综合题TEAMWORK-范文5分到1分.pptx

看范文及评分：看范文及评分：综合题综合题TEAMWORKTEAMWORK 见见OG255/202OG255/202页页 独立题独立题ALWAYSTELLINGTHETRUTHALWAYSTELLINGTHETRUTH见见OG263/211OG263/211页。页。范文及评分范文及评分出卷人给阅卷人的NOTES1.Some members of a group dont work as much as others,but the rewards for success are shared equally,frustrating the true contributors.*This undermines the readings claim that being part of a team is rewarding experience,with individuals getting a chance to shine.2.Teamworkcanprogressveryslowly,duetothetimeittakestoreachconsensus.*Thischallengesthereadingsclaimthatteamworkproceedsquicklyduetothewiderrangeofresourcescontributedbytheindividualmembers.3.Oneortwomemberscandominatetheothers,pushingbaddecisionsorignoringgoodsuggestions(and/orresultinginblamebeingdistributedtotherestofthegroup).*Thisiscontrarytothereadingsclaimthatteamworkisgoodbecauseallthemembershaveavoice.Italsoshowsthedrawbackofagroupswillingnesstotakerisks,toutedasagoodthinginthereading.五分范文见OG的225页，错误：错误：talksabout,gotrecognition,talksabout,gotrecognition,nonetheless,opportunity,directly,more,nonetheless,opportunity,directly,more,decision,necessary,procedure,decision,necessary,procedure,influential,influential,五分范文5分标准 三点一一对应三点一一对应 33分范文分范文结构：结构：清楚清楚内容：内容：第三段第三段“Allincharge,“Allincharge,nobodycare”nobodycare”3 分范文分范文4分范文内容：第二段中“Thepeoplewhomadethemselvesleadersinthegroupmayjustbewrongincertaindecisions,orjustsimplethingsomethingissocreative,wheninrealityitisnotanditwouldnotwork,buttherestofthepeoplewouldneverthelessstillfollowthem”Alapseofclarity.4分范文1分范文结构：非常好内容呢？1分Response2.Thelectureandpassagetalktheirrelationshipintheteamandwhothecomfort.Thedecisionthatpeoplewithknowledgetakeintheteamandsolutionriskydecisions.Themembersthatformpartofteamhelptheothersmembersfor.1 分范文独立题范文ALWAYSTELLINGTHETRUTH评分见OG211页。Score5effectivelyaddressesthetopicandtask扣题扣题（主题）iswellorganizedandwelldeveloped,usingclearlyappropriateexplanations,exemplifications,and/ordetails结构、展开得当，恰当运用例证和细节例证和细节（框架）Score 5displaysunity,progression,andcoherence保持统一性、渐进性和连贯连贯性（内容）displaysconsistentfacilityintheuseoflanguage,demonstratingsyntacticsyntacticvarietyvariety,appropriatewordchoicewordchoice,and idiomaticityidiomaticity,thoughitmayhaveminorlexicalorgrammaticalerrors.语言流畅，句法多样，用词正语言流畅，句法多样，用词正确，确，符合表达习惯，允许一些微小词汇和语法错误（语言）5分范文：语言亮点语言亮点342字标题应删去五段Q:是传说中的模板式文章吗？A:NO!分析：开头段是第开头段是第1 1，2 2，3 3段段中间段是第4段结尾是第5段5分范文4分范文三段。第二段的FIRST可以删掉分析中间段：confidence基于tellingthetruth.逻辑是什么呢？“亮点亮点”是：是：EXAMPLEEXAMPLE4 分范文3分范文（作者：中国学生）结构：五段模板式。开头段：Somebelievethat,othersbelievethat,asfarasImconcerned,Thereisaheateddebateover,somebelievethat,othersarguethat,stillsomeholdthat,asfarasImconcerned,3分范文2分范文(作者：中国学生）问题：观点不一致TWO REASONS 与 ON THE CONTRARY 内容分析：Colleagues,as we know,if people tell a lie to others,he will not be trusted.When he tell a truth,others will believe that he tells a lie.2分范文Independent Task Writing Essay开头段开头段 中间段中间段s 结尾段结尾段开头段开头段ConcessiondeviceConcessiondeviceAttentiondeviceAttentiondevicemodulartemplatemodulartemplate中间段中间段（2-32-3段）段）MainpointsentenceMainpointsentence+explanationexplanationDetailsDetails exampleexamples scomparecompare结尾段结尾段ThesisstatementThesisstatement+mainpointsentencesmainpointsentences段落细化段落细化：句子句子上升句上升句&倒退句倒退句SyntacticvarietySyntacticvariety语法七宗罪语法七宗罪Syntacticvariety:Syntacticvariety:插入语插入语强调句强调句5050字长句细化字长句细化排比句排比句虚拟语气句等虚拟语气句等句子微观细化句子微观细化单词单词:Wording1Wording1Wording2Wording2Wording3Wording3WordingWording高频词高频词Wording1Wording1KISSKISSAmr.&Bri.Amr.&Bri.DragonwordsDragonwordsFormal&inf.Formal&inf.Wording2*Wording2*应试标准应试标准*准确准确地道地道丰富（丰富（3 3）Wording3ActivateWording3Activate ParaphraseParaphraseAlliteration&R.Alliteration&R.WordingWording高频词高频词EducationEducationTechnologyTechnologyLeisureLeisure