写好英语高考作文的几点建议.pptx

授课：南昌一中授课：南昌一中 邹邹 艳艳制作：南昌一中制作：南昌一中 邹邹 艳艳 Advice on Writing Good CompositionsAdvice on Writing Good Compositions2005年年福建高考卷福建高考卷(NMET)目前，学校存在少数学生考目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊作弊现象。某英文象。某英文杂志社志社拟对此此现象向中学生象向中学生征文，征文，标题是是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”请根据下列提示用英根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：主要原因主要原因考试偏多、偏难考试偏多、偏难不用功、懒惰不用功、懒惰取悦父母、老师取悦父母、老师个人看法个人看法作弊不对，违反校规作弊不对，违反校规要诚实，努力学习要诚实，努力学习（其他看法）（其他看法）注意：注意：1短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；3词数：词数：100左右。左右。4参考词汇：作弊参考词汇：作弊 cheat（v.）My Opinion on Cheating in ExaminationsIt is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.Tables(表格表格)2006年湖北高考卷年湖北高考卷(NMET)受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种?调查范围：湖北省的调查范围：湖北省的10所中学所中学调查对象：高中生调查对象：高中生调查人数：调查人数：1200调查方式：访谈调查方式：访谈调查结果：（见下图）调查结果：（见下图）Reading Interests of Senior Middle School StudentsRecent,survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school studentsCharts（图表）（图表）2004年湖南高考卷年湖南高考卷(NMET)假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生暑假打算去乡村度假请根据下面两幅图提供假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生暑假打算去乡村度假请根据下面两幅图提供的信息，写一篇短文简要说明城市生活环境的不足，重点说明你去乡村度假的原因的信息，写一篇短文简要说明城市生活环境的不足，重点说明你去乡村度假的原因注意：注意：1短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，井做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整；短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，井做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整；2词数：词数：100左右左右Pictures2006年全国高考卷（年全国高考卷（III）假定你是李华假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现现在正在招募志愿者在正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信文给组委会写一封申请信.内容应包括内容应包括:个人情况：年龄、性别、学历个人情况：年龄、性别、学历 个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况乐于助人、熟悉本地情况 承诺：提供最佳服务承诺：提供最佳服务 注意：词数注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好左右，开头语已为你写好 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 生词：申请生词：申请apply(v.),application(n.)；志愿者志愿者volunteerDear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.Outline(提纲提纲)Patterns of writing Pictures 图画作文图画作文Charts 图表作文图表作文Tables 表格作文表格作文Outline 提纲作文提纲作文DivideTop sentence(主题句)Advice on writing good compositions Top sentence（主题句）（主题句）Coherence（连贯性连贯性）Ending（opinionopinion）Top sentenceMain idea of the whole compositionMain idea of the whole compositionLead in a compositionLead in a compositionFunctionsIdeas are clearly stated;well-organizeda good composition授课形式一：只用英语授课形式一：只用英语优点：有助于提高听说能力等优点：有助于提高听说能力等缺憾：不易听懂等缺憾：不易听懂等结论：结论：授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用优点：易于理解等优点：易于理解等缺憾：英语氛围不浓等缺憾：英语氛围不浓等结论：结论：Top sentence Practice:find out the top sentence of each part 1.在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂 志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个这个 问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only.As we all know,a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well.Classestaught in English provide students with such an environment.When English is the only language used in the classroom,students will have more opportu-nities to practise listening and speaking.Therefore,they will be able to learnmore quickly.However,there are also some problems with this teaching method.As we havent mastered enough English words,sometimes we may find it difficultto follow the teacher.Slow learner may even lose interest in English.Practice makes perfect.To learn English well requires a lot of practice.Therefore,I like my English classes to be taught completely in English.注意：注意：1.词数词数100120，短文开头已给出（不计词数），短文开头已给出（不计词数）2.参考词汇：参考词汇：atmosphere 氛围氛围 Top sentence Practice:find out the top sentence of each part 2.毕业前夕，你班决定给李老师送一份礼物，大家提出两条建议：毕业前夕，你班决定给李老师送一份礼物，大家提出两条建议：(1)送影集送影集(album)，里面有每个同学的照片；，里面有每个同学的照片；(2)送磁带，录有每个同学对老师的祝福。送磁带，录有每个同学对老师的祝福。请以请以“An Album or a Tape”为题，用英语写一篇短文。首先简述以上两条建议，然后为题，用英语写一篇短文。首先简述以上两条建议，然后 表明你同意其中哪一条并说明理由。表明你同意其中哪一条并说明理由。a短文必须以第一人称书写。短文必须以第一人称书写。b词数：词数：100词左右。词左右。An Album or A tape How time flies!Well soon graduate and say goodbye to our dear teachers and classmates.To show our thanks to Miss Li,we have made a decision to send her a present.Will an album or a tape do?Some of us prefer an album with everyones photo inside.After graduation,there will be few chances to meet again.With an album Miss Li can see us at any time.While others think a tape will be more meaningful,on which our wishes are recorded.Each time Miss Li plays the tape,our voices will remind her of the pleasant days we have had together.In my opinion,an album is the best choice.Once Miss Li opens the album and looks at the photos one by one,the good old days are to arise in her mind.On the other hand,compared with a tape,an album will last longer.Top sentence Practice:write down the top sentence of each part(answers may vary)1.假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将将 借住你家。