综合测试三任务型写作记叙文概要.pptx

(Narration)高考专项复习：高考专项复习：Task-based writing Introduction 1.Pattern 2.4.ContentsText Two 4.5.Homework Text One 3.该题总分值为该题总分值为25分，其中概要部分分，其中概要部分5分，正文部分分，正文部分20分。各部分分值如下分。各部分分值如下:Introduction25分分ItemsThe title (2)The summary (5)A trasitional sentence/paragraph (3)A narrative (10)An ending paragraph (5)The whole writing (25)叙事类文章的写作模板：叙事类文章的写作模板：1.Summary(概要概要)2.Body(正文正文)1)A transitional sentence(过渡句引出例子过渡句引出例子)2)An example and so on (举一个相同主题的例子举一个相同主题的例子,再按题目要求谈感受或再按题目要求谈感受或 发表看法等发表看法等)3.Ending(结尾点题结尾点题)Text（见资料中的文章）（见资料中的文章）Skill:Combine the elements要素要素.WhoWhereWhenWhatthings to learnthe author/writerat home his last birthdayHis parents couldnt have celebration with him.He felt disappointed.He learnt understand his parents1.How to summarize a story?The passage is mainly about The author tells us a story that.The story is mainly about and it tells us thatUseful structures for writing a summary:The passage is mainly aboutThe author describes Practice:Make a summaryPossible versions:The story is mainly about what happened on the authors last birthday.His parents couldnt have celebration with him so he felt angry.But he leant to understand them after talking with his grandmother.(34)The author described what happened on his last birthday.He felt disappointed because his parents couldnt have the celebration with him.But he came to understand them after talking to his grandmother.(32)I also have a similar experience that Reading this story brought back my memory about The authors experience recalls something that happened to me when I was After reading the story,I am deeply impressed by the authors courage,and it also reminds me of an experience of my own 2.1)How to introduce the example by using a transitional sentence?Didnt buy you the nice model carHired three private teachers to help you in studies without your agreement.Your mother peeping at your diary Your father misunderstood you to have broken a vase.2)Group discussion:How to select an impressive example?An unhappy story with your parent?3.Practice:How to end your composition in an effective way?Text 2:见材料的第二篇文章见材料的第二篇文章07高考真题高考真题/09样题样题 第二节第二节 读写任务（共读写任务（共l小题，满分小题，满分25分）分）Dear Ari,As you sleep in my arms,Im amazed at how light you feel.I stare at your tiny body,so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air.I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society.Thats why your mommy and I have named you Ari,which means lion.Its our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.Before you came into the world,we had spent months imagining what youd be like.Would you be a boy or a girl?Would you look like Mommy,Daddy or your elder brothers?Anyway,we would find out soon.Finally your mothers labor came.And several hours later,we met the first time.I held you high up in the air.I then was able to cut your umbilical cord（脐带）（脐带）and put you in your mothers arms.She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.And here we are tonight.As I hold you close,you sleep so peacefully.I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength.I am listening to the first beats of a lions heart.Welcome to the world,Ari.Daddy写作内容写作内容假设你就是信中的假设你就是信中的AriAri，父亲在你出生的时，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲候写了这封信。今天是父亲5050岁生日，你准备以写信的岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容（信的开头和结方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容（信的开头和结尾已经为你写好）：尾已经为你写好）：1 1以约以约3030个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；2 2以约以约120120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：（1 1）读信后的感受；）读信后的感受；（2 2）以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；）以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；（3 3）表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。）表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。写作要求写作要求 1 1作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2 2信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评评分标准分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。EX1.Activity：Discuss with your group members about the three compositions and decide which one is“Excellent”,which is“Average”,and which is“Poor”.评分标准：评分标准：概括准确，语言规范，概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。内容合适，篇章连贯。考场作文考场作文123 518 Excellent考场作文考场作文26 15 poor考场作文考场作文316 313 average1.I finded the way to solve it.2.I know that I must wrong.3.When you found out what I had done,you didnt angry with me.4.I very love you and Mommy.EX2.Correct the mistakes.应改为应改为 found应改为应改为must be wrong应改为应改为were not 或或 didnt get angry应改为应改为I love you and Mommy very much.5.Now I was 18 years ago.6.You was strited with me then.7.I thank to you what you do to me.8.I didnt can earn the money now.应改为应改为 am old应改为应改为were strict应改为应改为I thank you for what you have done for me.应改为应改为 cant earn money 认真审题认真审题不要遗漏要点不要遗漏要点书写工整书写工整检查修改作文检查修改作文Homework:Finish a self-assessment.Write a complete composition of text 1.Thank YOU!Thank YOU!