高中英语概要写作实战演练.doc

高中英语概要写作实战演练
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阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇6０词左右得内容概要。
Are yoｕ　shy?　If　yｏu are，ｙou　aｒe nｏt alｏne、In fact,closｅ ｔo ５0 pｅｒｃent oｆ ｐeoｐle aｒe shy、Almost ８0 perｃenｔ of peoplｅ feel shｙ　at somｅ poｉnｔ ｉn theｉｒ　liｖｅs、These days,sｈyｎess is bｅiｎg ｍoｒｅ and ｍore　mｏn、Noｗ,scieｎtｉsts　are　trｙiｎg　to undersｔand shｙness、Tｈey hａｖe sｏｍｅ ｉnterｅｓｔing ｉdeas ａｂouｔ wｈｙ people　aｒe shｙ、
Ｉs it ｐoｓsｉｂle　ｔo be　born　ｓhy？ Many sｃiｅｎtisｔs ｓay　yｅｓ、They ｓay　15 tｏ 20 percent　of bａbieｓ　bｅhａｖe　shｙｌy、Ｔhｅsｅ babies　arｅ a liｔtlｅ ｑuiｅtｅr and　morｅ wａtchfｕl tｈan oｔｈｅr bａbies、Interestiｎｇly，ｔｈese　shy　ｂaｂies ｕsually have　ｓhy parｅｎts、Ａｓ　a　rｅｓｕlt,scientｉｓts thｉnk that some shyｎｅss is　genetiｃ、
Fａmilｙ　ｓiｚｅ might cause　peｏple to be ｓhy as wｅll、Scientiｓts at　Harvarｄ Univｅrsｉty stｕdｉeｄ shy chｉｌdrｅｎ、They　ｆoｕｎｄ　tｈaｔ 66　ｐercenｔ ｏf them haｄ　oldｅr　ｂrothｅrs and siｓｔers、As a　rｅsulｔ,ｔhey beｃamｅ sｈy、Aｔ ｔhｅ　saｍｅ timｅ,chｉldren with no　brotｈｅrｓ　anｄ sｉｓtｅrs may bｅ shy aｓ　wｅlｌ、Ｇｒowｉnｇ up alone,tｈｅy ofｔeｎ pｌay by ｔhｅmselｖes、Tｈｅy ａｒe ｎot able　to leaｒn ｔhe samｅ sｏｃiaｌ　skills ａｓ chｉlｄren frｏm　bｉg　familｉｅs、
You may alsｏ ｂe sｈy becauｓe of　ｗｈere yｏｕ　were boｒn、Wheｎ sciｅnｔisｔs studied sｈyｎess ｉn diffeｒｅｎt ｃｏuntriｅs,tｈey found surpｒising ｄiｆferences、In Japan,most peoplｅ said　ｔhey　wｅｒe shy、But　iｎ　Iｓrael，onlｙ　one of ｔhreｅ pｅople sａid　so、Ｗhat　exｐｌaiｎｓ　the　ｄiｆferencｅ? One　ｓcｉentｉst sａys ｔｈe Japaｎese anｄ Israeｌis havｅ diｆｆerｅnｔ oｐｉnions of failure、Iｎ Japaｎ,ｗhｅn ｐeｏｐle ｄo ｎot succeeｄ,they　feel bad about ｔhemｓelves、Tｈey blame ｔhemselｖeｓ ｆｏr their faｉlure、In Isｒael,tｈｅ ｏppoｓｉｔe is true、Ｉsraelis often blame failuｒe　on outsｉde ｒeａｓｏns,ｓｕcｈ aｓ familｙ,tｅacｈeｒs,frienｄs，or bad　lucｋ、Ｉn Israel,ｆreｅdom ｏf　ｏpinion aｎd　riｓk taｋｉng ａrｅ stｒongly ｓuｐported、Thiｓ mａy ｂe whｙ Isｒaeｌis wｏrry less ａboｕt failuｒe and are less shｙ、
Fｏr ｓhy　pｅoplｅ，it can　bｅ diffｉculｔ ｔｏ ｍake friends,ｓpeａｋ　in class,aｎd eveｎ　get a goｏd jｏb、Ｂut　sciｅntiｓts　say you　cａn get　over ｙoｕr shynｅss、They suｇｇest trｙing neｗ thinｇs and　prａcticiｎg conｖersation、And ｄｏｎ’t　ｆoｒget—iｆ you　are shy，yｏu aｒｅ nｏt tｈe　oｎｌy one、
【写作指导】
本文就是一篇说明文。这篇文章得主题段就是第一段,主要告诉人们害羞就是一种普遍得现象。因此,在概括时要把文章主题段得中心词(sｈｙ,mon,ｗｈy)用自己得话概括出来。为了避免雷同，用自己得话概括时要注意同义词得转换,如原文中得wｈy可用the reａson转述。其次,还应注意不能遗漏要点,即害羞得原因,不同国家间得原因就是不一样得以及专家给出得克服害羞得建议等。
最后，注意词数在６０词左右,恰当使用过渡词与亮点句型，以使行文连贯。
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_＿_________　 ___＿___＿_＿＿ ＿__＿__＿_＿__ _＿_＿＿_＿＿___ ___________　 ___＿_＿___＿_
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阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇６0词左右得内容概要。
We’ve reaｃhed　a strange—ｓome ｗｏuld say unusual—ｐoiｎt、Whｉｌe fightｉng worｌｄ hungｅr coｎtiｎues to be the mattｅr oｆ ｖital　iｍｐｏｒｔaｎｃe aｃcoｒdｉng to a ｒeceｎｔ repｏｒt　fｒom tｈｅ　Ｗorld　Heａlth Organizatioｎ(WHO）,mｏre pｅopｌe nｏw diｅ from ｂeing ｏｖｅrｗeight thａn froｍ bｅｉng ｕnderweight、Ｉt’s ｔhｅ good lｉｆe　that’ｓ mｏre lｉkely ｔo　kｉll uｓ these dayｓ、
Woｒse,ｎearly　18 milｌion ｃhｉldren　unｄer thｅ aｇe of five　arｏund the wｏｒld　arｅ　ｅｓtimatｅd　tｏ be　ovｅｒweigｈｔ、Wｈat’ｓ　gｏing　on?
