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汉字论文中英文写作问题汉字论文中英文写作问题中国医学科学院中国医学科学院北京协和医学院北京协和医学院肿瘤研究所肿瘤研究所周传农周传农.10.29第1页题目题目第2页题目题目太繁太繁二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌Huh-7 细细胞凋亡胞凋亡试验试验及其机制及其机制研究研究二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌Huh-7 细细胞凋亡及其作用机制胞凋亡及其作用机制第3页题目题目不全不全儿童单纯性肥胖模型制作儿童单纯性肥胖模型制作儿童单纯性肥胖儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠小鼠模型制作模型制作第4页不好汉字题目不好汉字题目去垂体幼鼠生物特征及激素水平观去垂体幼鼠生物特征及激素水平观察察去垂体去垂体幼年大鼠幼年大鼠生物学特征与激素生物学特征与激素水平水平第5页不好汉字题目不好汉字题目中药松友饮对体内化疗后残余肝中药松友饮对体内化疗后残余肝癌作用试验研究癌作用试验研究中药松友饮对中药松友饮对裸鼠裸鼠体内化疗后残体内化疗后残余肝癌作用余肝癌作用第6页不好汉字题目不好汉字题目IRP对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠IgG+和和SIgA+细胞表示影响细胞表示影响板蓝根多糖板蓝根多糖对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠IgG+和和SIgA+细胞表示影响细胞表示影响第7页题目题目错误错误基因工程大鼠研究进展基因工程大鼠研究进展Process in Rat GeneticsProgress in research on rat genetic engineering第8页题目题目太大太大 不一样测压方法测试大鼠结肠破裂压不一样测压方法测试大鼠结肠破裂压A comparison of different pressure testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animalsComparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in rats第9页不好英文题目不好英文题目儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型制作儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型制作Establishment of childhood simple obesity animal model Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity 第10页题目题目滥用缩写滥用缩写哺乳动物哺乳动物 ES 细胞与细胞与 EG 细胞研究细胞研究进展进展 哺乳动物哺乳动物 胚胎干细胞胚胎干细胞与与 胚胎生殖胚胎生殖 细胞细胞研究进展研究进展 ES embryonic stem cells EG embryonic germ cells第11页不好汉字题目不好汉字题目 滥用缩写滥用缩写重复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大重复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大鼠鼠AMI模型方法对比研究模型方法对比研究重复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大重复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大鼠鼠急性心肌梗死急性心肌梗死模型方法模型方法比较比较第12页题目题目滥用缩写滥用缩写乳酸调控大鼠肠黏膜微血管内皮细胞乳酸调控大鼠肠黏膜微血管内皮细胞NF-B信号通路信号通路研究研究Lactic acid inhibits NF-B signaling pathways in RIMMVECs 读者看不懂读者看不懂 RIMMVECs第13页题目题目 拼写错误、大小写拼写错误、大小写Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pigComparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig第14页不好中、英文题目不好中、英文题目LPS和石墨粉诱导小鼠急性肺损伤病和石墨粉诱导小鼠急性肺损伤病理形态学比较理形态学比较Pathological comparison of LPS and Graphite power-induced acute lung injury汉字：应写明汉字：应写明 脂多糖脂多糖英文：英文：LPS Lipopolysaccharide英文：英文：power powder第15页英文题目英文题目拼写错误拼写错误Gong H,Shu L,Xu H,Chen B,Mao R,Zhang F,Wang Y.Bilateral internal carotid arteries ligation temporary impairs brain vasculaturev in young rats.Auton Neurosci.,173(1-2):39-44.