全国高考英语应用文写作市公开课一等奖百校联赛特等奖课件.pptx

全国高考英语应用文写作第1页the nursing home 敬老院敬老院show our respect 表表现现我我们们尊敬尊敬gain a better understanding 取得更加好了解取得更加好了解a romantic story 一个浪漫故事一个浪漫故事sincerely 真真诚诚地地be familiar with 对对熟悉熟悉art gallery 艺术馆艺术馆judge 裁判裁判speech contest 演演讲讲比比赛赛第2页deliver ones speech 做演做演讲讲is convenient for sb./sth.对对方便方便locate 位于位于promote students interest 提升学生提升学生兴兴趣趣theme 主主题题participant 参加者，参加者，选选手手compete with sb.和某人和某人竞竞争比争比赛赛feel honored 以以为为荣幸荣幸dragon boat racing 龙龙舟舟赛赛training camp 训练营训练营第3页1.Im now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it,if you can spare the time.我我代代表表同同学学写写信信邀邀请请您您来来参参加，假如您能抽出加，假如您能抽出时间话时间话。2.Im sure that youll have a good time staying with us.我我相相信信您您会会和和我我们们一起度一起度过过愉快愉快时时光。光。3.Looking forward to your coming.期待着您到来。期待着您到来。4.We would feel much honored if you could come.假假如如您您能能来来，我我们们会以会以为为非常荣幸。非常荣幸。第4页5.If you have any suggestions,please let us know.假假如如您您有有任任何何提提议议，请请告告诉诉我我们们。6.I sincerely invite you to watch the show because.我我真真挚挚地地邀邀请请您您来看演出，因来看演出，因为为7.You can reach me through my phone number 44876655 at your convenience.您能您能够够在您方便在您方便时时候打我候打我电话电话，号，号码码是是44876655。8.I wonder if youd like to go with me.我想知道您是否想和我一起去。我想知道您是否想和我一起去。第5页1.We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenience for you.1.convenience改为convenient2.Let me know as soon as possible that you are able to come or not.2.that改为whether/if3.Since you are such eager to improve your English,it will prove to be a great chance.3.such改为so第6页4.Ive read in the paper about a five-days tour,which I think suits you,so now Id like to recommend it to you.4.five-days改为five-day5.CCTY is inviting foreign students to perform at the Spring Festival Gala,that will be held at CCTV Station on the evening of February 9,the Chinese New Years Eve.5.that改为which6.Please let me to know as soon as possible so that I can make some arrangements.6.删掉to第7页7.Im writing to tell you well have an English Corner active which will take place in the library on Saturday afternoon.7.active改为activity8.We have never been abroad ago,so we are very interested in what it is like in your country.8.ago改为before第8页9.This is Li Hua,a monitor of Class Two,Grade Three of GuangMing High School.9.删掉a10.Therefore,to make it a success,we would like to invite you to be our guide,give us some help with our spoken English.10.give改为giving；或give前加and 第9页【全国全国2卷：邀卷：邀请请外教参加生日聚会外教参加生日聚会】假定你是李假定你是李华华。你班同学决定。你班同学决定为为小明小明举举行生日聚会。行生日聚会。请请你写信邀你写信邀请请外教外教Susan参加，关参加，关键键点包含：点包含：1.时间时间：周五晚：周五晚8点至点至9点点2.地点：学生俱地点：学生俱乐乐部部3.内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏戏等等4.要求：要求：备备小礼品小礼品第10页满分佳作（一）满分佳作（一）Hi,Susan,Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday.Just as the name suggests,the party is still kept a secret from him.This Friday evening,well gather at the Students Club at 8 pm to celebrate his 18th birthday.Im now writing on behalf of the classmates to invite you to come and attend it,if you can spare the time.The details of the celebration,which will last about an hour until 9 pm,are as follows.At the start,the candle will be lighted and well sing“Happy Birthday”together for him,after which well enjoy the birthday cake and have fun together,playing games and singing songs.Im sure that youll have a good time staying with us.Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua第11页满分赏析满分赏析 Just as the name suggests(正如名字所说一样正如名字所说一样)，语言利，语言利用地道，很自然地引出细节。用地道，很自然地引出细节。用到用到Im now writing on behalf ofto(我代表我代表写信写信)，句式高级地道，点明写信目标；，句式高级地道，点明写信目标；if you can spare the time又显示出交际中礼貌，十分得体。又显示出交际中礼貌，十分得体。用到了用到了which引导定语从句；引导定语从句；are as follows也是很好引也是很好引出列举主题句。注意：出列举主题句。注意：follows不要漏了不要漏了s，不然效果会归零。，不然效果会归零。用用after which 介词提前定语从句和介词提前定语从句和playing games and singing songs现在分词短语，有效地把信息整合在一起，句式显现在分词短语，有效地把信息整合在一起，句式显得高级，句法复杂度高。得高级，句法复杂度高。本句是作者添加细节，详略得当，内容适当。本句是作者添加细节，详略得当，内容适当。第12页满分佳作（二）满分佳作（二）Hi,Susan,Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday.As scheduled,all the classmates in our class will gather at the Students Centre at 8 pm this Friday evening to celebrate Xiaomings birthday.We would feel much honored if you could come and enjoy it,which is to finish at 9,lasting an hour.As the party starts,we will light the candles and sing“Happy Birthday”for him.Then the birthday cake will be presented and cut for all of us to enjoy,following which well sing songs and play some small games.Whats more,as a surprise,well all prepare some secret birthday gifts for him,and itll be great to see how surprised he will be seeing the gifts.As its a surprise party,he will know nothing about it beforehand,and we do hope that you could manage to attend it.Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua第13页满分赏析满分赏析 We would feel much honored if you could，语语气气委委婉婉礼礼貌貌，句句式式高高级级，用用would和和could过过去去式式更更表表达达出出客客气气语语气气；且且用用到到了了which引导定语从句和引导定语从句和lasting现在分词，表达句法能力。现在分词，表达句法能力。following which是是一一大大亮亮点点，现现在在分分词词短短语语中中包包含含一一句句定定语语从句。从句。用用whats more连连接接自自然然，条条理理清清楚楚；用用and有有效效地地整整合合了了信信息。息。本句是自己添加内容适当，且用本句是自己添加内容适当，且用do强调，更显邀请诚意。强调，更显邀请诚意。这是写信必备用语，必须做到零差错。这是写信必备用语，必须做到零差错。第14页【湖北卷改编：邀请国际学生慰问老人湖北卷改编：邀请国际学生慰问老人】作文原题作文原题 假假设设你你是是某某中中学学学学生生会会主主席席李李华华，你你校校与与当当地地一一所所国国际际学学校校经经常常举举行行联联谊谊活活动动，你你计计划划在在重重阳阳节节组组织织学学生生到到养养老老院院去去慰慰问问老老人人，拟拟邀邀请请国国际际学学校校学学生生参参加加。请请依依据据以以下下内内容容关关键键点点给给国国际际学学校校学学生生会主席会主席TonyTony写一封信。写一封信。关关键键点：点：向老人向老人赠赠予礼品予礼品(鲜鲜花、自制花、自制贺贺卡卡)；为为老人提供服老人提供服务务(做清做清洁洁、陪老人聊天、陪老人聊天)；为为老人演出老人演出节节目目(唱歌、跳舞唱歌、跳舞)。第15页作文翻译作文翻译亲爱亲爱TonyTony，重重阳阳，中中国国传传统统老老人人节节日日，即即将将到到来来。我我们们计计划划去去敬敬老老院院庆庆贺贺这尤其日子，我们也想邀请你们学校学生加入我们。这尤其日子，我们也想邀请你们学校学生加入我们。我我们们计计划划了了几几项项活活动动。当当我我们们抵抵达达那那里里时时，我我们们会会分分小小组组在在老老人人们们房房间间造造访访他他们们，给给他他们们送送花花和和自自制制卡卡片片，以以表表示示我我们们尊尊重重和和爱爱。然后，我们会在护士帮助下为他们搞清洁和洗刷。然后，我们会在护士帮助下为他们搞清洁和洗刷。因因为为有有些些老老人人以以为为孤孤独独，我我们们能能够够和和他他们们聊聊他他们们以以前前日日子子、我我们们城城市市改改变变、或或者者他他们们感感兴兴趣趣任任何何事事情情。我我们们也也能能够够给给他他们们一一些些演出，比如唱歌、跳舞等等。演出，比如唱歌、跳舞等等。我我坚坚信信我我们们都都会会对对中中国国老老年年人人有有更更加加好好了了解解。假假如如你你有有任任何何提提议，请让我知道。议，请让我知道。期待着你及早回复。期待着你及早回复。你你，李华李华第16页Dear Tony,Chongyang,the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly,is coming around.We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day,and we would like to invite students from your school to join us.We have planned several activities.When we get there,we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups,presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love.Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.As some old people feel lonely,we may chat with them about their old days,changes of our city,or anything they are interested in.We may also give them some performances,such as singing,dancing,and so on.I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China.If you have any suggestions,please let us know.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua第17页【天津卷改编：邀请美国朋友观看演出天津卷改编：邀请美国朋友观看演出】作文原题作文原题 假假设设你你是是李李华华，你你美美国国朋朋友友ChrisChris就就读读于于天天津津某某国国际际学学校校。他他熟熟悉悉中中国国文文化化，尤尤其其是是戏戏曲曲文文化化。8 8月月5 5日日下下午午2 2：0000在在新新落落成成天天津津大大剧剧院院将将上上演演越越剧剧梁梁山山伯伯与与祝祝英英台台。请请你你依依据据以以下下提提醒醒，用用英英语给语给ChrisChris写一封写一封电电子子邮邮件，邀件，邀请请他一起他一起观观看演出。看演出。1.1.提出邀提出邀请请并并简简述原因；述原因；2.2.提出提出观剧观剧后活后活动动提提议议（如参（如参观观附近博物附近博物馆馆或美或美术馆术馆等）；等）；3.3.请请求求对对方回复。方回复。参考参考词汇词汇：越：越剧剧：Shaoxing OperaShaoxing Opera 梁山伯与祝英台梁山伯与祝英台 Butterfly Lovers Butterfly Lovers 天津大天津大剧剧院院Tianjin Grand TheaterTianjin Grand Theater第18页作文翻译作文翻译亲爱亲爱Chris,Chris,我有好消息告诉你。我有好消息告诉你。8 8月月5 5日下午日下午2 2：0000在新落成天津大剧院将在新落成天津大剧院将上演越剧上演越剧梁山伯与祝英台梁山伯与祝英台。它是关于中国一个浪漫故事，经典。它是关于中国一个浪漫故事，经典中国文化。我真挚地邀请你去观看演出，因为你熟悉中国文化，尤中国文化。我真挚地邀请你去观看演出，因为你熟悉中国文化，尤其是戏曲文化。其是戏曲文化。看完演出后，我们计划安排一些其它活动。比如，我们能够参看完演出后，我们计划安排一些其它活动。比如，我们能够参观附近博物馆或美术馆，方便了解更多中国文化和艺术。观附近博物馆或美术馆，方便了解更多中国文化和艺术。假如你有任何提议，请尽快联络我。我期待着你回复。假如你有任何提议，请尽快联络我。我期待着你回复。你你,李华李华第19页Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you.There will be staged Shaoxing Opera“Butterfly Lovers”in new Tianjin Grand Theatre at 2 p.m.on August 5.It is about a Chinese romantic story,typical of Chinese culture.I sincerely invite you to watch the show because you are familiar with Chinese culture,especially Chinese opera culture.After watching the show,we plan to arrange some other activities.For example,we can visit the nearby museums or art galleries in order to know much more about Chinese culture and art.If you have any suggestions,please contact me as soon as possible.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua第20页【新课标新课标2 2卷：邀请外教去敬老院卷：邀请外教去敬老院】假假如如你你是是李李华华，计计划划和和同同学学去去敬敬老老院院(nursing(nursing home)home)陪陪老老人人们们过过重重阳阳节节(the(the Double Double Ninth Ninth Festival)Festival)。请请给给外外教教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包含：露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包含：1.1.出发及返回时间；出发及返回时间；2.2.活动：包饺子、演出节目等。活动：包饺子、演出节目等。Dear Lucy,.Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi HuaLi Hua e第21页【新课标新课标2 2卷：邀请外教去敬老院卷：邀请外教去敬老院】Dear Lucy,Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.Well also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which we hope will make them happy.We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us,please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi HuaLi Hua 第22页【全国全国1 1卷：邀请外教做比赛评委卷：邀请外教做比赛评委】假假设设你你是是育育才才中中学学学学生生会会主主席席李李华华。你你校校将将举举行行一一次次英英语语演演讲讲比比赛赛(speech(speech contest)contest)。希希望望附附近近某某大大学学外外籍籍教教师师SmithSmith女女士士来来做评委。请参考以下比赛通知给她写一封信。做评委。请参考以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英英语语演演讲讲比比赛赛主主题题：人人与与自自然然时时间间：6月月15日日下下午午2:005:00地地点点：501教教室室参参赛赛选选手手：10名名学学生生联联络络人人：李李华华（电电话话44876655）欢欢迎迎大家光临大家光临第23页 内容关键点：内容关键点：1.1.