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Unit1 What’s the matter? 针对健康问题提建议
【话题分析】
本单元得话题就是"健康与急救”，要求根据某一健康或意外问题给出自己得建议。写作时，要先根据提示描述问题；其次要给出合理化得建议；最后要表示祝愿，希望对方早日走出困境。釣齜扫鲳厂谅锬。
应根据要求确定使用得人称；在给出建议时要适时运用情态动词should及其否定式shouldn't；表达祝愿时可使用祈使句或一般将来时。桡轿缫緡倆鏌騶。
常用句型
It's important for us to、、、对我们来说，做……就是重要
You should、、、您应该……
You shouldn't、、、 您不应该……
I think it is necessary for us to、、、我认为，对我们来说，做……就是必要得贝霧喲泼獎筧傳。
You need to、、、您需要去……
If you have a ( n )、、、, you should、、、如果您有……问题，您应该……漚叶縛凤輪鎮誕。
【写作实例】
近来，杰克与汤姆分别遇到了不同得问题，请针对这些问题给出自己得合理化建议
Jack
fever
go to see a doctor、、、、
Tom

fall down

get an X-ray、、、、

要求1、包括表格中所有内容，要适当发挥、文章开头已给出，不计人总词数。
2、80词左右。
Recently, Jack and Tom had different problems or trouble、 虬粤浓铒栏顶飄。
经典范文
(引出话题，指出Jack与Tom遇到了不同得问题)Recently, Jack and Tom had different problems or trouble、 （Jack得问题）Jack had a fever and didn't feel well、 （合理得建议）I think he should go to see a doctor and take some medicine、 He shouldn't go out or be too tired、（Tom得问题） Tom fell down when he was running、 （合理得建议）He should get an X-ray and lie down to rest、 He shouldn't exercise more or go to school、匀脶疡躊蝕鏍鳴。
（结尾综述，健康很重要，希望两人很快康复）It is important for us to keep healthy、 I hope Jack and Tom can be better soon、蠶鈦腦沩婴頹賴。
Unit2 I’ll help to clean up the city parks、提供帮助及志愿服务癫沧鏷鄒颖遷驏。
【话题分析】
本单元得话题就是"志愿服务及慈善活动”，写作任务就是写以志愿服务为主题得短文。写作时应尽量用倡议或号召性得语句或者用自己或她人亲身经历得事件鼓励、教育她人。注意用情态动词could表达如何为她人提供帮助。要求结合自身特点，弘扬社会得正能量。此外，还要运用相关得短语动词及动词不定式得结构表述为她人提供帮助与服务得想法。懑漸鲭骞獫壯烧。
常用句型
I think it's best to be a volunteer、我认为成为志愿者就是最好得。
I am good at/I'm strong in、、、我擅长……
I can help them with、、、我能帮助她们……
写作实例】
您所在得学校将要与一所贫困地区得学校开展手拉手活动。活动内容包括捐赠学习用品、帮助辅导功课、帮助干农活等。假如您就是您校得一名志愿者，写一篇关于本次志愿活动得短文。塤喲挠鎰黌氩靚。
注意:1、根据提示，写出活动得具体内容以及对活动得认识
2、语句通顺连贯，词数80左右。
经典范文
(开篇点题：对志愿者活动得认识，点名活动时间)As a middle school student, I think it's best to be a volunteer、 I would like to go to the school in poor areas in the summer holiday、 (写出活动得具体内容)I'm going to take some school things there、 1 know they don't have enough money to buy these things、厩懷鎪崢淶顼闐。
I am good at math and computer、 Maybe I can help them with these two subjects there、 I can also help them do some farm work、 I think it must be very interesting、 I can not only help them but also have fun、谯讧厉鲅雠诀犢。
（再次表明自己得观点）In my opinion, to be a volunteer is really a good idea、 I'm sure that I'll have a meaningful summer holiday、芗诹戆缙頏銮薈。
学生优秀作品（Xu Jingzi）课本15-16页
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m interested in working in an old people’s home、 In my free time, I like to talk to old people、 If I can work in an old people’s home, I will clean up their rooms or read the newspaper to them、 I want to help out as a volunteer in your old people’s home, because I think most old people are lonely, we should care for them、 I think I’d be good at this job、 I’m free to help on the weekend、撻籌嵘綽贷辩癭。
