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2021高考英语满分(安徽卷)
题目:
为了关怀中同学健康成长,某中学英文报开拓了"HEART-TO-HEART'专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日简洁发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并赐予劝慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
留意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能消灭与本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
temper n. 脾气,心情
Hi Worried,
Im sorry to know that youre having such a had time at the moment.
Yours,
Jamie
考点:考察半开放性作文
写作指导:
本文属于半开放性作文,要为你编辑Jamie的口吻回复Worried的求助信,他的困扰:近日简洁发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。要留意书信的格式和特殊用词。
要点:
1.很圆满听说对方有此问题。并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题,所以不必担忧。只有的是要学会把握自己的脾气。
2.提出建议:与信任的人进行沟通,告知别人你的困扰,释放自己的压力。同时多参与各种户外活动,和伴侣多玩球类运动。保持乐观的心态。
对于考生的综合力量要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的力量和组织要点的力量。需要留意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不行。写作时留意精确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合规律关系,确定要契合给出的开头,不能消灭文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己生疏的单词句式,同时也要留意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【一句多译】
每个人都会有过这样的一段时期,在这时状况都很糟糕,所以你不要太担忧了。
〔1〕The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much.
〔2〕It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much.
【参考范文】
Hi Worried,
Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie
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