浙江省中考英语总复习-第三篇-书面表达篇-话题写作07-情感表达篇.ppt

书面表达,话题写作（七）,情感表达篇,【话题点睛】,话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。,典例分析,2018,衢州模拟,假如你是张凯,以下是你的加拿大笔友,Tony,发给你的一封电子邮件,请你根据该邮件内容给,Tony,回复并提出你自己的观点。,From,Tony,To,Zhang Kai,Subject,How to get on with parents,Content,Dear Zhang Kai,How is it going?I am unhappy recently.My problem is my parents.They never stop talking about how I should keep my room clean,study harder or wear proper clothes.They even make me eat an egg and drink milk every morning.None of my friends has such terrible parents.,What should I do?How should I get on with my parents?,Looking forward to your reply.,Best wishes!Yours,Tony,要求,(1),请回复邮件中所提及的问题,可适当发挥,;,(2),文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息,;,(3),词数,:90,110,。,_,【思路点拨】,1.,要点提炼,:,通过,Tony,向朋友抱怨父母对自己的不理解以及要求自己做一些自己不愿意做的事情,从而提出主题,“,怎样和父母相处,?,”,。要注意围绕主题以及真情实感的表达。本文可从以下方面展开,:,(1),提出观点,:,肯定父母的做法并非恶意,甚至应感到是幸运的,;,(2),具体论述,:,父母要求你所做的一切源于什么目的和原因,;,(3),提出建议,:,要理解父母,并注意怎样和父母相处,;,(4),本文涉及提建议,注意,should,can,try to do,等词的使用。,2.,确定时态,:,一般现在时,3.,确定人称,:,第二人称,【写作架构】,【基础写作】,.,写主干句,(,根据所给提示补全下列各句。,),1.,拥有这样的父母你很幸运。,(lucky),Its,for you,such good parents.,2.,你应该理解并且尊重你的父母。,(understand),You,and respect them.,3.,如果你有任何问题,要和你的父母交谈并且和他们分享你的想法。,(talk;share),you have any problems,just,your parents and,your ideas with them.,4.,他们让你吃鸡蛋是为了你能有一个强壮的体魄。,(make;so that),They,you eat eggs,you can have a,body.,5.,我希望你能和你的父母相处得好。,(get on well with),I,you can,your parents.,lucky,to have,should understand,If,talk with,share,make,so that,strong,hope,get on well with,.,句子升格,(,按括号中的要求完成句子。,),1.They want you to work harder.They hope you can get a good job in the future.(,用,because,改为复合句,),2.You dont want to do like this.You should have a talk with them.(,改为用,if,引导的复合句,),3.They dont allow me to go out alone at night.(,改为被动语态,),4.Your parents are not terrible.I think.(,改为宾语从句,),They want you to work harder because they hope you can get a good job in the future.,If you dont want to do like this,you should have a talk with them.,I am not allowed to go out alone at night.,I dont think your parents are terrible.,【连句成文】,From,Zhang Kai,To,Tony,Subject,How to get on with parents,Content,Hi,Tony,I think its lucky for you to have such good parents.You should understand and respect them,and try to do what they ask you to.They have richer life experience and want you to be better.As your parents,they surely hope you become an excellent person.Their advice is helpful for your future.,Dont you find your parents are caring about you in many ways?They want you to keep your room clean because they hope you can get into good habits and live comfortably.They ask you to work harder so that you can get a good job in the future.They make you eat an egg and drink milk every morning in order that you can keep healthy.A good body is good for study.As a teenager,we need a lot of energy,so its important to eat well.,From,Zhang Kai,To,Tony,Subject,How to get on with parents,Content,Whats more,every member should be responsible and do something for the family.So you should do what you can do,such as keeping your room clean and wearing proper clothes.,Anyway,if you have any problems,just talk with your parents and share your ideas with them.I hope you can get on well with your parents.,Best wishes!,Yours,Zhang Kai,拓展积累,【相关短语】,thanks for,因,感谢,;make new friends,结交新朋友,;look after/take care of,照顾,;keep in touch,保持联系,;be friendly to,对,友好,;bring back,带回,【参考谚语】,1.A smile makes you ten years younger.,笑一笑,十年少。,2.Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbors.,悲喜常相伴。,3.Laughter is the best medicine.,笑是最好的药。,4.Worry kills more men than work.,忧虑比劳累更伤人。,【亮点句型】,学校的感受,1.Id like to thank you for giving me,unselfish love and help,.,2.You always,encouraged me to,study harder.,3.Although you,were,very,strict with,me,I understood what you said in the end.,4.Im so thankful to,you for your kind help,that,Ill work harder and try to do better in the future.,家庭的感受,1.,Id like to,show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years.,2.We should have good habits and,try our best to take exercise,every day.,3.Ill,spend,more,time,staying and communicating with you.,4.When I failed an exam and felt stressed,you were,the one to encourage me,.,实战演练,A,在你的生活或学习中,你认为快乐是什么,?,也许是拥有一位慈母、一位良师、一位挚友、一本好书、一只宠物、一个梦想,珍惜眼前的快乐,快乐就在身边。请以,“,Happiness Around Me,”,为题,选取一个角度,用英语写一篇短文,以表达你的真情实感。,主要内容,(1)What is happiness in your opinion?,(2)As a student,how can you get happiness?Give an example or tell a story.,要求,(1),词数,:100,左右,;,(2),文中不得出现真实的学校名称和姓名,;,(3),语言力求准确,书写美观,卷面整洁。,Happiness Around Me,_,One,possible,version,:,Happiness Around Me,Happiness is different to different,people.But,it is important in our daily,life.It,is always around you if you put your heart into,it.Most,students think happiness is to get a good score;to get the love of their parents or,teachers;to,get well along with others and so,on.As,for,me,happiness,is helping people in need.,Last Sunday,on my way home,I saw an old woman sat at the,roadside.She,looked very,tired.I,came to her and asked if she was,OK.She,said she had a headache and she couldnt,move.I,called 120 and sent her to the,hospital.When,I was waiting,outside,her,families arrived and thanked me again and,again.I,felt so happy that I could help someone.,B,自信赋予人力量,带给人快乐。拥有自信,人生处处是舞台,生活越来越精彩。,假如你是李华,请你为校刊英语园地,“,自信助我成长,”,专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自信的重要性,分享一次使你更加自信的经历,并说说我们如何更加自信。,提示词语,powerful,happy,believe in,keep doing,提示问题,(1)Why is it important to be confident?,(2)What experience made you more confident?,(3)How can we become more confident?,要求,(1),词数,:80,100(,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数,);,(2),文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息,;,(3),文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。,Its very important to be confident._,_,One,possible,version,:,Its very important to be confident.Self-confidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do.So its valuable to us.,When I was in Grade 7,once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class.Although I,practised,it for many times at home,I still felt nervous and forgot the words at the beginning of it.Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself.You cant imagine how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates.From then on,I have become more and more confident.,To build confidence,firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them.It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do.Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.,