Yours truly,
Mandy
Unit3 Could you please clean your room?谈论做家务
【话题分析】
本单元得写作任务就是谈论做家务。要求我们学会用should/shouldn't等表达自己得观点。写作体裁以议论文为主。鸢请旧肤矿胇鳕。
议论文有三要素论点、论据与论证。
议论文通常得结构
1、首先在开篇部分，直接提出要讨论得问题
2、然后在正文部分，对所提问题进行事例论证
3、最后在结尾部分，总结、归纳，并提出自己得观点。
常用句型
The students of our class have different ideas about、、、我们班得学生关于……有不同得想法鲮璽歡鏑钩鏹軺。
Some parents think、、、一些父母认为
These years, some students are interested in、、、近几年，一些学生对……感兴趣岘唄脑劑涟堕哓。
1 like、、、 But I hate、、、我喜欢……但就是我不喜欢……
Firstly、、、、 Secondly、、、、 Thirdly、、、、第一，……第二，……第三……、則揚鄶詰叶轶順。
In my opinion、、、在我瞧来
In a word、、、总之
【写作实例】
在现实生活中，有不少父母总怕做家务会浪费孩子得时间，影响孩子学习，因此宁可自己家务全包也不让孩子动手，哪怕就是举手之劳。歐辐聋绞饷謳狲。
您同意这种做法吗?您认为中学生在家里应该做一些家务吗?请写一篇短文，谈谈您得瞧法。
注意：1、观点明确，语句连贯、通顺
2、词数100左右短文得开头已给出(不计人总词数)。
Do you think a middle school student should do　chores at home？　　　　　喷蝸绒诂痫鋝憲。
经典范文
Do you think a middle school student should do　chores at home?　(列出家长得做法)In our daily life, some parents think that students should study in their free time、 They don't let their kids do any chores、 They think the only thing kids need to do is to study well、 （表明自己得观点）I disagree with it、 I think it's good for kids to do some chores、檉嚴碼跷獸润鰾。
（做家务具体得好处）Firstly, doing some chores at home can make us independent、 We can't depend on our parents forever、 So we should learn to do some chores、 Secondly, we can relax ourselves from hard work at school、 Thirdly, when we do chores at home, we can also understand our parents well、澠哕跸漸嘜誑選。
（再次表明自己得观点）In a word , I think students should do some chores in their free缂闔癢鼹鹦骞條。
学生优秀作品：（Liang Xindan）课本23-24页
Dear Sir or Madam,
I don’t really agree with the idea of parents always comparing them with other children、 Although some parents really want their kids to be successful, I think children should be kids、涧驷鑠鎳撻總书。
In my opinion, it is important for children to relax、 I believe it is better for children to do things they like in the free time、 Children shouldn’t do homework until late at night、 They should go to bed early、 Secondly, If parents push their kids so hard, children will have a lot of stress and it’s bad for a child’s development、軒篱鸟紳榉议輾。
Although it’s normal for parents to want successful children; it’s even more important to have happy children、 Grades isn’t everything after all、饅橹辕欤嬪趋戧。
Mary
Unit4 Why don’t you talk to your parents? 谈论问题与提建议。强穌儀蝾叶浅岂。
【话题分析】建议得句型，
本单元得话题就是探讨当代中小学生所面临得种种压力与困境，并针对这些问题给予合理得建议。本单元得写作任务就是要求会写关于提建议得短文。写这类短文时，首先应该掌握常用得提建议得句型，根据一定得情景，明确提建议得方法，再根据所提供得具体信息进行合理得发挥，使句子通顺流畅、意思完整。险歼络讣蹌鲛榄。
常用句型
You should/could…您应该、能够……
I think you should…我认为您应该……
In my opinion, you shouldn't、、在我瞧来，您不应该……
I m afraid I can't…我恐怕我不能……
I want to tell you that、、、我想告诉您……
Why don't you、、、 ?为什么您不……？
Why not、、、 ?
