2016届高考英语第二轮复习短文改错集训复习题15.doc

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【专项突破】2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十五）
【专项突破】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Passage 1
On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out of the bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for their help.

Passage 2
A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn't even giving the chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. "We don't employ dishonest people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he arrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.

Passage 3
One year ago,I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats.
Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.
Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.

Passage 4
Dear Mandy，
Pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard
because he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true. I work really hard，
often study late into the night！I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work
as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellent
grades. It's not fair！
The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student she's had for year. When
I told my dad，all he said was，“You mustn't waste your time in art. You must focus your mind
on your lessons！”Pm feeling quite puzzling what to do now．Would you please help me out?
Thanks a lot！
Yours sincerely，
Lisa

Passage 5
There’s an old man in our village calling Old Joe who said to be 110 years old. This can’t be proved though he doesn’t have a birth certificate. All his personal papers were destroy during the World War II. I don’t know if he really is so old, and it doesn’t matter. He certainly looks very old. Of course, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life. Old Joe always answered them like this, “If you are offered a cigarette, never accept it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them.”

Passage 6
Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily

2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十五）答案
Passage 1
On a snowy winter night , a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the
passengers of
wet road .And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out
trapped was
of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help . A man who

lived nearby saw that had happened . He and some villagers succeeded in open the
what opening
door and helped all of them out of the bus .He took them to his home but offered food
and
and water and even some warm clothes to the children . They spent two days in their
his
home and finally help came . All of them were thankfully for their help.
thankful

Passage 2
A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to
fine
find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn't even giving the
to given
chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. "We
why
don't employ dishonest people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he
was after
arrived in Germany, he found∧easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and
it So
was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all

keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.
mind

Passage 3
One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at Shijiazhuang Railway Station. It was quite different
held
from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no
with and
fixed seats.

Gathering at the entrance of the station, wetold to collect as many English words and
were
sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked
there
everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the
searching came
class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation

and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.
vivid
Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.
wherever

Passage 4
Dear Mandy,
I’m not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard
especially
because he wants me ∧ go to university. He thinks I’m lazy, but it’s not true. I work really hard,
to
often study late into the night! I’ve tried to talk to my mother, but she always said I have to work
studying says
as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn’t study very hard, and he always gets excellent
as but
grades. It’s not fair!

The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says I’m the best student she’s had for year. When
years
I told my dad, all he said was, “You mustn’t waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on
on / over
your lessons!” I’m feeling quite puzzling what to do now. Would you please help me out? Thanks
puzzled
a lot!

Yours sincerely,
Lisa

Passage 5
试题分析：题目主要考查学生对冠词、名词、并列连词、形容词、过去分词、定语从句、状语从句、时态
等语法知识的掌握情况。
【小题51】考查过去分词作定语。man和call之间是动宾关系，即一个被叫做......的人，应该用过去分词作定语，故把calling改为called。
【小题52】考查定语从句。who引导一个定语从句，sb be said to be/do sth据说某人......，根据“There’s an old man”可知短文用的是一般现在时，故在who和said之间加is。
【小题53】考查状语从句。句意：这得不到证明，因为他没有出生证明。前后是因果关系，故把though改为because。
【小题54】考查被动语态。papers和destroy是动宾关系，即文件被毁坏，故用被动语态，故把destroy改为destroyed。
【小题55】考查冠词。World War II二战，是专有名词，前面不需要冠词，故把the去掉。
【小题56】考查并列连词。句意：我不知道他是不是真的有那么大年纪了，但这无关紧要。前后是转折关系，故把and改为but。
【小题57】考查名词。经常有人问他问题，question问题，是可数名词，被问过的问题不止一个，应该用复数形式，故把question改为questions。
【小题58】考查时态。always与一般现在时连用，且根据“There’s an old man...I don’t know...he is often...who want to...”可知，短文使用的是一般现在时，故把answered改为answers。
【小题59】考查物主代词。根据“if you are annoyed...”可知，这里说的是“你”，即第二人称you，应该用形容词性物主代词your，故把his改为your。
【小题60】考查形容词作定语。副词修饰动词、形容词或句子；形容词作定语修饰名词，这里修饰名词questions，应该用形容词，故把foolishly改为foolish。
考点：考查冠词；名词；并列连词；形容词；过去分词；定语从句；状语从句；时态

Passage 6
1.is后加a 2.advices改为advice 3.first in改为first of 4.去掉it
5.loud改为louder 6.him改为them 7.trying改为try 8.share改为shares
9.Unless改为If 10.possibly改为possible

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