单元主题写作五3省公开课一等奖新名师优质课比赛一等奖课件.pptx

单元主题写作Unit 5 Look into Science第1页话题分析分析 本本单元元话题为“谈论科科学学”。经过本本单元元学学习，学学生要能生要能够用英用英语表示出科技表示出科技对人人们日常生活日常生活产生影生影响响。写写作此作此话题时多采取普通多采取普通现在在时态。单元主题写作第2页经典例典例题 南充改编南充改编 对于对于“中学生在校是否能够使用手机中学生在校是否能够使用手机”，不一样学生有不一样看法，请你依据下面表格中，不一样学生有不一样看法，请你依据下面表格中提醒写一篇短文，向某英语报社投稿。提醒写一篇短文，向某英语报社投稿。单元主题写作观点观点赞成赞成反对反对理由理由1.便于联络2.获取信息1.浪费时间浪费时间2.危害身心健康危害身心健康你观点及理由要求：要求：1.包含全部关键点，不逐字翻译，围绕关键点适当发挥；包含全部关键点，不逐字翻译，围绕关键点适当发挥；2文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等；文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等；3100词左右。词左右。第3页 思思绪点点拨 单元主题写作开开篇点篇点题Different students have different opinions about it.详细描描写写Some students think However,some表示看法表示看法In my opinion,students cant use第4页素材素材积累累 惯用短用短语1花花费时间做某事做某事_2对有益有益/坏坏处_3远离离_4依靠；依依靠；依赖_5与与联络_spend time doing sth单元主题写作be good/bad forstay away fromdepend onkeep in touch with第5页惯用句子用句子1Its convenient for us to keep in touch with others.2It can also cause many problems.3It also has bad effects on us students.单元主题写作第6页高分模板高分模板 Nowadays,more and more teenagers use mobile phones.Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?Different students have different opinions about it.Some students think they can use mobile phones at school.First,its convenient for them to call their parents,teachers or friends.Second,they can search what they need on mobile phones.For example,they can look up new words and look through news.单元主题写作 However,some students disagree.They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time.Many students spend too much time on games and QQ.Besides,its unhealthy for the mind and the body,such as hurting eyes,making some bad friends.In my opinion,students cant use mobile phones at school.Its bad for their health and study.第7页名名师点点评开开篇点篇点题。more and more使用表使用表达达出使用手机人出使用手机人数数之多。之多。first,second恰恰当当利用使文章利用使文章层次分明。次分明。转折折词however利用巧妙，自然利用巧妙，自然过渡到使用手机弊端上。渡到使用手机弊端上。In my opinion使用引出了自己使用引出了自己观点，点，结构构完整。完整。单元主题写作第8页小小试身手身手 2016天水 随着手机使用日益广泛，“作业帮”等手机运用软件出现，现在，手机又有了新用途随时查找作业答案。部分学生认为：有时作业太多，太难，不得不向手机求助。自己观点：1.抄写答案不能提高学生学习能力，只能阻止学生思索；2.恰当运用网络，不依赖网络。单元主题写作第9页注意：注意：1.文中文中应包含提醒包含提醒观点，能点，能够适适当当发挥，增加自己看法，增加自己看法，使使内内容更容更连贯，更合理；，更合理；2.80词左右。左右。开开头已已给出，不出，不计入入总词数数。参参考考词汇：the students abilities,make proper use of Some students now have a new use for the Internetuse mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework.But different people have different ideas about it._单元主题写作第10页单元主题写作One possible version：Some students now have a new use for the Internetuse mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework.But different people have different ideas about it.Some students think that they have so much homework every day that they dont have enough time.And some of the problems are too hard for them to work out.So they have to use mobile phones to find out the answers.However,I think copying the answers cant improve the students abilities,and may make them stop thinking.In my opinion,we can make proper use of the Internet and cant depend on it.Studying online can be a way to help study,but the best way is to study by ourselves.第11页