2023年各省高考真题短文改错汇总.doc

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全国一In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
全国二Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！
全国三When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy

（全国甲）The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
（全国乙）My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.

（全国丙）The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
浙江卷

When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there！
My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
四川卷

It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the housework. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner ,we said to her,“ Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.
(·新课标全国Ⅰ)

When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.
(·新课标全国Ⅱ)
One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
Passage 3　(·四川)

Hi, Janice，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
Passage 4　(·陕西)

My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
Passage 5　(·浙江)
Passage 6　(·新课标全国Ⅰ)

Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self－seed where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!

My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left－hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.
Passage 7　(·浙江)

I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket－owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.
Passage 8　(·四川)

Hello，boys and girls！Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm，stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Don't panic or get out of line，and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.If it's a false alarm and there is no fire，your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt，tell your teacher immediately.
Passage 9　(·陕西)

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals，insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset，we sat by the fire，have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky－they were looked like rain！We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn't learn much about animals，insects or trees，but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

Passage 10　(·辽宁)

Dear Jeremy and Alice，
Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors，we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word，your dog—Cleo.
We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside，Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock.That is too much for us，considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill，but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely，
Jack and Rose
Passage 11　(·新课标全国Ⅱ)

The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800's.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner，that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting，it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain，there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
Passage 12　(·四川8处错误)

Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficulty，but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary, my best friend，asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for some time，I let her copy my answers.But after the test，all of us were called to the teacher's office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests.We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didn't cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why does she punish me?
Passage 13　(·陕西)

My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double－room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high－speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
(·浙江)
I was playing at my cousin house.Since his family was rich than mine，he had more toys than I did.There was one on particular I'd always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking.I guessed，even at that age，I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again；I would always know I'd done something wrong.Late on，my aunt drove my home.When she dropped me off，I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.She knows what had happened，but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.

全国一
71 eighteen→eighteenth 72. the∧first73.so→but/yet.74.goes→went75.word→words
76.turning→turn77much 去掉78.late→later 79.suddenly→sudden 80.on→of
全国二
71.all→both 72.a→an 73.interesting→interested 74.that→which 75.early →earlier 76.for去掉77.beside→besides
78.informations→information 79.came→comes 80.to∧pick
全国三
71.of去掉72.had→have 73.and→but 74.took→taken 75.become→became 76.in ∧the picture77. they→that/which78. difference→different 79.late→latest 80.your →my
课标卷-1 ：
71. that →where72. but去掉 73. had →have 74. honest→ honesty 75. or→ and
76. using →used 77. becoming前加of 78. the →a 79. our→ his 80. stead→steadily
课标卷-2 ：
71.how →what 72.chose →choose 73.take →taking 74.but →and 75.the∧ world 76.your→our 77.knowleges→knowledge 78.can→should 79.thought→think 80.many→much
课标卷-3 :
71.year→years 72.worse→worst 73.去掉the74.yourself→myself 75.such→so 76.tell→told 77.freely→free 78.wear→wearing 79..to→for 80.I^need
浙江
71.chidren→ child72. late→later 73. the∧end 74.her→ him 75.was→ were 76.knowing→ know77.had去掉78.chat→ chatted 79.in → on 80.excited →exciting
四川
71,so→but 72houseworks→ housework 73.or→ and 74.get→ got 75.on 去掉76.her→his 77.the ^78.what 去掉或the→ that/which 79. favoritest → favorite 80.moving →moved
·新课标全国Ⅰ
71.think→ thought 72. in ^the 73.or →and 74.on→ with 75.been去掉
76.seriously→ serious 77.Airs→ air78.much→ many 79.found→ find 80.your →our/the
　(·新课标全国Ⅱ)
71parent→ parents 72on→ in 73very去掉 74.looks→ looking 75.where→ that 或去掉where 76.begun →began77. telling→ told 78.a→ the 79.his ^parents 80.terrible →terribly

·四川
1.want后加to2.tell→told3. friend→friends4. sing→singi