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第四部分步步高 写津能背:词:背:句;背;范文 英语写作在评卷时遵循语言第一位(语言高级),内容第二位(要点齐全),结构第三位(文才分段)的原则,也就是阅卷名师最注衷的是语自,语言要美北 朝 夕之功,只介多读多仃多叮才足蚊道理.将叮作划分成32个微专题,从 最堪础的句子成分抓起,由词汇到句子到语身到整筠,蒯序渐进,好天读岂并举、思怡给 合,当作功到白然成.学生用书见课前预习晨背分册中的“第二部分写作提能步步高”。第一步 从认识句子开始写作中写对句子是最基本的要求,其中最重要的一点是句子结构要完整。所以,同学们 在平时训练时一定要从掌握最基本的句子成分和基本句式做起,通过观摩、背诵、仿写,最 终写出正确无误的句子。即使你的作文不能写得漂漂亮亮、洋气十足,也一定要写得像模像 样,硬伤不多!所以学写作,先从最基本的句子抓起。微写作1各司其职的8大句子成分I学习要求:讲解知识学通,范句填后背诵句子由若干部分组成,这些组成部分叫做句子成分,包括主语、谓语、宾语、表语、定 语、状语、补足语和同位语等。掌握这些句子成分有利于我们写出正确的句子。一、主语句子的主体主语是句子的主体,是句子所要说明的人或事物,表示句子描述的是谁或什么。主语通常由名词(短语)、代词、数词、动词不定式(短语)、动名词(短语)或从句等充当。How to get along well with others is the second thing you should learn.(2014-江西高考满分 作文)如何与别人友好相处是你应该学会的第二件事。(动词不定式短语作主语)二、谓语主语的行为谓语用来描述主语的行为动作、状态或特征。谓语只能由动词(短语)充当,有人称、数和时态的变化。The watch is_ necessary in our daily life,but its function is too simple and dull.(2014 湖南高考满分作文)手表在我们日常生活中是必要的,但它的功能太简单呆板了。(系表结构作谓语)三 宾语动作的对象宾语是动作的对象或承受者,一般位于及物动词和介词的后面。可以用作宾语的有:名 词、代词、数词、不定式、动名词和从句等。I would like to give an excellent picture of my future life in ten years.(2014-全国卷 II 满分作文)我想对我十年后的生活作一下生动的描绘。(不定式作宾语)四、表语主语的特征表语与前面的系动词一起构成复合谓语(系表结构),用来说明主语的特征、类属、状态、身份等。可以用作表语的有:名词(短语)、代词、数词、形容词、副词、不定式(短语)、动名 词、分词、介词短语和从句等。The important thing is toeam_and_control your_temper so that you may not do or say anything you 11 regret.(2014-安徽高考满分作文)重要的是要学会自制,这样你可能就不会做使你后悔的事或说使你后悔的话了。(不定式短语作表语)五、定语名词的修饰语定语是用来描述名词的品质与特征的修饰语,它常和名词构成名词短语。可以用作定语 的有:形容词、名词、代词、数词、副词、不定式、动名词、分词、介词短语和从句等。During holiday seasons,I will live in the countryside,where air is fresh and people are friendly.(2014-全国卷II满分作文)在假期,我会住在乡下,那里空气新鲜而且人们友好。(从句作定语)六、状语动词、形容词、副词或句子的修饰语状语是用来修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子的一种成分。可以用作状语的有:副词、名词、数词、形容词、不定式、分词、介词短语、独立主格和从句等。Time permitting,I expect to have more spare time to spend with my friends so that we can have a better relationship.(2014-全国卷 II 满分作文)时间允许的话,我希望有更多的业余时间和朋友一起度过,这样我们就会有更加良好的 关系。(独立结构和从句作状语)七、补足语宾语或主语的补充说明补足语是用来说明宾语或主语的性质、状态等的一种句子成分。补充说明主语意义的句 子成分叫做主语补足语;补充说明宾语意义的句子成分叫做宾语补足语。可以用作补足语的 有;形容词、名词、不定式、分词和介词短语等。Popular science books can help us students to become more interested in science and”加%.(2014浙江高考满分作文)科普书能帮助我们学生对科学和自然更感兴趣。(不定式作宾补)八、同位语同等重要的修饰语对句子中的某一成分作进一步解释、说明,与前面的成分在语法上处于同等地位的句子 成分叫做同位语。可以用作同位语的有:名词、代词、数词、介词短语、不定式、动名词和 从句等。On the one hand,I have strong belief that I will do well in the exam;on the other hand,I feel a bit nervous,though it s not difficult.(2014-四 Jll高考满分作文)一方面,我非常自信能在考试中做好;另一方面,我感觉有点紧张,尽管考试并不难。(从 句作同位语)微写作2万变不离其宗的5种基本句式I学习要求:讲解知识学通,范句填后背诵英语句子虽然千变万化,但总结起来都是从五种基本句式演变而来,掌握了这五种基本 句式,便掌握了英语句子的灵魂。五种基本句式如下:主语+谓语(不及物动词)主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语主语+系动词+表语主语+谓语(及物动词)+间接宾语+直接宾语主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语+宾语补足语一、SV句式:主语+谓语(不及物动词)SV句式常用来表示主语的动作或状态。其特点为:句子的谓语动词都能表达完整的意 思,这类动词叫做不及物动词,后面可以跟副词、介词短语、状语从句等。(DTherefore,this_new_kind_of_shoes has come into being recently.(2014-湖南高考标准范 文)因此,这种新鞋最近才问世。Bathed in the sunshine,we jumped and cheered with ioy.(2013 江西高考书面表达)沐浴在阳光中,我们高兴得欢呼雀跃。(3)In order to keep fit,we_should exercise regularly.为了保持身体健康,我们应该定期锻炼。