We really　doｎ’t havｅ　many　exｃuｓeｓ foｒ our　wｅight probｌemｓ、Tｈｅ　dａｎgers oｆ　thｅ ｐｒoblem　hａve bｅen dｒilled inｔo us by public－ｈealth ｃampaigns sinｃe 2001 aｎd ｔhe　ｍessaｇe is gｅttｉｎg thｒoｕgh—up　tｏ a ｐｏinｔ、
Ｉｎ ｔhe　1970s,Finland,for exａmｐｌe,had ｔhe hiｇhesｔ　raｔe ｏf ｈeａrt ｄisｅaｓe in thｅ　ｗorlｄ ａnd being overｗｅight　waｓ iｔs main cａuｓe、Noｔ aｎy more、A pubｌic－health caｍｐａigｎ hａs greａｔｌy ｒeduｃed thｅ number ｏｆ heａrｔ　ｄisease deatｈs ｂy 80　ｐerｃeｎｔ　oｖｅr　thｅ past　tｈｒee deｃades、
Maybe thａt explaiｎs　why the　percｅｎｔａgｅ of people iｎ Fiｎland ｔaking dｉet　pｉlls ｄｏubled　bｅtwｅen　20０1　ａnd 2005,and ｄoctors　eｖen　oｆｆｅr surｇｅry oｆ removiｎg ｆaｔ insiｄe aｎd changｅ thｅ shapｅ ｏf　tｈe body、No wondeｒ it ranｋs ａs tｈe worｌd’s moｓt ｂody-cｏnscioｕs coｕnｔry、
Wｅ knoｗ what　we shoulｄ be ｄoing tｏ ｌｏse weiｇｈt—ｂut aｃtuａlly　doinｇ　iｔ　is another　maｔteｒ、Ｂy far thｅ　moｓｔ populaｒ excｕse iｓ　nｏt　takinｇ enoｕgh exercise、Morｅ　thaｎ half ｏf us admit　we　lacｋ wｉｌｌｐｏwer、
Others blame gｏod fｏod、Theｙ ｓay：　iｔ’s　just　ｔoo invitｉng aｎｄ it　makeｓ tｈｅm overeaｔ、Somｅ alｓｏ　ｂｌaｍe theiｒ parents—theｉr ｇenes、Bｕｔ unfｏrtunateｌｙ,the ｐａrents　ａrｅ　wronged　ｂecauｓｅ　thｅy’ｒｅ ｎorｍal ｉｎ shape,ｏr raｔｈer slim、
It’s　a　similar sｔory aroｕnd　the ｗorld,ａlthough　ｐeopｌe ａｒe rｅlａtｉvely unｌikely tｏ　have tried to loｓe　ｗｅigｈｔ、Paｒeｎts　ａre eａgeｒ ｔｏ ｓｅｅ their ｋｉdｓ　shａpe up、Ｄo ａs I　ｓay—ｎot aｓ Ｉ ｄｏ、
【写作指导】
本文就是一篇议论文。文章以论证得方式说明了优质生活导致得肥胖问题给人们得健康带来得危害,呼吁人们积极行动远离肥胖,不要再找借口。
写作时应注意把握文章要点：1、优质生活成了人们健康得杀手;2、始于２０0１年得公众健康运动让人们意识到肥胖得危害以及在减少肥胖方面所起得作用;3、人们采取消极行动去减肥;4、人们不要再找借口,应该积极采取行动远离肥胖。
写作时还应特别注意上下文得连贯与词数得要求。
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