请你代表全家写信给借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：上午：学校活动上午：学校活动 下午：游览市区下午：游览市区 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天 注意：注意：1)词数：词数：100左右左右 2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3)参考词汇：安排参考词汇：安排arrange Dear Andy,_ _.I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning,but in the afternoon,Ill show you around and take you to some places of interest.Well mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV,playing games,and meeting people.Im sure well have a wonderful time and enjoy each others company._ Yours sincerely,Li Hua Top sentence Practice:write down the top sentence of each part(answers may vary)2.根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生 活带来的影响。注意：活带来的影响。注意：1）词数：）词数：100左右左右2）生词：通讯：）生词：通讯：communication n _ _ _.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.Whats more,people have easy access to the Internet,which enables them to send and receive e-mails whe-never they like.With these changes,peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient.It used to take several days to hear from each other,but now it takes only several minutes,even if they are in two different continents._ _ _As we know,music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere.Besides,after hardstudy,music can bring us relaxation,which reduces the tiredness.This can help usmake full preparations for the next class.Listening to music also makes us feel happy._In their opinion,they cant get the expected effect from playing music,for the class break time is too short.What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music._In this way students can enjoy music as well ashave a good rest.Besides,I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students.Top sentence Practice:write down the top sentence of each part(answers may vary)3.随着科技的进步，多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时，有些学校利用它来播随着科技的进步，多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时，有些学校利用它来播 放音乐。你班就放音乐。你班就“课间是否要播放音乐课间是否要播放音乐”展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语 写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议。（字数。（字数 120 词左右）词左右）大多数同学认为大多数同学认为 部分同学认为部分同学认为个人看法个人看法能活跃气氛能活跃气氛；能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳，使大家在快能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳，使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备；能给大家带来快乐能给大家带来快乐课间时间太短课间时间太短，播放音乐，播放音乐达不到预期的效果；达不到预期的效果；课间需要的是安静而不是课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音嘈杂的声音。考生陈述考生陈述 Coherence（连贯性）conjunction conjunction(连词连词)good vocabulary and good vocabulary and sentencessentencesMaking compositions look better(形式形式)Dividing and combination of contentsDividing and combination of contents(段中内容的分层与组合段中内容的分层与组合)fluent expression;good mastery of sentence structure;coherent(连贯连贯)a good composition Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性）一、一、过渡用语过渡用语表示时间关系的过渡用语：表示时间关系的过渡用语：first,in the beginning,first of all,next,second,then,soon,first,in the beginning,first of all,next,second,then,soon,meanwhile,meantime,in the meantime,now,earlier,later,meanwhile,meantime,in the meantime,now,earlier,later,after that,afterward,at that moment,by that time,from then after that,afterward,at that moment,by that time,from then on,presently,eventually,at last,finally,before.,after.,on,presently,eventually,at last,finally,before.,after.,since.,when.,while.,as soon as.,once.,until.since.,when.,while.,as soon as.,once.,until.表示添加的过渡用语：表示添加的过渡用语：and,also,too,again,besides,also,another,moreover,and,also,too,again,besides,also,another,moreover,furthermore,in addition,as well as,what is morefurthermore,in addition,as well as,what is more表示比较的过渡用语：表示比较的过渡用语：like,alike,in comparison,likewise,in the same way,at the like,alike,in comparison,likewise,in the same way,at the same time,similarly,in like manner,as,as well as same time,similarly,in like manner,as,as well as Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性）表示对照的过渡用语：表示对照的过渡用语：but,yet,still,however,unlike,instead,whereas,in spite of,but,yet,still,however,unlike,instead,whereas,in spite of,despite,on the contrary,in contrast,on the other hand,though,despite,on the contrary,in contrast,on the other hand,though,although,for one thingfor anotheralthough,for one thingfor another表示原因的过渡用语表示原因的过渡用语because,for,since,as,because of,due to,owing to,thanks tobecause,for,since,as,because of,due to,owing to,thanks to表示结果的过渡用语：表示结果的过渡用语：so,thus,therefore,hence,so that,as a result,in this/that wayso,thus,therefore,hence,so that,as a result,in this/that way表示例证的过渡用语：表示例证的过渡用语：for example,for instance,such as,that is,namely,in particular,for example,for instance,such as,that is,namely,in particular,specifically,as proof ofspecifically,as proof of表示总结的过渡用语：表示总结的过渡用语：to sum up,to conclude,to summarize,on the whole,all in all,to sum up,to conclude,to summarize,on the whole,all in all,lastly,in short,in brief,in a word,in conclusion,in closing,in lastly,in short,in brief,in a word,in conclusion,in closing,in summary summary Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性）表示强调的过渡用语：表示强调的过渡用语：surely,certainly,truly,undoubtedly,clearly,indeed,in fact,surely,certainly,truly,undoubtedly,clearly,indeed,in fact,after all,above all,most important,to be sure,without doubt,after all,above all,most important,to be sure,without doubt,without a question,as a matter of factwithout a question,as a matter of fact表示重述的过渡用语：表示重述的过渡用语：in other words,that is to say,in simpler terms,simply stated,in other words,that is to say,in simpler terms,simply stated,to put it differently to put it differently 表示综述的过渡用语表示综述的过渡用语：generally,generally speaking,in general,in a word,in short,generally,generally speaking,in general,in a word,in short,on the whole,as a rule,for the most parton the whole,as a rule,for the most part表示让步的过渡用语：表示让步的过渡用语：anyhow,anyway,of course,however,in any case,at any rate anyhow,anyway,of course,however,in any case,at any rate Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性）二、启、承、转、合二、启、承、转、合（1 1）启：用于引导主题句，或用于主题句的后面，引导第一个发展句。）