自我介绍自我介绍2.2.邀请做评委邀请做评委3.3.演讲主题演讲主题 4.4.比赛时间比赛时间 5.5.参赛选手参赛选手 6.6.联络方式联络方式Dear Ms.Smith,Dear Ms.Smith,With best wishes,With best wishes,Li HuaLi Hua第24页【全国全国1 1卷：邀请外教做比赛评委卷：邀请外教做比赛评委】Dear Ms.Smith,Dear Ms.Smith,This This is is Li Li Hua,Hua,President President of of the the Student Student Union Union of of Yucai Yucai Middle Middle School,School,which which is is located located near near the the university university where where youyoure re teaching.teaching.I Im m writing writing to to see see if if we we could could have have the the honor honor to to ask ask you you to to be be a a judge judge in in our our coming coming petition.You You see,see,to to promote promote studentsstudents interest interest in in learning learning English,English,weweve ve planned planned to to hold hold an an English English speech speech competition,competition,the the theme theme of of which which is is“Man Man and and NatureNature”.It It will will begin begin at at two two on on the the afternoon afternoon of of June June 15th,15th,lasting lasting three three hours.hours.There There will will be be ten ten participants participants competing competing with with each other in Classroom 501.each other in Classroom 501.We We would would feel feel much much honored honored if if you you could could join join us.us.You You can can reach reach me me through through my my phone phone number number 44876655 44876655 at at your your convenience.Looking forward to your reply.convenience.Looking forward to your reply.With best wishes.With best wishes.Li HuaLi Hua第25页【北京卷改编：邀请美国朋友参加龙舟训练营北京卷改编：邀请美国朋友参加龙舟训练营】假假如如你你是是红红星星中中学学高高三三学学生生李李华华，请请给给你你美美国国朋朋友友JimJim写写一一封封信信，告告诉诉他他你你打打算算参参加加龙龙舟舟训训练练营营，希希望望他他一一起参加，邮件内容包含：起参加，邮件内容包含：1.1.介介绍绍训训练练营营相相关关内内容容（比比如如；时时间间，地地点点，参参加加者者等）；等）；2.2.说明你打算参加原因；说明你打算参加原因；3.3.问询对方意向。问询对方意向。参考词汇：龙舟训练营参考词汇：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training CampDragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,Dear Jim,Yours,Yours,Li HuaLi Hua第26页【北京卷改编：邀请美国朋友参加龙舟训练营北京卷改编：邀请美国朋友参加龙舟训练营】Dear Jim,Dear Jim,I Im m writing writing to to tell tell you you my my exciting exciting plan plan for for the the summer summer holiday.holiday.As As the the dragon dragon boat boat racing racing is is a a typical typical activity activity in in the the Dragon Dragon Boat Boat Festival,Festival,I I want want to to join join a a Dragon Dragon Boat Boat Training Training Camp.Camp.I I wonder wonder if if youyoud d like like to to go go with me.with me.This This camp camp will will open open on on July July 2020thth.It It offers offers teenagers teenagers like like you you and and me me a a chance chance to to enjoy enjoy sports sports and and learn learn about about Chinese Chinese culture.culture.If If you you are are interested interested in in it,it,please please let let me know and Ime know and Ill send you more information.ll send you more information.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.Yours,Yours,Li HuaLi Hua第27页 全国高考英语应用文写作第28页