此文已在国外正式发表此文已在国外正式发表第16页不好英文题目不好英文题目清脑方对缺血性眩晕大鼠脑损伤保清脑方对缺血性眩晕大鼠脑损伤保护作用护作用Protective effect of QNF on brain injury in ischemic vertigo ratsProtective effect of the Chinese medicine Qingnaofang on brain injury in ischemic vertigo rats第17页英文题目英文题目 错误错误改良半椎板切除法建立大鼠腰神经改良半椎板切除法建立大鼠腰神经根压迫模型研究根压迫模型研究 The study on rat model of lumbar never nerve root compression via modified unilateral hemilaminectomy approach 烦琐、缺建立、拼写错误烦琐、缺建立、拼写错误第18页英文题目英文题目单复数单复数非人灵长类局部脑缺血动物模型研非人灵长类局部脑缺血动物模型研究现实状况述评究现实状况述评 Review of focal cerebral ischemia model in non-human primateReview of focal cerebral ischemia models in non-human primates第19页英文题目滥用缩写小型猪体外循环下心脏手术麻醉小型猪体外循环下心脏手术麻醉Anesthesia of Cardiac Surgery Under CPB on SwineAnesthesia in Cardiac Surgery Under Cardiopulmonary Bypass on Pigs第20页英文题目 拼写错误Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pigComparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig第21页很很错误英文题目基因工程大鼠研究进展基因工程大鼠研究进展Process in Rat GeneticsProgress in research on rat genetic engineering第22页英文题目错误用词The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of There Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of Three Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled 第23页英文题目很大很大错误常压缺氧致常压缺氧致大鼠大鼠小脑浦肯野细胞急小脑浦肯野细胞急性病理改变研究性病理改变研究Acute pathology changes of Purkinje cells in mouse cerebellum under normobaric hypoxia第24页署名与单位署名与单位第25页署名署名大小写大小写He bao-ming,wang zhizhong，liu xiaofei，yao hao,ouyang xiaohui,su jiaguiHe Bao-ming,Wang Zhizhong，Liu Xiaofei，Yao Hao,Ouyang Xiaohui,Su Jiagui 姓名大写、标点符号姓名大写、标点符号第26页单位单位错词、错名、大小写错词、错名、大小写The forth Applicated Hospital of Suzhou Universitythe Forth Affiliated Hospital of Soochow University第27页单位单位不全不全Academy of Military SciencesAcademy of Military Medical Sciences第28页单位单位大小写大小写Department of,The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin,Tianjin 300162,china.Department of,the Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin,Tianjin 300162,China.第29页署名、单位署名、单位Bai aiguo*，Zheng chuansheng，Zhou guofeng，Liang huiming，Feng gansheng.Wantwanthospital,Changsha 410016,China(Wang Wang Hospital)人名大小写。单位名称错误人名大小写。单位名称错误第30页署名、单位署名、单位大小写、拼写错误、标点符号大小写、拼写错误、标点符号WEI Bing-yan,LIU Tian-fu,GUO Yong-chang,ZHANG Yin-hong(the center of Laboratory animal of Shan Xi Mendical University,taiyuan 030001,China)第31页英文摘要中英文摘要中滥用缩写滥用缩写第32页英文摘要英文摘要滥用缩写滥用缩写Objective：To observe the affect of RGZ and ATRA on the growth of myeloma xenograft in nude mice and RGZ rosiglitazone ATRA all-trans-retinoic acid affect effect第33页滥用缩写滥用缩写英文摘要英文摘要IHC analysis on TMA revealed that Immunohistochemical analysis on tissue microarray revealed that 第34页英文摘要英文摘要滥用缩写滥用缩写To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma(RCC)cell lines using SSH.To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma(RCC)cell lines using suppression subtractive hybridization(SSH).（摘要首句）第35页用错词用错词第36页错词错词大鼠给予药液灌胃大鼠给予药液灌胃All rats were lavaged with KFL solution.All rats were gavaged with KFL solution.