启：用于引导主题句，或用于主题句的后面，引导第一个发展句。first(ly),at first,first of all,in the beginning,at present,to begin with,lately,first(ly),at first,first of all,in the beginning,at present,to begin with,lately,for one thing,now,recently,in general,generally speaking,in my opinion,for one thing,now,recently,in general,generally speaking,in my opinion,obviously obviously。（2 2）承：用于承接主题句或第一个（或前一个）发展句）承：用于承接主题句或第一个（或前一个）发展句 Second,third,besides,furthermore,in addition,moreover,what is more,Second,third,besides,furthermore,in addition,moreover,what is more,what is worse,for example,for instance what is worse,for example,for instance（例如）（例如）,in other words,in pa-,in other words,in pa-rticular,in the same way,after a while,from now on,meanwhile,at the rticular,in the same way,after a while,from now on,meanwhile,at the same time,by the time,of course,for the purpose,in fact,in reality,no same time,by the time,of course,for the purpose,in fact,in reality,no doubt,certainly,surely,obviously.doubt,certainly,surely,obviously.（3 3）转：用来表示不同或相反的情况）转：用来表示不同或相反的情况 After all,but,yet,however,although,though,in spite of,on the contrary,After all,but,yet,however,although,though,in spite of,on the contrary,in contrast,on the other hand,in fact,as a matter of fact,otherwise,in contrast,on the other hand,in fact,as a matter of fact,otherwise,or else,instead or else,instead（4 4）合：用于总结段落中上文的内容，引导一个发展句或结论句，或用于文章）合：用于总结段落中上文的内容，引导一个发展句或结论句，或用于文章 的最后一句的最后一句 Finally,in conclusion,in brief,in short,in summary,therefore,to conclude,Finally,in conclusion,in brief,in short,in summary,therefore,to conclude,above all,as a result,at last,in general,in a word,on the whole.above all,as a result,at last,in general,in a word,on the whole.Find out all the conjunctions in the passage Homework(1)2005年年福建高考卷福建高考卷(NMET)目前，学校存在少数学生考目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊作弊现象。某英文象。某英文杂志社志社拟对此此现象向中学生象向中学生征文，征文，标题是是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”请根据下列提示用英根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性）主要原因主要原因考试偏多、偏难考试偏多、偏难不用功、懒惰不用功、懒惰取悦父母、老师取悦父母、老师个人看法个人看法作弊不对，违反校规作弊不对，违反校规要诚实，努力学习要诚实，努力学习（其他看法）（其他看法）注意：注意：1短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；3词数：词数：100左右。左右。4参考词汇：作弊参考词汇：作弊 cheat（v.）My Opinion on Cheating in ExaminationsIt is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.1 When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.（使用（使用V-ing形式）形式）2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）（使用名词性从句）3.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)4.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型)5.As a result,the plan was a failure.On his arriving,please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性）Appreciate the following sentencesWeak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.The plan turned out to be a failure.Coherence Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性）（连贯性）（连贯性）rewrite the following sentences6.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使使用用过过去去分词分词)7.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用使用V-ing形式形式)8.I wont believe what he says.（使用状语从句）（使用状语从句）9.We all think he is a great man.10.In our school,there are twenty-six classrooms.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.No matter what he says,I wont believe.We all think highly of him.Advice on writing good compositions Top sentence（主题句）（主题句）Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性）conjunction(conjunction(连词连词)good vocabulary and sentencesgood vocabulary and sentencesDividing and combination of contentsDividing and combination of contents(段中内容的分层与组合段中内容的分层与组合)Ending（opinion）ExcellentExcellentIdeas are clearly stated/supported;to the point;well-organized;fluent expression;good mastery of sentence structure;coherent(连贯连贯)2125GoodGoodcover all the information given in the outline;smooth;no major mistakes in sentence structure1620FairFairloosely organized but main ideas are clear;occasional errors of word/idiom1115PoorPoorlimited or no knowledge about the subject;ideas are confused;lack logical order610FailFailno knowledge about the subject05英语高考评分标准英语高考评分标准20012001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。I will tell you the changes of my life.Before,we had many classes every day.I had to do a lot of homework after school.I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening.I had no