江苏高考英语作文summary-技巧.doc

江苏高考英语作文summary-技巧 Summary writing Learning objectives : 1 . To have a better understanding of the elements of a summary; 2.To learn and be able to write a satisfactory summary. Summary writing ( 约 约30 个词概括) 概要: 约30 词，少于25 或多于40 词均扣2 分 抄袭原文材料 为无效要点 ；改变句式表达方式，并有适当发挥，不认定为抄袭。 读写作文写好 summary 的意义 第一段是 定调子 ，阅卷老师往往读 完第一段就已经打出基本分了。 - 高考阅卷老师 相对于写作的其他要求来说，这一 部分较难写，这一部分先读后概括， 而其他部分都是有中文提纲的。 - 往届实验班考生 What is a Summary? A summary is a short account giving the main points of something longer or detailed. 以约30 个词概括主要内容 A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice, and he spent most of his days complaining about it. It is true that you cannot sing, said the fox, but look how beautiful you are! Oh, but what good is all this beauty, cried the bird, with such an unpleasant voice! Listen, said the fox, each one owns something good. You have such beauty. The nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why cant you just be happy about what you have already got? 人称时态 The story is about a peacock with beautiful feathers. The peacock always feels unhappy because of his unpleasant voice. The fox comforts him, adding that you should treasure what you have already got. feels comforts you you 过多细节 In the article above, a peacock was always complaining about not having a sweet voice until the fox pointed out that he possessed a beautiful appearance. And the bird agreed with it. Finally, the fox argued that he should value what he had instead of complaining about what he didnt possess. 53 words 直接引语 A peacock was unhappy with his ugly voice. However, the fox reminded him, No one is perfect, each one should be happy about what you have got. - - - - 过早表达观点 Each of us has strengths and weaknesses, such as a peacock. A peacock was upset about his voice, but ignored his own beauty. A fox told him that he should be content with what he had already got . - - A peacock complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with. dos and donts 1 、注意人称时态 正确； ； 2 、不写过多 细节: 实行精兵裁员 3 、不用 直接引语； ； 4 、不能 过早 表达 观点； ； 5 、不可完全 照抄 原文； 6 、不可加入 自己 的观点； 7. 思路清晰， 巧用关联词 增强文章的 连贯性。 Styles of passage Narration（ 记叙文） 1 Argumentation( 说明文) 2 Exposition( 议论文) 3 图文并茂的材料 4 图文并茂的材料 4 2015高考作文 图文并茂的材料 4 1. 记叙文 写作方法：串联要素法 六个要素： who; when; where; what; how; why 某人做了某事, 结果如何？ The passage mainly talks about. This story is about a peacock who complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with. l（ （1 ）对象、性质功用、利好 l（ （2 ）问题、解决方法 l（ （3 ）现象、原因、结果 2 2 、说明文及新闻报道 The topic-what Koalas are unhappy and complaining The reasons- why Tourists taking photos The effects-how Being repeatedly awaken The solutions Government ban the practice The conclusion Be more kind to animals koalas in wildlife parks that are repeatedly awaken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals. Koalas in wildlife parks cant fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The government is considering making the tourists behavior illegal to protect the animals. Practice Passage A (2014 年江苏高考作文) 板块 （次）重点 1. 概要 （第一段- 约30 词，少于25 或多于40 词均扣2 分） 1 1 ）英语词汇被收录于汉语词典 2 2 ）不同的人观点不一 2. 发表自己的观点（第二段- 观点鲜明，不能骑墙） 1 ）自己的观点（赞成或反对均可）2 ）理由2-3 点（注：若写4 点则从总分中扣2 分） 3. 结论（第三段） 结尾句（无此项扣1 分） Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese has included 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not. With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups:For and Against 三要素： 论点、论据、论证。 文章结构： 总分结构、分总结构、 平行结构。 3 3 、议论文 Getting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it. 1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea): Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance 2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences) a better memory a healthier body a better preparation for the day 3. Conclusion/suggestions. a good habit / benefit a lot Getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day. l Teamwork is about people working together as a team. The idea has spread from the world of sports to business. In the 21st century, as people and their work are becoming more technically advanced, working as a team makes it easier to get things done. l Some things cannot be done by people working individually. More complex goals usually require that people work together. Anyone who has ever been to a job interview will almost certainly have been asked what teamwork means to them. This is because companies want people who are team players, who can get along with their colleagues and work together in a group. Because teamwork is required by many organizations today, they will often organize team building events in an attempt to get people to work as a team than as individuals. Teamwork required by There are seven important skills that one must learn in order to be a successful team player. They are as follows: Listening-listen and allow people to freely express their ideas. Questioning-ask questions and discuss the objectives of the team. Persuading-encourage people to exchange, defend ,and rethink their ideas. Respecting-treat others with respect and to support their ideas. Helping-help ones partners, this is the general theme of teamwork. Sharing-share ideas and resources with the team to create an environment of teamwork. Participating-all members of the team are encouraged to participate in the team. skills The passage states the importance of teamwork in business and that, in a more competitive world, people must co-operate in order to achieve their goals. Besides, seven teamwork skills are also described. Q1 ：图文并茂的读写归纳要涉及图吗？ l 审题 l 看图画或图表的作用 l 漫画通常可忽略 l 图表看作用，有时不可忽略 2015高考作文 Think ：2015 高考的这幅图在文字中体现了吗？ Tip1 l 多个并列语段只要找出其共性 主题， 为 为 某一段落 服务的插图 可不涉及。 。 Model 1: Topic + support The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten peoples lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.(2015高 高考范文） 观察一下图文的关系 苏州2016 2015 高考作文的翻版 Cultural differences do exist in every corner of the world ，where the same behavior often carries totally different meanings when we socialize with people. The three experiences of the author are typical examples. 苏州2016 l The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius （孔子）, Beijing opera and Kung fu. l It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University. l The survey collected 2,047 questionaires from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart. 读写读写先读后写 lThe panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius （孔子）, Beijing opera and Kung fu. l It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University. lThe survey collected 2,047 questionaires from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart. Think：以上的三段文字和图之间是什么关系？ l 图表中的内容在文章中体现了吗？要写吗？ Model 2 point 1 +however + point 2 The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016. Q2 summary 如何踩点 l 抓住主题句中心词 l 理清逻辑关系 l 不遗漏信息, , 但决不罗嗦 l 有概括性思考，但决不画蛇添足 简约而不简单 simplicity but not simple The examiner will assess the ability of the candidate to use a variety of tenses correctly, a range of vocabulary and spell words accurately and use vocabulary and grammar to express points. He/she will also check to see whether you have a suitable layout and logic ordering of points. Using correct connectives to link points will aid coherence and cohesion( 连贯与衔接 接). So spare no effort to polish up your English. Assignment ： Polish up the summary writing . Model 2 point 1 +however + point 2 l A survey conducted recently shows that the panda is what can represent Chinese culture in foreigners eyes( 第一段） . Yet foreigners in general lack a good understanding of Chinese culture （图表的信息提取）. . （2016苏州范文）