2020-2021年英语│英语中考英语书面表达(有难度)1.pdf

2020-2021年英语|英语中考英语书面表达（有难度）1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1.书面表达难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行告别初中生活”的主题班会。假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。要点如下：1.时间：6月26日下午3:00.2.地点:六楼会议室3.活动内容：1）对老师用话语表达谢意；2）与同学交流自己的将来的梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言 等等。参考词汇：look back at,say goodbye t。,express thanks to,talk about,take photos.备注：词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end.【答案】Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end.In the past three years,we have studied and stayed together.Looking back at the days we spend together,how sweet we feel.In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever,we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week.The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life.It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.We are going to have some meaningful activities.To express thanks to our teachers,we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation.We can even talk about the dreams of our future.Then,we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.In the end,we may give our wishes to each other.Dont be late!Thats all.Thank you!【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to,look back at,be going to,have a class meeting,say goodbye to,talk about,the dreams of,take some photos,in the end,each other,be late 等。而复杂单句结构 In order t。keep the happy times in our hearts forever,we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./To express thanks to our teachers,we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和 Then,we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是木文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及 短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。2.你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你 的看法。内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出 几点建议。作文要求：L短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和 地名。3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Once,I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy._【答案】Once,I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this.Last weekend,my good friend,Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.It was interesting.So I spent more time on it.I forgot to do my homework in the end.My teachers and parents were angry with me.I was also upset.How to make good use of our time?I think we should make a weekday plan.We should write what we are going to do on the paper,mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily.It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of,last weekend,how to do,play a game,a kind of,spent more time on,forget to do,in the end,be angry with,be going to do,on the paper,put up 等。而特殊非谓语动词结构 Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game和 I think we should make a weekday plan./We should write what we are going to do on the paper,mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily./It can help us to remember what we have to d。next.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习 中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。3.书面表达假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信 询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果：1.节水节电.2.垃圾分类3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕4.步行、骑自行车或公交出行、参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle.Here issomething about it.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle.Here is something about it.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life.First,we?d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet.Saving water also matters much.Besides,we should sort out the rubbish,hoping that we might recycle some,which will surely benefit us a great deal.In addition,we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down.More importantly,when we go out,walking,riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice,which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨 论情况。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问 题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Wecand。，wed better.,we suggest.,which contributes to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注 意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头我要介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来介绍 我们为低碳生活可以做的事。此处 ask about,turn off,sort out,in addition,instead of,contribute to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4.随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括：1.你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？2.它们的优点和缺点是什么？3.你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？要求：1.不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2.语意连贯，词数80 左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。As time goes by,there are many different kinds of communication methods now.As for me,答案As time goes by,there are many different kinds of communication methods now.As for me,I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone,but sometimes I chat by communication software,such as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people,but people can only hear the sound by phones.By using net software,we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet.However,sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion,we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问 题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are.,I prefer to.,Mobile phones bring.,we can.,we should.,So lets.等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻 辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的 优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么：最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代 通讯工具。止匕处 prefer to do sth,by phones,on the Internet,concern about,in one/s opinion,try one，s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。5.写作假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。请你根据 博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。Im the mother of a fourteen-year-old.I have a rule for my daughter:be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another.She has been doing very well in school,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her.Am I wrong?写作要点：1.表明自己的看法。2.陈述自己的理由。3.提出至少2条建议。【答案】HiJigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future universityadmission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.There aremany examples around us.Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected.The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore,punish merit is by no means a wise choice to help them grow upmentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends advice.More importantlyjet her live like a lovely girj let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一 般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾 结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My idea is that,There are.,Some all-A students in school have.,The reason is,So I suggest that 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介 绍 自 己的建议。止匕处 turn out,by no means,help sb do sth,grow up,let sb do sth,make mistakes,of ones own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。6.inspire一词的汉语解释是激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考等。请以The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少十80词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。要点：1.What kind of person is he/she?2.How did he/she inspire you?要求：1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。2.语言流畅，字迹清楚。【答案】The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions.They helped me,encouraged me and inspired me.But the person who inspired me most,I think,is my friend Wang Peng.Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.He doesnt talk too much,but always keeps a smile on his face.He is warm-hearted and ready to help others.If I need any help for my math exercises,he is always the one that can help me out.As a good student,he studies very hard.In the early morning,you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively.Few students can arrive at school as early as he is.He also does well in many sports,such as badminton and ping-pang.He got the first prize in last years ping-pang competition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body.He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。题目 中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励 过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。学生们可以这两个问题 为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般现在时和一般 过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注 意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻 译。应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复 合句。为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成 分使文意连贯、自然。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。短文有 以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是 谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。各部分内容安排 合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主 来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数 形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语 的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most,I think,is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesnt talk too much,but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises,he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports,such as badminton and ping-pang.He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is等等。7.书面表达初中毕业在即，回顾三年的学习生活，你一定有成功的体验,如一次考试,一次比赛,一次表演请你以Believe Myself,and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。提示：(1)What was the event?(2)How did you make it?(3)Whats your feeling?要求：(1)发言稿中须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。(2)发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Believe Myself,and I Will WinHello,everyone!_Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself,and I will winHello,everyone!As an old saying goes,where there is a will,there is a way.There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade,I always had difficulty in learning English.I just couldnt understand it.I even wanted to give it up.Then my parents told me that where there is a will,there is a way.They also told me that I should be confident.My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.I had the confidence again.I found when I put my heart into it,English didnt seem that difficult.I made great progress.My parents and teachers were happy for me.I felt pleased and proud for myself,too.To be confident means I should believe myself.Believe myself,there are hopes in my life.In the future,I wont be afraid of the difficulties in my life and Im sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!Believe myself,a beautiful future is waiting for me.Thank you for your listening.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题的形 式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的 事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。写 作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的 英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作 时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需 要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不 能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行 表达。句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词 以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合 理，层次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。其次短文使 用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简 单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句 型，如 When I was in the seventh grade,I always had difficulty in learning English、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it、I found when I put my heart into it,English didnt seem that difficult In the future,I wont be afraid of the difficulties in my life and Im sure that nothing can beat me and I will win等等。8.Life is just like a mirror,you smile at it,and it smiles at you,t。.请你以Learn to Smile”为 题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。学会对自己微笑1面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别 人误解等）。2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。3、有益于身心健康。学会对他人微笑1、便于与他人之间的交流。2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。微笑是一种语言人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。1、参考词汇：对某人微笑smile at sb.误解misunderstand2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife,the first sentence of it is“Just a smile andthe rain is gone/7 Do you like smiling?I think you should learn to smile.【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife,the first sentence of it is“Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling?I think you should learn to smile.First,learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life.If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends,don/t be sad.Just smile at yourself.Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence.Sometimes the one who beats you is not others,but yourself.And smile can also keep you healthy.Second,learn to smile at others.It will make you communicate better with people.Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.In a word,smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone.It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people.Living with a smile,every day will be shiny.【解析】这是一篇表格式的作文，要点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要 点，然后加以整合，也可以适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。写作时 要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼 写，语法等问题，用好简单句，适当用复杂句。可以用一些高级词汇。还要注意句子的关 联。9.书面表达假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按 照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。内容如下：1.由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2.人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3.你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2.语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3.词数80左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter,and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health.Now Id like to tell you something about the haze.Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter,and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health.Now Id like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year.It was bad for our daily life.More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze.A great number of people have to stay at home.People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now.The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport,such as the bus and the subway.As for me,I will go to school by bike or on foot.In addition,I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.Would you like to tell me some good ideas?Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题 目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年 家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在 日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情 况不一，时态不能统