第37页错词错词神经上皮移植神经上皮移植Neuralepithelial transplantationNeuroepithelial transplantation第38页错词错词巴马小型猪巴马小型猪12只只12 Obama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 12 Bama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 第39页错词错词Low doesLow doseHigh doesHigh dose通篇如此第40页错词错词RT-PCR was used to amplification the full-length sequence of RT-PCR was used to amplify the full-length sequence of 第41页错词错词Other adverse reactions include atrial premature,oral mucositis,fatigue et al.Other adverse reactions include atrial premature,oral mucositis,fatigue,etc.第42页错词错词GeneBank GenBank 第43页错词错词意思反了意思反了正常、特异抗原正常、特异抗原批内批内变异系数分别为变异系数分别为8.3%和和6.4%，批间批间平均变异系数分别平均变异系数分别为为9.7%和和11.5%.The inter-assay coefficient of variation of normal antigen and special antigen was 8.3%and 6.4%,and the intra-assay average coefficient of variation was 9.7%and 11.5%,respectively 第44页错词错词评价其抗癌作用评价其抗癌作用To access the anti-tumor effect To assess the anti-tumor effect 第45页错词错词 探讨其作用机理探讨其作用机理To explicit the molecular mechanism of To explore the molecular mechanism of 英文摘要首句第46页错词错词脂质体脂质体 LipidosomeLiposome （该文叙述基因治疗主要伎俩）第47页错词错词系统性感染系统性感染Systematic infectionSystemic infection第48页错词错词was analysised was analyzed 第49页错词、单复数错词、单复数The sequence were comparised with the The sequences were compared with the 第50页单复数单复数The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant were tested continuously.The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant was tested continuously.第51页频繁频繁错误注释错误注释第52页滥用注释滥用注释糖尿病糖尿病(diabetic mellitus)糖尿病糖尿病(diabetes mellitus)一篇关于小型猪糖尿病模型论文第53页错误注释错误注释腺病毒（腺病毒（adenoviral）腺病毒（腺病毒（adenovirus）第54页错误注释错误注释单纯疱疹病毒单纯疱疹病毒（herpes simple virus）单纯疱疹病毒单纯疱疹病毒（herpes simplex virus）第55页错误注释错误注释无特定病原体无特定病原体 (special pathogen free，SPF)无特定病原体无特定病原体 (specific pathogen free，SPF)第56页错误注释错误注释独立通风笼具独立通风笼具(Individually wentilate cagesdul，IVC)(Individually ventilated cages，IVC)第57页错误注释错误注释热休克蛋白热休克蛋白(Hot shock protein,HSP)(Heat shock preotein,HSP)第58页错误注释错误注释C反应蛋白（反应蛋白（C-reactionprotein，CRP）C反应蛋白（反应蛋白（C-reactive protein，CRP）第59页错误注释错误注释集落形成抑制法集落形成抑制法(human tumor cell cloning assay,HTCA)(colony formation inhibition assay)第60页错误注释错误注释自然杀伤细胞自然杀伤细胞(natural kill cell，NK)自然杀伤细胞自然杀伤细胞(natural killer cell，NK)第61页错误注释错误注释神经生长因子神经生长因子（never growth factor，NGF）神经生长因子神经生长因子（nerve growth factor，NGF）全文多处，一律错第62页错误注释错误注释表皮生长因子受体表皮生长因子受体2（human epidermal growth factor-2，HER-2）（human epidermal growth factor receptor-2，HER-2）第63页滥用缩写滥用缩写图图1 Ca.C 中中survivn阳性阳性 （一张照片说明）（文内根本就没有见到过Ca.C）（猜测是癌细胞意思）第64页参考文件参考文件第65页参考文件参考文件丢失第一作者、姓名颠倒丢失第一作者、姓名颠倒Jeongmi An,Hee-Jin Y,Kimoon Park，et al.(原原杂杂志志)Jeoum Lee,Jeongmi An，Hee-Jin Yang，Byung-Woo Kim,Kimoon Park.Lee J,An J,Yang HJ，et al.第66页参考文件参考文件作者作者姓名拼写错误姓名拼写错误Gordon MN,K ing DL,D iam ond DM et al.Correlation between Gordon MN,King DL,Diamond DM,et al.Correlation between 第67页参考文件参考文件作者作者姓与名颠倒、标点姓与名颠倒、标点Maria WW,Edward P,Dennis L,et al.Maria Werner-Wasik，Edward Pequinot，Dennis Leeper，et 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第85页参考文件参考文件丢了作者、写了单位丢了作者、写了单位Cleveland Clinic Foundation,Cleveland,OH,USA.The global epidemiology of heart failure.Med Clin N Am,88:1135-1143.Young JB.The global epidemiology of heart failure.Med Clin N Am,88:1135-1143.