Here many_high_buildings have_appeared with green trees growing quickly.这里高楼林立、绿树成荫。二、SVO句式:主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语SVO句式句型特点为:谓语动词均为实义动词,都是主语发出的动作,但不能表达完整 的意思,必须跟有一个宾语(宾语可以由名词、代词、动名词、不定式等来充当),即动作的 承受者,才能表达完整的意思。点津】该句式的谓语动词要用及物动词。如果是不及物动词,后面一定要跟介词构成 及物词组。At the age of twelve,I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.(2014-福建高考标准范文)十二岁时,我得到了一辆漂亮的自行车作为生日礼物。Finally,we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently.(2014 江西高考标准范文)最后,我们应该经常参加运动和户外活动。(3)Over the years,we_have_developed a_good friendship with each other.多年来,我们已经互相培养了良好的友谊。Nowadays,people in many big cities are_complaining about the_heavy traffic.当今,许多大城市的人们在抱怨交通拥堵。三、SLP句式:主语+系动词+表语SLP句式就是常说的主系表结构。此句式侧重说明主语是什么或怎么样,谓语动词需用 系动词(主耍是be动词),表语多为形容词,也可以是名词、介词短语、不定式及分词等。In my opinion,a_person without friends can never be happy.(2014 山东高考标准范文)在我看来,一个没有朋友的人永远不会幸福。Such_a_positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.(2014-安徽高考标准范文)这种积极的生活态度有助于提升你的情绪。In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful。14 全国卷 H 标准范文)总之,我的生活会越来越丰富多彩。In a word,countryife_is_more bene行cial to health than city life.总而言之,乡村生活比城市生活对健康更有利。(5)Environmental problems are_becoming more and_more serious all over the world.全世界的环境问题正变得越来越严重。四 SVOO句式:主语+谓语(及物动词)+间接宾语+直接宾语SVOO句式中的谓语动词必须跟两个宾语才能表达完整的意思。一个是表示人的间接宾 语;一个是表示物的直接宾语。一般间接宾语在前面,直接宾语在后面。(DFortunately,she promised me another chance to interview.幸运的是,她答应给我一个重新面试的机会。At the same time,parents are_giving their_children too_much_protection.同时,父母给孩子的保护太多了。Mr._Green will_give_us_a_speech on how to learn English well.格林先生将就如何学好英语给我们作一场报告。五、SVOC句式:主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语+宾语补足语SVOC句式中的动词虽然是及物动词,但是只跟一个宾语还不能表达完整的意思,必须 加上一个补充成分来说明宾语,才能使意思完整。宾语补足语是用来补充说明宾语的情况的,直接跟在宾语之后。Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success.(2014-辽宁高考标准范文)你的贡献将会使得这次活动获得巨大成功。Obviously,a_good_leaming habit can help us to_speed_up to reach ourdestinations.(2013-四川高考满分作文)显而易见,一个好的学习习惯能帮助我们尽快达到我们的目标。As a high school student,I_consider English a_very_important subject.作为一名中学生,我认为英语是一门非常重要的学科。微写作3用途各界的3大句子类型I学习要求:讲解知识学通,范句填后背诵从广义上讲,英语有三种句子类型,即简单句、并列句和复合句,这三种句子在写作中 各有用途,它们的使用要恰到好处,做到长短句结合,使文章错落有致。一、简洁有力的简单句如果句子只包含一个主谓结构,而句子的各个成分都只由单词或短语表示,它就是简单 句(不管句子是长是短)o两个或更多的主语可以共用一个谓语,也是简单句;两个或更多的 谓语可以共用一个主语,也是简单句;两个或更多的主语和两个或更多的谓语有时也是简单 句。This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.(2014-安徽 高考标准范文)这是一个很好的发泄愤怒的方式,不会伤害到别人或自己。Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way.(2014-浙江高考标准范文)通常科普书以一种简单有趣的方式解释基本的自然规律。In the next three years of your senior high school life,you_will_face_more nd_more hallenges.(2014-江西高考满分作文)在随后三年的高中生活中,你将会面对越来越多的挑战。In order to solve this problem,my lassmates and_I iscussed t and_came_up ith uggestionlater reported to the headmaster.(2014 d匕京高考满分作文)为了解决这个问题,我和同学们进行了讨论,想出了一个建议并汇报给了校长。These days,breaking traffic rules and littering are_not_uncommon,.causing serious harm tolife and the environment.(2013-安徽高考书面表达)最近,违反交通规则和乱丢垃圾已是司空见惯,这给人们的生活和环境都带来了严重的 危害。二、整齐和谐的并列句由两个或两个以上的简单句并列连接起来的句子称为并列句。并列句的各个简单句彼此 独立,互不依从,但它们表达的意思之间有一定的关系。并列连词之前可用逗号,也可不用逗号。As middle school students,we re not familiar with foreign cultures,while Chinese culture isn t fit to appear in an English newspaper.