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1 认真审题，看好提示（人称、时态、文体）2 内容要点:deliver letters clouds rain heavily take off put-on-give a letter to a little girl ride away to deliver letters shout ran up to give me her raincoat3 扩展要点成句子：4 组句谋篇成文 1deliver letters cloudyrain heavily take off put-on-give a letter to a girlride away to deliver letters shoutran up to-give me her raincoatI delivered letters.It was cloudy in the sky.I was on my way to deliver letters when I noticed dark clouds gathering in the sky.It rained heavily.I took off my coat.I put it on the letters.It rained heavily.I took off my coat and covered the letters with it.I handed a letter to a little girl I hurriedly continued to deliver letters.I heard the girl shouting behind,“Wait a minute,Uncle!”The girl ran up to me and gave me her raincoat.2I was on my way to deliver letters when I noticed dark clouds gathering in the sky.It rained heavily.I took off my coat and covered the letters with it.I handed a letter to a little girl I hurriedly continued to deliver letters.I heard the girl shouting behind,“Wait a minute,Uncle!”The girl ran up to me and gave me her raincoat.This morning,Before long,Without hesitation,When,I was wet though.Without saying anything,Suddenly To my surpriseLooking at the raincoat,I felt warm at heart.3Saturday,April 17 Rainy I had an unforgettable experience today.This morning,I was on my way to deliver letters _ I noticed dark clouds _ in the sky._,I took off my jacket and covered the letters with it._,it started to rain.When I came to a new address and handed a letter to a little girl _ a raincoat,I was wet through._ saying anything,I hurriedly continued my journey._ I heard the girl shouting behind,“Wait a minute,Uncle!”I stopped and turned round._,the girl ran up and handed me her own raincoat,_,“Take this to keep off the rain.”Looking at the raincoat,I felt warm at heart.whengatheringImmediately Before longinWithout Suddenly To my surprisesaying4One day,we were having an English class when suddenlythere was a knock on the door.Our teacher went out and soon returned with a smile on her face.She told us that agroup of American students were visiting our school andThey would like to chat with us in English.We were very glad to have this opportunity to practise our English.Soon Pleasant conversations began.5At first he didnt hear anything at all.But then a sudden knock on the door woke him up.Following that came a mans voice,saying,“Come out,or I will break in.”Several minutes later,he heard someone leave.Finally he got up,opened the door and looked around.At firstEarly in the morningThis morningOn day The other daySoonAfter a whileBefore longSeveral minutes later,ThenAfter some time,6FinallyIn the endAt lastAndButhoweverImmediatelyAt oncebe doing-when-be about to do-when-suddenlysee/notice sb doing-hear sb doing-71 今天早晨，我正要去送信，突然乌云密布，不一会，下起了大雨。2 我们正在上英语课，突然有人敲门。3 我正要出门，突然电话铃响了。Homework:写事背一背写事背一背写事写一写写事写一写 38-98大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流可以互相讨论下，但要小声点可以互相讨论下，但要小声点可以互相讨论下，但要小声点可以互相讨论下，但要小声点9How to express ones thanks:The mother was so thankful that she did not say anything.He gave/expressed his hearty thanks to us and left.He thanked her.10How to end the passage:Looking at the raincoat,I felt warm at heart.Though it took us some time to help him,we were happy anyway.I felt very happy today because Ive done a good deed.With a smile I answered“I am a League member.”I was so sorry that I couldnt play the match.But I was luckyAnd also happy that I had so many friends to help me whenI was in trouble.Now,I understand what labour means.I think it is really a successful experience.11Today,I went to*park with my parents.We got up very early and went there on foot.Early in the morning,I went to Xiangshan Park for sightseeing with my parents.The park is very beautiful.There were a lot of trees and Flowers.In the park,we took plenty of photos.While walking around the park,we couldnt help admiring the beauty of the nature.Of course we took a lot of pictures.38-912But we saw some bad behaviour.For example,some peoplelittered,some people got on the tree and some people hada picnic and ran on the lawn.However,I was quite disappointed to find some bad behaviour.Some people littered anywhere as they liked.Some even climbed up the trees and picked flowers.Although there were some signs warning people not to touch the lawn,still some people enjoyed themselves there.13We should keep our earth beautiful.I hope that such bad behaviour will soon be get rid of and everybody will protect the environment.14Early in the morning,I went to Xiangshan Park for sightseeing