英语书面表达之图表作文省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

怎样进行图表式作文写作怎样进行图表式作文写作第1页 条形或柱状图条形或柱状图(bar chart)曲线图曲线图(graph)饼形图饼形图(pie chart)图表作文图表作文 要求考生将图表中数据、图形转换成文字，并就图表中所反要求考生将图表中数据、图形转换成文字，并就图表中所反应情况作出分析或发表议论。应情况作出分析或发表议论。第2页1.读取信息。仔细读图，掌握图表上提供信息2.处理信息。对信息进行分析与对比，考虑文章布局。3.文章结构。Part 1：General idea(conclusion/tendency)(图表反应问题或总体趋势)Part 2：Facts(to support the idea)(详细数据或事实)&Reasons(原因分析)Part 3：Solutions/Suggestions(处理问题方法或提议)第3页图表作文写作步骤图表作文写作步骤:一、开头一、开头 二、分析数据与原因二、分析数据与原因三三、得出结论得出结论第4页开门见山开门见山 点名本图表所反应主题点名本图表所反应主题,常见词汇常见词汇有：有：table,chart,figure,graph,tell,show.第5页实用套语1开头(1)From the graph/table/chart above,we can see that.从上表我们能够看出(2)As can be seen from the table(As we can see clearlyfrom the table).正如从图表中所看到(3)As is shown by the graph,there had been a rapid increasein.正如曲线所表示，飞速增加。(4)From the statistics given in the table,it can be seen that.从表中所给统计数字能够看出(5)It can be concluded from the graph that there has been agreat decline in.从曲线图能够得出结论，下降了很多。(6)The graph shows/includes that.图表显示/表明第6页分析数据间主要差异及趋势分析数据间主要差异及趋势,然后描写在描写然后描写在描写数据间改变及总趋势特征时数据间改变及总趋势特征时,可采取可采取分类式或对比分类式或对比式式,以支持主题以支持主题,并说明必要理由并说明必要理由,尤其要注意层次尤其要注意层次清楚，惯用词汇有清楚，惯用词汇有:数据分析数据分析compare.to/with,compared to/with,in contrast to.用作比较说明相同点用作比较说明相同点:as.as,the same as,similar to,like,equally important用作比较说明不一样点用作比较说明不一样点:unlike,on the other hand,instead,different,from,difference,between(among).第7页必备词汇1.上 升：rise,go up,climb,rocket(迅 速 上 升),soar(猛 增),increase2.下降：go down,fall,drop,decline,decrease3.起始：from.to.,to4.程度：by.5.急 缓：slow,slowly;slight,slightly;quick,quickly;steady,steadily;sharp(急 剧 ),sharply(急 剧 地);dramatically(显 著 地);remarkably(显著地)6.趋势：upward trend(上涨趋势),downward trend(下跌趋势)7.不变：stay,remain(依然是)8.其它：account for 30%of the total(占总量 30%),at the samerate(以相同速率),average(平均),annual(每年),figure/number(数字),amount(数量),percentage(百分比)第8页 惯用句式结构惯用句式结构:Topic sentences.I have recently made a survey among.A research has been made recently among.Im writing to tell you about my research about.Different people have different ideas about.Body sentences Somebodys favorite is.while others.What somebody likes to do most is.Both.and .would like to.As for.,the number.equal.The second largest group would like to.The second choice for somebody is to.第9页归纳总结或发表评论归纳总结或发表评论(有时第三步可省有时第三步可省略略)惯用词汇有惯用词汇有:to sum up,finally,in conclusion,at last,in summary,on the whole,in short,all in all,in a word ,in the end,in other words,therefore,as a result,generally speaking,As I have shown.,As has been stated,得出结论得出结论第10页Conclusion sentencesAs I have shown.As has been stated In my opinion.I think.第11页三要：三要：1.要找出对比最为显著突破点。要找出对比最为显著突破点。2.要找出对比较显著关键点。要找出对比较显著关键点。3.要找出双方非常相同关键点要找出双方非常相同关键点。三忌：三忌：1.忌流水帐式依次描述。忌流水帐式依次描述。2.忌重复使用同一句型。忌重复使用同一句型。3.忌重复出现纷繁复杂数据。忌重复出现纷繁复杂数据。柱状图式作文写作要注意：柱状图式作文写作要注意：第12页下面是某高中对该校下面是某高中对该校200名学生（男女各半）择业观做名学生（男女各半）择业观做出调查后绘制图表，依据该图所反应情况用英语写一出调查后绘制图表，依据该图所反应情况用英语写一则报道。则报道。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.参考词汇：鲜明对比参考词汇：鲜明对比striking contrast第13页书面表示审题书面表示审题体裁：说明文体裁：说明文时态：普通现在时时态：普通现在时人称：第三人称人称：第三人称第14页下面是某高中对该校下面是某高中对该校200名学生（男女各半）择业观做名学生（男女各半）择业观做出调查后绘制图表，依据该图所反应情况用英语写一出调查后绘制图表，依据该图所反应情况用英语写一则报道。则报道。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.参考词汇：鲜明对比参考词汇：鲜明对比striking contrast第15页 I have recently made a survey about middle school students choice of their future jobs.They have different ideas about it.The most striking contrast is in teaching.30%of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5%of the boys want to do this job.20%of the boys want to do business and another 20%want to become lawyers while girls take up 15%in these fields.What boys like to do most is to becomemanagers and the second largest group would like to be scientists.Besides teaching,the second choice for girls is to be scientists and managers.The number is not small.Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.A possible version第16页假设你于 4 月 23 日“世界读书日”(World Reading Day)在你所在学校进行了一项阅读习惯调查，以下是其中一项调查结果。请用英语写一篇短文，说明相关内容及结果等。