(2014-上海高考满分作文)作为中学生,我们不熟悉外国文化,而中国的文化也不适合出现在英语报刊中。Firstly,as a student,the most important thing is to study,so it is necessary for all of you tobuild an effective method in your study.(2014-江西高考满分作文)首先,作为一名学生,最重要的是学习,因此你们所有人都有必要在学习中建立一个有 效的方式。(3)It not_only gave us a chance to get close to nature,but_also gave us relaxation from our study.(2013-江西高考满分作文)它不仅给了我们接近大自然的机会,而且能让我们在学习之余得到放松。So,from now on,let s not waste our time on unimportant things but have a heart-to-heart chat with our parents once in a while.(2013-重庆高考满分作文)因此,从现在起,让我们不要在一些不重要的事情上浪费时间,而要经常与我们的父母 进行坦诚的交流。We were enjoying the wonderful sight when_a_loud_noise_caught our_attention.我们正在欣赏美景,这时一声巨响吸引了我们的注意力。三、含义丰富的复合句复合句由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句构成。主句是全句的主体,通常独立存在,从句则只用作句子的一个成分,不能独立。复合句中的从句包括定语从句、状语从句和名词 性从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句)oIn addition,you should respect all the teachers who unselfishly help you to gain much knowledge(定语从句).(2014-江西高考满分作文)另外,你应该尊重所有那些无私帮助你获得很多知识的老师们。Years of school life have taught me a lot of things,of which what strikes me most is that we should take care not to hurt others with our words,deliberately or by accident(定语从 句).(2013 湖北高考满分作文)多年的校园生活教会了我很多东西,其中使我印象最深的是我们应该尽量不要用言语伤 害别人,无论是故意还是无意。So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never_give up(状语从句),we are bound to achieve success.(2014-山东高考标准范文)只要我们坚持梦想、永不放弃,我们一定会取得成功。I suggest we should communicate with our friends face to face instead of sending text messages(宾语从句)so that we can maintain our friendship(状语从句).(2014-重庆高考满分作 文)我建议我们应该与朋友面对面交流而不是发送信息,以便我们能够保持我们的友谊。In addition,what may interest you most(主语从句)is that I am really nervous and upset(表语从句)when taking the exam.(2014-四川高考满分作文)另外,最使你可能感兴趣的是,考试时我真的紧张、烦躁。As_is_known to_all_(定 语从 句),shoes play a very important role in our life,for they can protect our feet from being hurt(状语从句).(2014湖甫高考标准范文)众所周知,鞋子在我们的生活中起着非常重耍的作用,因为它们能保护我们的脚免受伤 害。第二步|让亮点词汇添彩在高考写作中,要想得高分,必须使用“较多的词汇”,特别是使用高级词汇,这是作 文得高分的必备条件之一。另外,在写作中一定要注意衔接过渡词的使用,做到字顺意畅。微写作4直取高分的亮点遣词I学习要求:背词汇、背佳句一、24个升级版必备词汇写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力,遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、生 动形象。如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上,能够将一些常用词汇进行升华,就将成为 高考作文获得高分的亮点之一。Different individuals have different opinions about safety of food.不同的人对食品安全问题有着不同的看法。名词普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualsresultconsequenceshortcomingdrawback动词havepossessreplacesubstitutebearput up withunderstandmakesense ofdeveloppromoteconsidertake into account形容词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/significantinterestingabsorbing/appealingdifficultchallenging副词finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediatelyin a flashnowadayscurrently连词SOthereforeandas well asI sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into account.(2014-浙江高考满分作文)我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议。In the coming three years,our school life will be challenging.(2014-江西高考标准范文)在随后的三年里,我们的学校生活将会非常具有挑战性。