with my parents.While walking around the park,we couldnt help admiring the beauty of the nature.Of course we took a lot of pictures.However,I was quite disappointed to find some bad behaviour.Some people littered anywhere as they liked.Some even climbed up the trees and picked flowers.Although there were some signs warning people not to touch the lawn,still some people enjoyed themselves there.I hope that such bad behaviour will soon be get rid of and everybody will protect the environment.15 Yesterday I went to the Friendship Store.I saw a foreigner buying clothes.He spoke English.The shop assistant couldnt understand him.I translated for them.They said thanks to me.I think the shop assistant should know foreign language.I was doing some shopping when I happened to see that a foreigner was trying to buy some clothes.He tried what he could to make himself understood.But at allSeeing thisI went up to them andwhat the foreign guest said into Chinese or how they could work in such a big store without knowing any foreign language.16I like English.I listen to English broadcast.I read English materials.I practise my spoken English.I won the English competition this year and published articles.I will work harder.I am very interested in EnglishIn my spare time,I keep on listening toBesides fiveevery dayAnd often first place atin our schoolI often have my articles published in the English column of the school paper.to improve my English17至少一处用分词181.7:15,February 8,20002.before the gate of the park on Park Road3.walk along Park Road towards the east4.drive up Third Street,make a right turn into Park Road,hit the man5.not stop,drive off,head west along the road6.yellow,AC864,woman It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8,2000.Walking along Park Road towards the east,I saw an old man come out of the park on the other side of the street.Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road.The next moment,the car hit the man while he was crossing the road.He fell with a cry.The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west.I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.About two minutes later,I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.(97)191.His mother lives far away.He hardly ever sees her.His mother lives so far away that he hardly ever sees her.2.She was very excited.She could hardly say a word.She was so excited that she could hardly say a word.3.It is very cold outside.The pond has frozen.It is so cold outside that the pond has frozen.201.It was cold.There was nobody on the street.It was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street.2.It gave her a shock.Her face turned white.It gave her such a shock that her face turned white.3.They had a fierce dog.No one dare to go near their house.They had such a fierce dog that no one dare to go near their house.21 你是中学生王毅，假期去了北京姑姑家。10月3日你给在兰州的母亲写了一封信，讲述你在北京的见闻。1、昨天和姑姑一起去少年宫听钢琴音乐会。中心大厅宏伟壮观，令你惊叹不已。2、音乐会开始后，你仿佛置身于奇妙的世界之中。3、最使你惊叹的是这些动听的乐曲竟是6岁至12岁儿童演奏的。4、你对北京的生活十分满意，并准备明天去游览长城。5、你姑姑家的地址：北京西单163号。用 sothat 和 suchthat22163 XidanBeijingOctober 3Dear Mum,Ive been in Aunties home for three days.Perhaps youdont know how happy I am in Beijing these days.Yesterday Auntie took me to a piano concert in the Central Hall of the Childrens Palace.It was such a great and wonderful hall that I couldnt help wondering at the beautiful lights and nice pictures.When the concert began,I felt as if I were in a wonderful world.What surprised me most was to find that all the pieces were played by the children from six to twelve.The music sounded so sweet that I couldnt believe myown ears.Tomorrow well go to visit the Great Wall.And Ill tell you more about the interesting things here.Wang Yi23so besides while unless althoughwhat is worse what is more as a result however as well as instead as if all of a sudden not until so that as soon as not only but also neither norwhether or not after all first of allabove all first then next finally on the other hand as long as the moment suddenly immediately because if so2425 Our earth _ a beautiful place.Thick trees and green grass _ the hills and it was the best home for birds and animals._ time went on,people destroyed the forest to grow crops._,people let their cattle eat up the grass._ you can see a stretch of wasteland _ green hills now._,when it rains,the _ is washed down the hills,strong _ blow away the rich soil that lies on top of the fields.We _ hope all the people will take good care of our forests and plant more trees _ our environment in which we are living.used to becoveredAs What was worseSo instead ofAs a resultsoilwindsdoto improve(114)26