2021年高考英语满分.docx

2021年高考英语满分
2021高考英语总分 作文〔上海〕
描述你在学校的一次午餐，具体要求如下：
具体描述用餐的状况
简要表述你对这次午餐的感受
这是一篇简洁却需要挖掘的文章，由于假如只是描述用餐状况，明显缺乏深度，夸夸其谈，流于外表。同学拿到这样的题目需要认真考虑用餐背后的东西。比较简洁想到的话题是食物铺张、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托"我'的闲适得意，凸显出在紧急的高中同学生涯中，能够留有一片心灵净土，通过饮食来调整心情，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生看法。此文结构简洁，文笔清爽，语言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供同学借鉴。
范文：
The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, torush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found
elsewhere.
The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)
一、语法解构
如今分词作定语 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang
倒装句
(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one
(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be
不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen
状语从句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed.
在分词作状语 Waiting formy turnpatiently。
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