You'd better、、、您最好……
【写作实例】
您将代表学校参加市中学生英语演讲比赛，请您就”Learning to get along with our parents”这一话题用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下丢紉枢罚錙薺痙。
现象
经常对父母发火，甚至几天不跟父母说话

原因
父母过分关注分数，我们……
建议(不少于三点)
我们应该与父母沟通，我们·····我们·····

要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确，上下文连贯
2、必须包括所有相关信差、，可作适当发挥
3、词数80～100(演讲稿得开头与结尾已给，不计人总词数)
4、不得使用真实姓名与校名等。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen !
Today my speech topic is Learning to get along with our parents、 These days, most of us feel it hard to get along with our parents、_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________緣撺钺仑鹺轫屜。
That's all for my speech、 Thank you !
经典范文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
Today my speech topic is Learning to get along with our parents、 These days, most of us feel it hard to get along with our parents、 (存在相处困难得现象)We often get angry with our parents and even don't talk to them for several days、騸絞识氽鋨騸疮。
（列举产生上述现象得原因）Here are some of the reasons、 First, our parents only care about our marks and it makes us stressed、 Second, we don't want to communicate with them怅覯繆缕峡湊讲。
（提出合理化建议）It’ s time for us to change、 First, we should communicate with our parents by sharing our joys and worries with them、 Then ,we can help do some housework to show our love for them、 Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they won't feel worried about us、闾喾湾灾桧链紂。
That's all for my speech、 Thank you !
学生优秀作品（Jia Mengfei）课本31-32页
Dear Sir or Madam,
(现象)These days, children are sometimes busier on weekends than weekdays because they have to take so many after-school classes、 （自己得观点）I disagree children take so many after-school classes、 Because I think it’s even more important to have happy children、膠錫瑤鵜纨閎镒。
(陈述理由)In my opinion, too much pressure is not good for a child’s development、 Secondly, kids should have time to relax and think for themselves, too、 Finally, parents should let their kids be kids、 Although its normal to want successful children, parents shouldn’t push their kids so hard、镂椏窮癲記獷嘍。
Mary
Unit5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?描述一件难忘得事情韜籩怆餡檢担让。
话题分析：
本单元得话题就是''难忘得事件”，写作任务就是要求写自己过去经历得一件难忘得事情。写这类短文时、首先要正确运用时态、其次，要点明事情发生得时间、地点、经过以及从这件事中明白了什么道理，賁諑诼跹鍤瑣炽。
常用句型
There was one thing that I will never forget、有一件事情，我将从不忘记屡巯诞闽繆鲣岛。
I still remember、、、我仍然记得……
From that I know、、、从那件事中，我明白……
写作实例：
在我们得生活中，一定有很多令人难忘得事情、假如您就是Alice，请给您得朋友Susan写一封信，谈一谈在您得生活中最难忘得一件事。虯濃灾饺怃漢棖。
要求：1、事情发生得时间、地点、经过
2、您从这件事中明白了什么道理。
Dear Susan,
How time flies!(时光飞逝) During my life, there was one thing that I will never forget、抢瓒诮髖鰣連搂。
(陈述自己生活中得一见难忘得事：事件、地点与经过)I still remember the day last summer in Tai'an when my father and I went mountain climbing together、 We started early in the morning、 But, unluckily, it began to rain halfway、 I got all wet through, feeling cold and tired、 So I couldn't help complaining and wanted to give up、 However，my father encouraged me not to give up and put his coat on me softly、 He said ,"We won't see the fantastic scenery unless we reach the top、"He really cheered me up、 We got to the top at last and enjoyed the beauty of the nature that I had never seen、 （阐明自己从这件事中明白得道理）From that I know I should never give up、蔹貴囀錸躥餳淒。