第86页参考文件参考文件文题脱漏文题脱漏Fossella FV,DeVore R,Kerr RN,et al.Randomized phase III trial of docetaxel versus vinorelbine or ifosfamide in patients with advanced non-small-cell lung cancer previously treated with platinum-containing chemotherapy regimens.The TAX 320 Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer Study Group.J Clin Oncol,，18:2354-2362.第87页参考文件参考文件格式颠倒格式颠倒Circulation.Sep 9;108 Suppl 1:II230-6.Gene transfer of hepatocyte growth factor attenuates postinfarction heart failure.Jayasankar V,Woo YJ,Bish LT,Pirolli TJ,Chatterjee S,Berry MF,Burdick J,Gardner TJ,Sweeney HL.第88页其它其它第89页不好文章首句不好文章首句MG患者通常有眼肌受累，患者通常有眼肌受累，重症肌无力（重症肌无力（myasthenia gravis，MG）患者通常有眼肌受累，患者通常有眼肌受累，第90页不好摘要首句不好摘要首句To Investigate the mechanism of NAFLD in gerbilsTo Investigate the mechanism of non-alcoholic fatty liver disease(NAFLD)in gerbils 第91页中英文语气应该一致中英文语气应该一致结论结论 Ezrin、E-cadherin和和CD44V6在在NSCLC生长和转移过生长和转移过程中发挥着主要调控作用，程中发挥着主要调控作用，Ezrin,E-cadherin and CD44V6 probably play an important role in the regulation ofgrowth and meastasis of lung cancer.第92页材料与方法材料与方法Methods Rats were divided randomly into 2 groups.Methods One hundred and twenty healthy adult male rats were randomly divided into two groups.第93页Respectively,英文无顿号英文无顿号The values of Ri,Re,Cl,MVV,FVC,Fev0.2,Fev0.2/FVC,FEF25-75%,PEF were 1.81(0.94-4.10)cm H2O/mLs、1.83(0.71-3.57)cm H2O/mLs、0.15（0.05-0.29）mL/cm H2O、144.65(77.28-256.20)mL/min、8.49(5.82-12.70)mL、5.72(3.62-7.01)mL、68.12(39.14-85.28)%、34.11(28.25-46.87)mL/min、38.28(30.75-50.25)mL/min,respectively.（9个参数）英文无顿号第94页拼写错误拼写错误主要组织相容性复合体主要组织相容性复合体II类类(majorhistocompatibilitycomplex II,MHC II)主要组织相容性复合体主要组织相容性复合体II类类(major histocompatibility complex II,MHC II)第95页大小写错误大小写错误20 mg/Kg20 mg/kg 1 KDa100 KDa分子量分子量 1 kDa100 kDa分子量分子量ALT(u/l)ALT(U/l)第96页未写明箭头和圆圈说明什么问题。未写明箭头和圆圈说明什么问题。第97页讨讨 论论第98页SCI拒稿十大原因拒稿十大原因1.可读性差，英文书写太差、与杂志内容或格式不符可读性差，英文书写太差、与杂志内容或格式不符2.原创性不足，证据和逻辑不清原创性不足，证据和逻辑不清3.摘要与正文不一致摘要与正文不一致4.文体杂乱，序言太长，缺乏完整性文体杂乱，序言太长，缺乏完整性5.应按照应按照CONSORT指南书写，不可缺项指南书写，不可缺项6.结果凌乱结果凌乱7.统计学处理错误统计学处理错误8.讨论离开正题，进行无关议论讨论离开正题，进行无关议论9.结论未充分结合观察结果结论未充分结合观察结果10.未引用最新进展文件，过时了未引用最新进展文件，过时了0425 亚洲环宇 MEDCOM ASIA第99页第100页第101页第102页第103页撰写欠佳文稿撰写欠佳文稿第104页国际期刊录用标准国际期刊录用标准一流：思绪新奇一流：思绪新奇 70%，试验，试验25%，写作，写作5%二流：二流：40%40%20%三流：三流：20%50%30%网上第105页思索与提议思索与提议第106页因果探讨因果探讨折射出我国医学英语教育缺失折射出我国医学英语教育缺失第一作者科研作风和实际水平第一作者科研作风和实际水平通讯作者把关和实际水平通讯作者把关和实际水平审稿人把关和实际水平审稿人把关和实际水平直接影响与长久影响直接影响与长久影响第107页详细提议详细提议端正科研作风端正科研作风优化学习方法，阅读文件不忘学习优化学习方法，阅读文件不忘学习英语英语导师讲解英文书写主要意义导师讲解英文书写主要意义导师详细指导和督促检验导师详细指导和督促检验第108页写文章详细提议写文章详细提议汉字为主，也审英文汉字为主，也审英文重在内容，兼顾文字和格式重在内容，兼顾文字和格式投稿前分项目校阅文稿投稿前分项目校阅文稿提升英语水平，受用一生提升英语水平，受用一生第109页第110页