聚焦於各種感官摹寫經驗 上。並且在鋪陳上注意對比映襯效 果，身歷其境般生動形容，讓夏 日印象主題旨趣更為凸顯。一概而論大大吹捧三、各段內容中，處處可見安排適切之 四字詞語，例如欲哭無淚、眼冒金星、少聞為妙和截 然不同等等，搭配各種感嘆語助 詞囉！、喔！、呀！和 哇！，令人印象深刻。移花接木移花接木四、在第三段中，有關涼麵的嗅覺與豐 富視覺描摹，和第五段香甜可口的西 瓜味覺生動摹寫部分，是全文中最精 采段落。而第四段真恨不得把整個人 給塞進冰箱，誇張中不失刻畫真實，而且把一般同儕難以下筆的觸覺摹 寫，處理得高明流暢，寫作才華值得肯 定。去頭截尾大大吹捧n n五、最後一段的收尾，觀察角度比同年齡 同學寬廣，能靈活取裁適當生活題材發 揮。例如舉出夏天昂貴電費，和颱風淹 水車輛泡湯為負面心情對照，心思細膩 布局嚴謹，充分掌握住又愛又恨的 矛盾衝突微妙之所在，著實耐人尋味。品頭論足移花接木大大吹捧依然奔馳的老爺車依然奔馳的老爺車n n就像日本拉麵和瑞士鐘錶一樣，國小學生作文評語的書寫，仍然要仰賴教師一字一字的DIY。雖然直接在作文簿上勾選優缺點，或是利用廠商附贈的評語印章，已經可以大大減輕工作負擔，但短時間內傳統的紅筆書寫，不容易有革命性的創新工具可取代它的任務。與同仁互勉THE 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