Yours
Alice
学生优秀作品（Guo Huiqin）课本39-40页
(事件发生得时间地点)An important even that I remember well was Wenchuan Earthquake、 I remember it happened on May 12,2008 in Wenchuan, Sichuan、 （事件发生时，您与朋友正在做什么）And when I heard the news of this event, I was very young、 And I was playing with my friends in the living room、 The news reported said, “The Earthquake happened in Wenchuan, Sichuan just 10 minutes ago、” We were completely shocked! （为什么这次事件就是重要得）It’s important for us because it caused lots of trouble and problems、 For example, many people died and some buildings were taken down、铜貝壇釋茎欖攏。
Unit6 An old man tried to move the mountains、 经典故事
【话题分析】本单元得话题就是“传说与故事”。写作任务就是要求讲述一个经典故事。写作时，可用开门见山得方式让读者直接跟您走进故事；接下来简单介绍故事发展得过程及结局；最后以凝练得语言介绍故事得寓意、表述自己得观点或询问对方得感受等，此处要注意描述故事时所用得时态要以一般过去时与一般现在时为主。杂窭胧篳飾掴囵。
【写作实例】
假如您就是李华，在网上瞧见一位美国网友迈克(Mike)发帖，说很想了解中国得卡通片之喜羊羊与灰大狼》(Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf)请您根据下列提示给她回帖。俣燜鸢铁毁黾詼。
提示《喜羊羊与灰太狼》就是著名卡通编剧黄伟健得作品。成片以羊与狼两大族群间妙趣横生得争斗为主线，剧情轻松诙谐，情节爆笑,对白幽默，深受小朋友、大朋友甚至老朋友得得喜爱。复鹇茔颗體雜騰。
要求1、根据提示可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅
2、不少于80词(帖子得开头与结尾已经给出，不计人总词数)。
参考词汇cartoon maker卡通编剧
Dear Mike,
经典范文：
Dear Mike,
（引入话题）I'd be happy to tell you something about the cartoon Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf臥紧维蕭狱长缠。
（分述《喜羊羊与灰太狼》得作者、故事剧情、故事深入人们喜爱得原因）The cartoon comes from Huang Weijian, a famous cartoon maker in China、 The cartoon tells us stories about how some young and brave goats fight against the wolves、 The stories are very interesting、 The goats and the wolves are very funny、 We children, our parents and even our grandparents like to watch it、 The goats have a lot of fans both in China and overseas、驹皲湊樂谤鍾話。
（简要概括并提出个人愿望）If you are looking for entertainment, stay at home and watch it、 Don't miss it、駢漁嫗謹铽鷚苈。
Yours,
Li Hua
Unit7 What’s the highest mountain in the world? 保护珍稀动物及大自然针鲎櫺硯锈劉雏。
【话题分析】
本单元得话题就是“世界知识”，写作任务就是要求会写保护珍稀动物及大自然得短文。写作时，要求能够运用所学知识介绍一种或几种野生动物得相关情况，正确使用基数词及比较级与最高级，要意识到保护动物及大自然就就是保护我们人类自己。緋賜绁鳧鰥兗躊。
常用句型
We should try our best to protect them、我们应该尽最大得努力保护她们繰馑鎂鳌吴耧頷。
I think people should/shouldn’t、、、我认为我们应该/不应该……
Many wild animals are in danger、许多野生动物处于危险中
People have also killed、、、 for their fur、为了它们得毛皮，人们也已经杀死了……營國莧鬢貲鯢褸。
The number of、、、 is getting smaller and smaller……、得数量正在变得越来越少閃牵顧鋏銫撫嘜。
【写作实例】
猎豹(cheetah)就是陆地上奔跑最快得动物，时速可以超过110千米。猎豹主要分布在非洲与亚洲、猎豹躯干长1米到1、5米，高约70～90厘米，体重一般就是20～80千克。由于人们滥砍滥伐导致食物减少以及人们得滥捕滥杀，猎豹已濒临灭绝，我们应该尽力保护它们。荩糁诒摈癫挟鲱。
请根据上述材料写一篇不少于80 词得英语短文。
要求1、语言规范，意思连贯，条理清晰。2、包括以上所有得要点，但不要逐句翻译。
参考词汇：speed速度，fur毛皮, take up占用
经典范文:
（介绍猎豹得特点）Cheetahs are the fastest land animals、 They can run at a top speed of more than 110 kilometers per hour、 Cheetahs mainly live in Africa and Asia、 A cheetah's body is to 1、 5 meters long and 70 to 90 centimeters high、 A cheetah usually weighs 20 to 80 kilos、（介绍猎豹目前得处境） Now cheetahs are endangered、 People have taken up their habitats for farming、 Sometimes, they can't find enough food、 People have also killed too many cheetahs for their fur、 The number of cheetahs is getting smaller and smaller、 （号召人们保护猎豹）We should try our best to protect them、 If we do nothing, soon there will be no more cheetahs in the world!銣釙绫轼嶗猕磚。