误区警示I高级词汇的使用一定要遵循“准确、恰当”的原则,一定要注意使用的场合,并不一定 难词就是高级词汇,例如:一大早我们买了些圣诞礼物。Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents,(purchased 太过于书面化,改 为bought更地道)二、24个升级版加分词汇掌握了 24个升级版必备词汇,这是跳出平庸作文,吸引阅卷老师眼球的第一步。如果希 望高考作文能够出彩,则需要掌握更多的加分词汇。这些加分词汇就像五颜六色的彩石,不 仅耐用,更能够装点文章,让文章更加文采飞扬,彰显考生深厚的语言功底。1.表达关注的名词:attention,focus,concernCurrently,the problem of corruption crimes has become the focus of the public.当前,腐败犯罪已成为公众关注的焦点。2.表达争论的名词:discussion,debate,argumentFaced with_such_an_ arument,different individuals may come to different opinions.面对这样的一个争论,不同的人可能有不同的观点。3.表达优缺点的名词:advantage,disadvantage,strength,weaknessOn the one hand,online shopping has many advantages.一方面,网购有很多优点。4.表达增长或下降的动词:increase,accumulate,decrease,declineLong hours of surfing the Internet would lead to declining health.长时间上网将导致健康状况下降。5.表达导致后果的动词:result in,lead to,bring about,contribute toComputers have brought about many changes in the workplace.电脑给工作场所带来了很多变化。6.表达支持、反对的动词(短语):approve of,be in favor of,object toThe majority of the senior citizens don t approve of the proposal of celebrating western festivals in China.大多数老年人不赞同在中国庆祝西方节日的提议。7.表达可能性的形容词:likelyIf you come to our school,you are likely to meet some difficult problems in your life.(2014-天滓高考满分作文)如果你来我们学校,你很可能会遇到生活中的一些难题。8.表达强调的副词:particularly,especiallyThe more people earn,the more they seem to want,particularly when others earn more than they do.人们赚的越多,似乎想要的也越多,尤其是当其他人赚的比他们多的时候。微写作5字顺意畅的过渡语|学习要求:完成句子并背诵连接过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间、段与段之 间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接过渡性词语是非常必要的。一、“启”创造良好开端(1)常用表达启的过渡词语:first,firstly,first of all,above all,to begin/start with,today,now,at present,currently,generally speaking,according to,with the development of.等。Firstly,V d like to tell you something about the weather in my city,which is often windyand very cold in winter.(2014-天津高考满分作文)首先,我想给你们介绍一下我所在城市的天气多风而且冬天非常寒冷。With_the_development of the Internet,computers play an important role in people s life.随着因特网的发展,计算机在人们的生活中起着重要作用。(2)常用表达启”的句型:As the proverb says/As the saying goes,As can be seenfrom the table,It goes without saying thatThere is no denying thatIt is well known that As is known to all,.等。As is known to you,our school is unique in English teaching and studying for all the students.(2014-陕西高考满分作文)正如你们都知道的那样,我们学校在英语教学方面非常独特。There_is_no_denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.不可否认,成功的关键在于身心健康。二、“承”顺势承上启下(1)常用表达承的过渡词语:second/secondly,besides,in addition,what s more,furthermore,moreover,what s worse,still less,to make matters worse,worse still,for example,in other words,especially,particularly,obviously,at the same time 等。(Moreover,listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start.(2014-安徽高考满分作文)另外,听一听轻音乐的确能使你心情放松,给你一个新的开端。Second,_go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.(2014-安徽高考标准范文)第二,到户外和朋友一起做做团队运动,因为体育运动是一种有效的排解愤怒的方式。(2)常用表达承的句型:take.for example,.;what is more serious is that.;as far as I am concerned,the reason why.is that.等。What is more serious is that we don t cherish wildlife.更严重的是,我们不珍惜野生动物。As_far_as_I m_concemed,I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy.就我而言,我要把保护环境整洁健康看做是我的职责。三、“转”巧妙转折过渡(1)常用表达转”的过渡词语:but,yet,however,while,otherwise,or(else),on the contrary,on the other hand,in any case,despite,in spite of,regardless of 等。Otherwise we 11 have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.(2014-重庆高考标准范文)否则的话,我们迟早会为我们的自私付出代价。But now because my left foot was injured,I cannot go with you as planned.(2014-d匕京高考标准范文)但现在因为我的左脚受伤了,我不能按计划和你一块去了。On_the_contrary,smart phones not only take up our valuable time,but also do great harmto our health.(2014-重庆高考标准范文)相反,智能手机不仅占去了我们宝贵的时间,而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。(2)常用表达“转”的句型:But for me,I would never.;However,it is a pity that Although Though.表不状况+as/though+主语+谓语等。(Although cleaning street is no more than an ordinary job,it contributes to the society.(2013-广东高考满分作文)尽管清扫大街只是一个非常普通的工作,但对社会做出了贡献。However,勺邑&pityhat no further measure has been taken to prevent air pollution.然而,很遗憾没有进一步采取措施防止大气污染。四、“合”完美结束全文(1)常用表达合”的过渡词语:in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a/one word,to sum up,all in all,on the whole,in general 等。/a word,if we had such a magic watch,our life would become more convenient.。14 湖 南高考满分作文)总之,如果我们能有这么一块有魔力的手表,我们的生活将会更加方便。All in all,traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.总的来说,旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新的挑战的最好的选择。(2)常用表达合”的句型:We can,therefore,come to the conclusion thatIt s safe to conclude thatIt can easily be safely concluded from.that.;We,therefore,can make it clearfrom the above discussion that.;Only with combined efforts can we It is(high)time that.等。So it s safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication.(2014-江苏高考满分作文)因此,可以得出的结论是:把一些有助于日常交际的英语包括在内是合情合理的。It_is_high_time_that we did something to prevent the environment from being polluted.确实到了我们采取措施阻止环境被污染的时候了。第三步I用高级句式增分在高考评分标准中明确指出考生应运用“较多的语法结构”,“较多的语法结构”就是 指句式结构的多样性。毋庸置疑,单调的句式和结构、长度相近的句子会使文章呆板,缺乏 生气和活力,而灵活多变的句式则使行文丰富多彩,生动、自然、流畅。therebe句型、it句 型、复合句、强调句、倒装句、虚拟语气等结构的准确使用,可以使文章的语言充满层次感,可让同学们的写作提升一个档次。微写作6常用不衰的therebe句型I学习要求:完成句子并背诵therebe句型表示存在某物,句中的there起引导的作用,句子的真正主语是谓语动词be 后面的名词,因此be的单复数由其后的名词决定。therebe句型有很多变式,恰当地运用there be句型及其变式对提升写作大有帮助。1.There be.(be可用各种时态)There are some pieces of information that I d like to share with you.(2014-四川高考满分 作文)有几条信息我想与你分享。This shows how much we depend on water to live,but there s a lot we can do to lower the number.(2013-安徽高考阅读B)这说明了我们的生存对水的依赖程度,但是要减少这个数目,我们能做的有很多。2.There+情态动词+be.There are too many cars on the road.I think there should be tight restrictions on car numbers.路上的车太多了,我想应该对车的数量进行严格的限制。3.There stands/,ies/exists/remains/comes/goes.There remains some doubt among the public as to whether the policy will work.公众依旧担心这项政策是否有效。4.There seems/appears/happens/used to be.Thee happened.to_ be a lot of people by the road.They helped us pull the car out of the big hole.路边恰好有很多人,他们帮助我们把车从那个大坑里拉了出来。5.There be sb./sth.doing sth.(doing sth.为现在分词作后置定语)There are many fans waiting to see the famous singer outside the airport.机场外有很多粉丝正等着见那位著名的歌手。6.There be sth.to do/to be doneThere is st
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