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Continuation WritingThe cost of a smileReflection1.Have you got a high score in this writing?2.What problems do you have?Or Why do you fail to get a good result?Do you think such kind of ending acceptable?1.Charlie moved to another city with his son or daughter.2.Charlie was the boss of a big company,so he asked Kathy to work with him in his company.3.To win Kathys smile,Charlie gave lots of tips to Kathy.Then they were in love with each other.But Charlie was seriously ill.the funeralMake sure the story develops logically and reasonably.When doing continuation writing,what should we pay attention to?the given passage:How many words should we write?How many given underlined words should be used?How many paragraphs should we write?the continuation writing part:In general,how many words are there?1.1.续写材料是一段续写材料是一段350350词以内的材料（一般为记叙词以内的材料（一般为记叙文）。文）。2.2.所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150左右。左右。词数词数少于少于130130词词,从总分中减去从总分中减去2 2分分;3.3.应使用应使用5 5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语。4.4.续写部分分为续写部分分为两段两段，每段的开头语已为你写好每段的开头语已为你写好。5.5.续写完成后，请续写完成后，请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。注意事项注意事项 One day he didnt come to the restaurant.She called his home,only to hear an answering machine.With nervousness wrapped into anxiety,Kathy went to his house and found out from his neighbor that he had died the previous night.On hearing the bad news she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldnt help crying bitterly.Because Charlie had no family or close friends,Kathy put herself in charge of his funeral arrangements.She and the neighbor were the only people to attend.范文欣赏：范文欣赏：Use vivid detailed description to show characters.Several days after the funeral,Kathy received a very important-looking letter in the mail.It was sent to her from Charlies lawyer.Enclosed was a check for almost$600,000!Kathy nearly fainted（晕晕 倒倒）,but then she noticed a handwritten note which read，“Dear Kathy,by the time you read this,I will be gone.Here I have left for my best friend a small token（表表示示）of my gratitude I can never repay you for what youve given me,for you see,Kathy,a smile is worth much more than$20.Indeed,a smile is priceless.Convey positive message.A smile costs nothing,but it is worth everything.message(positive)development(logical/reasonable)language(vivid)A successful storyChildren of HeavenContinuation Writing电影：天堂的孩子电影：天堂的孩子Read for information What is the type of writing?A.narrative (记叙文）记叙文）B.exposition（说明文（说明文)C.argumentation (议论文）议论文）How many characters are there in the passage?Who are the main characters?Many.The main characters are Ali and his younger sister,Zahra.CharacterBackground information1.Where did Ali and his family live?2.How was the family condition?How Ali and his younger sister,Zahra,lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job,and they had only a little money with which to buy food.As they had not paid the rent for several months,the landlord was breathing down their necks.Ali and Zahra lived in a _ neighborhood with their parents.The family _ to make ends meet.poorstruggled对某人盯得特别紧对某人盯得特别紧Ali lost Zahras shoes.The main storyAli and Zahra kept it secret by-.One dayThe day of raceA piece of news A long distance race would be held.The third prize was a pair of new shoes.Start HalfwayNear the finish lineHe had a strong start.He got exhausted but persisted.He crashed to the ground.It seemed that-.Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Read for structure_ information _ of the story _ of the story _ of the storyThe family struggled to make ends meet.Ali lost Zahras shoes and shared his shoes with Zahra to go to school.Ali decided to take part in a long distance race to win a new pair of shoes for Zahra.Ali was knocked down and it seemed unlikely for him to finish third.BackgroundBeginningDevelopmentClimax(高潮高潮)Paragraph 1:Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.Paragrap 2:Filled with delight,Ali walked home quickly.Continuation WritingAli,Zahra,shoes,race,prize,excitedly,promise,runners,third,collided.Did Ali win the prize?Yes?Or No?possibilitiesHe won the third prize.He was awarded for his bravery.The runner who collided him gave the shoes to Ali.He didnt finish the race.He finished first.-Did Ali win the prize?Whatever the result was,Ali eventually went home with a pair of new shoes for Zahra.Paragraph 1:Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.Paragrap 2:Filled with delight,Ali walked home quickly.Continuation WritingWhat would you write?Describe the action and feeling after the crash.ActionWhat would you write?Describe the joy when Ali brought shoes back home.Describe Zahras reaction to Ali.Feelings站起来站起来往前冲往前冲咬紧牙关咬紧牙关挥汗如雨挥汗如雨-nervoushappyexcitedmovedgrateful-Ali,Zahra,shoes,race,prize,excitedly,promise,runners,third,collided.Describe Alis action after the crash.Describe Alis action after the crash.struggle to his feet;grit his teeth;run as fast as his legs could carry him;gather all his strength;drip with sweat/with sweat dripping;dash forwardDescribe the joy when Ali brought shoes back home.Describe Zahras reaction to Ali.cant conceal his excitement;Happy tears welled up in her eyes;be overwhelmed by enormous joy;throw herself into his arms;With teary eyes,they hugged together.What is the theme for the writing?Ali kept his promise because of his braveryperseverancelove for his sisterAssignment Write the passage.Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.Refusing to give up at this point,he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.He dashed across the finish line and won the fourth prize.Thinking he would let her sister down,Ali couldnt help sobbing.Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule.Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony,Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.Filled with delight,Ali walked home quickly.He could not wait to see his sister and share the thrilling news.On his arrival,Ali found Zahra was waiting outside.She was really nervous whether her brother had brought her what she was expecting.“Zahra,see what I have got for you.”he took the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands.The instant Zahra saw the shoes,her face lit up.So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali.“Thank you!Ali.”Tears of joy welled up their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.