A买书阅读B网上下载或在线阅读C从朋友处或图书馆借阅D学校阅览室阅读1.调查内容及时间；2.调查结果；3.问题：阅览室使用率(use rate)不高；4.提议：(1)延长阅览室开放时间；(2)书店送书到校，方便学生购置。第17页 On World Reading Day,we carried out a survey about the reading habits of high school students.According to the survey,45.75%of the students read books they buy and 8.5%of them download e-books or read online.35.75%of the students borrow books from friends or the library and 11%of them read in the school reading-room.From the survey we can see that the use rate of the school rea-ding-room is not high enough.We suggest that its opening hours be extended and meanwhile bookstores be invited into the school to make it convenient for students to buy books.第18页 日前，针对学生零用钱（日前，针对学生零用钱（pocket moneypocket money）消费）消费方向，你对你们市某中学高中和初中部分学生进方向，你对你们市某中学高中和初中部分学生进行了问卷调查得出数据以下表。现请你用英文行了问卷调查得出数据以下表。现请你用英文给某报社编辑写一封信，反应这一情况，并呼吁给某报社编辑写一封信，反应这一情况，并呼吁中学生树立正确消费观。中学生树立正确消费观。注意：注意：1 1书信中无须一一列举详细数字，只要书信中无须一一列举详细数字，只要 抓住主要问题和数听说明问题即可。抓住主要问题和数听说明问题即可。2 2字数：字数：100100字左右。开头已给出字左右。开头已给出,不计不计 人总词数。人总词数。第19页Dear editor,Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money_.第20页Dear editor,Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money.In this survey,both junior students and senior students spend most their money on books,sacks and playing games,still some money goes to clothes,banks,sports,and so on.The survey shows that about 44 of seniors prefer books to sacks（37%）and playing games（31%）.On the other hand,only 32 of juniors will spend their pocket money buying books,while over a half buy sacks and 44 spend on playing games.Both seniors and juniors would not waste too much money in clothes or put it in banks.I thinkI think too many sacks will too many sacks will not onlynot only make us put on make us put on weight weight but alsobut also do harm to our health.do harm to our health.In additionIn addition,if we,if we play games without limit,well lose much precious time,play games without limit,well lose much precious time,which results in low grades.which results in low grades.FurthermoreFurthermore,the money is,the money is hard-earned.hard-earned.I hopeI hope we students value our money as we students value our money as well as our time.well as our time.第21页假如你叫假如你叫Jim Lee，你最近对你班，你最近对你班60名同学名同学(男女各半男女各半)进行了上网目标调查。现将调查结果进行了上网目标调查。现将调查结果(以下表所表示以下表所表示)用用英语给某报社编辑写一封信汇报此事，以引发舆论关注。英语给某报社编辑写一封信汇报此事，以引发舆论关注。注意：注意：汇报应包含图表所表示全部内容汇报应包含图表所表示全部内容叙述结果时要防止重复使用百分比。叙述结果时要防止重复使用百分比。叙述过程中要适当添加评语。叙述过程中要适当添加评语。词数词数100左右左右。第22页学生习作点评学生习作点评Dear editor,My name is Jim lee.I am a middle school student.Now,I did a researchabout the purpose of my classmates go on the line.There are 30%of boys and 20%girls read news on the computer.Have 20%boys and 15%girls send e-mails on-line.There are more girls(about 35%)than boys(about 5%)have a chat.About 10%boys and 10%girls used computers study.More boys than girls play games.Yours Jim第23页Common mistakes1.Most of the boys in order to play games while most girls in order to have a chat.2.About 10%boys and 10%girls used computer study.汉语式英语汉语式英语？第24页1.20%of boys get on theInternet to send e-mails while 15%of girls get on the Internet to send e-mails.2.The number of boys who like to play games is larger than the number of girls.重复累赘重复累赘第25页句式单一句式单一,平铺直叙平铺直叙A.30%boys and 20%girls go on-line in order to read news.20%boys and girls go on-line to send e-mails.5%boys and 35%girls want to chat with others.10%boys and girls want to study on-line.Besides,35%boys and 20%girls go on-line to play pare A with BB.Girls favorite is chatting,but few boys like it.What boys like to do most is playing games and girls also like it.Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet.As for studying,the number of boys and girls is equal.句式多样句式多样,文章增文章增 靓靓 第26页无关联词无关联词1.Most of the girls like to chat.Most of the boys like to play games.2.Computers have changed the world greatly.We should make full use of them.It will become a tool of our study.第27页Thank you for being with us!第28页