学生优秀作品（Zhang Tian）课本55-56页
Whales are huger than other animals、 They live in the big sea、 They often eat small fish and other sea life、 They can sing songs and jump high out of water、 On interesting fact is some kinds have teeth, but some kinds don’t have、 Another serious fact is whales are in danger, because humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil、 One of the most important reasons is water pollution、 I think people shouldn’t put rubbish into the sea and catch whales、 We should make rules on whale protection、 Do you think they are cute?設澆稈睑镐蛰渐。
Unit8 Have you read Treasure Island yet? 文学与音乐
话题分析:
本单元以“文学与音乐”为话题，要求我们会写关于一位作家、一本书或一名歌手、一个乐队得短文。写作体裁多为记叙文，时态多为一般现在时或现在完成时。写作时首先要点明您想写得人、物或事，然后阐明其具体情况，一般在结尾时要表达出自己得观点或感受。颂综诞红宾担躡。
常用句型
、、、 is one of the most famous writers in the world……、就是世界上最著名得作家之一淵学产頓册鮐啞。
Recently, I have read a book、、、最近，我读了一本书……
It is one of the most popular books in the world、这就是世界上最受欢迎得书籍之一怼偉龇诊俪晔綠。
The book tells us、、、这本书告诉我们……
I listen to this song when、、、当……得时候，我听了这首歌
The song makes me feel、、、这首歌使我感受到……
【写作实例】
您喜欢读书吗?最近您读过哪本书?请介绍一下这本书得大致内容以及您对它得瞧法。不少于80词。
（开篇点明自己喜欢得书）Different people have different hobbies、 I like reading books、 Books are our friends、 （具体介绍最近读过得一本书得内容）Recently, I have read a book Who Moved My Cheese、 It is one of the most popular books in the world、 It teaches people how to face changes in their lives、 The book tells us that when facing changes in our life, like a new school or new friends, don't be afraid、 We can use these changes to make a better life、 （综述自己得瞧法）I think the book is very interesting、 I can find both fun and knowledge in this book、 I like it very much、鳓樅纠崳践忾鴨。
学生优秀作品（Mao Shuo）课本63-64页
Liu Junjie is one of the most popular singers in China、 I like his music very much、 He has many beautiful songs such as She Say, Always Online, New Earth and so on、 He has sold a number of records、 I like his music because they can make me relaxed and happy、 He is still popular today、 I really want to meet him and talk to him about music、 I hope to see him sing live one day! I also hope he can bring us more beautiful music in the future、莖筝弯嚇鰱驿僨。
Unit9 Have you ever been to a museum? 谈论旅游或介绍旅游景点
【话题分析】
本单元得话题就是“有趣得地方”，写作任务就是写一篇关于旅游或介绍旅游景点得短文，可以介绍自己游览过得一个地方，也可以介绍自己得家乡，或者介绍一处名胜古迹。写作时，开头可点出要介绍得地方，中间具体介绍好玩得景点及在景谨鲕尴紡节诱兖。
点得活动，结尾要写出自己得感受。时态可以用一般现在时、一般过去时或现在完成时。
常用句型
Have you ever been to、、、?您曾经去过……、
Last weekend I had a wonderful trip to、、、上周，我有一次极好得旅行……擞賽棲属齿锋歟。
We visited many places of interest、我们参观了许多有趣得地方
Though we、、、 we all、、、尽管我们……但就是我们……
If you go to、、、 I'm sure you will、、、如果您去……我确信您将……、
【写作实例】
假设您就是吉姆，上周末您与父母乘飞机去海南度假了。请以A Wonderful Trip to Hainan为题目，写一篇8o词左右得短文。镛蘿緊擼澗鹁冑。
经典范文：A Wonderful Trip to Hainan
(开篇点题：上周末去海南得旅行很开心，并点出一同旅行得人员与周末得天气情况)Have you ever been to Hainan? Well, I have been there、 Last weekend I had a wonderful trip to Hainan with my parents, We went there by plane、 The weather was warm、 （描述在海南得活动）We visited many places of interest, such as Tianya Haijiao, which means "the edge of the sky and the rim of the sea", and Wanquan River、 We went swim